All I can say is it's just too short. Even for a one-shot.

The overall story wasn't bad and the ending wasn't the best nor the worst. I do believe it's worth a read because it's so short that there's barely any time wasted at all.

More specifically; I would've like more detail on a few points that were mentioned but basically glossed over where it comes to the 'recap of the involved parties lives' part. The ending wasn't really conclusive but I don't think that was the point of this story... more>> so I won't complain too much there.

The revenge was clean and believable, this story doesn't go doing anything crazy and for the first time in one of these (to my memory)

Spoiler

friends and family don't side with the cheater (which usually happens to isolate MC and push the plot forward I guess)

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If you're looking to burn like 5-10 minutes on a quick story with the listed tags this'll do it for you. <<less