I just have to say it, Ifia is ridicelously cute, and she's immensely dense in the right, not irritating, way. Also Amelia, despite what she is, has the restraint of a frickin Saint bless her.

I would say was just created to get the story seen in other search areas, Because even thou some details at the start about the MC once being a guy, just doesn't go with how she acts. Should have just started the story off as a girl whose YURI before the transmigration.

& it did get some what better on the story progression, but still has issues with bringing up & wasting time on stuff we have already told countless times, which drags out chapters.

She was defiantly a girl in her past life, there is no way around her character being a girl personality.

The system is a joke addition to the story, so much wasted time on it.

System kept being silent when FL was around because it feared being detected, but yet at the end talked to MC right beside FL, showing it's design is garbage, not to mention it lies to the MC

MC finally sees FL is a demon and accepts it without being afraid. Now the FL discloses her knowledge that she knows the world have been restarted lots of times & has figured a way to keep the knowledge. But that triggers a world law conflict that startes to kill the MC & FL does a thing to save her.

Start of volume 2 the world law wipes the MC memories of what she heard, but for some reason it wipes here memories back to when she was being burned at the stake, which I guess is the authors idea to make her forget that FL was a demon & make her start all over again, instead of wiping it right when she fell unconscious after being saved. Plus the system lies to her again & doesn't tell her the truth of what happened, but yet gives her credit for completing the quest. But then gives a quest to be kissed by the FL, yet she was kissed after the confession, which should have meant that it should have been completed also.

Then as of now there are holes in the MC design, she remembers to tell the FL the 2 who caused her to be caught & hurt her, but yet she does not point out the injured girl who helped her & ask where was she now.

SO it is still all over the place on rehashed content & design flaws.

Ya, I think there is a story in there, but I'm done going further. The author is still too repetitive with repeating details & creating a loop is the dialogue as if an AI was writing it & stating the same thing in a different form over & over.

The characters are not developing & just repeating their flaws that ruin the story at times. At times it's almost like the author is mangling their design to be able to adjust to changes in the story design. It just creates more flaws. Like the MC was kidnapped by a church leader & followers to be burned at the stake. But yet she doesn't try to force not being sent to work at the church. Then later she states that she thought the church was a safe place!!!! Really! How can she not forget nearly dying from what the church was doing behind the scenes? She still never found out about the girl that helped her. Then when FL says she can get her out of it, MC was so relived, yet before going, the MC thought about asking her to prevent going, but doesn't.
The system is suppose to be assisting her, but yet it lies to her & decides to not tell her things she should know. Why even write in the system if it is doing nothing but creating wasted time for us to see MC & it argue & waste talk on nothing that moves the story. Basically most of the time all we hear is the system talking to itself, but since it does nothing, it is just wasted time reading.

Example of repetition is kitchen scene in Amelia's mansion and in Exotic Kingdom, in both cases you have disrespectful chiefs that get amazed by MC.

Example of lack of character arc AND repetition is Amelia. Yea at first her attitude towards ifa is changing but later is stops at "Holding demons urge hard"

and throughout the whole book, FL never mistreats MC in anyway except Seggs

All the moments where they cross boundaries is always the part I can't wait for the most, I anticipate everything that they are in each others presence to either be cute together or generally enjoying each other's company

halfway the FL destroys everything and we don't know what happens to the MC's friends and the supposed "FL/ML" other than causal mentions after. I feel like there could have been more written about the interactions and relationships between other characters and the epilogue of the new character the new MC/FL become. And honestly I was obsessed with almost every character written,

Amelia being a villainess AND also the demon sovereign was actually really interesting! With the world resetting so many times. I am so curious to know how this happened and why demons are ruling a world and why the systems have to bring in hosts to save it... The only thing is the story is so long I wonder if I have the patience to wait before I get more spoilers or hints.

At the point in the story the MC knows that demons are real and has encountered them, has encountered a dead mermaid, and aquatic mosnters. They go to save a ship that stated they were getting attacked by aquadic monsters. The MC gets on the ship that was attacked and sees claw marks like a bear. Her thought process is to try and figure out why they broughta bear on the ship... rather than the aquatic monsters that the crew has stated they got attacked by.

Irene, despite being slowly built up in the first half, she fades into an unhappy accessory to the prince, and then even the prince fades to the cliff notes without getting their closing thoughts to their downfall arc, leaving it to the reader's imagination. I don't even know what happens to Irene in the epilogue.

Another underused character that may make interesting POV cuts are after Lucy gets that Gov job, another set of the eyes as the kingdom deteriorates. Amelia's human female knight was introduced too late to be relevant. Still, if the story gets adapted, introduce her earlier Amelia's public right hand, used as a liaison who directed the guards, was on the boat trip, and add scenes with the butler as visual shorthand of Amelia's military power.

Though it was also never mentioned again after its narrative function was over, I was personally hoping someone would give at least cliff notes on the fate of the Taric Kingdom despite the glimpses of unresolved national intrigue and not mentioned in the epilogue brings up other unanswered questions for the reader's imagination.