I've just finished catching up to chap. 33 - I really enjoy this story and the translation. Mr. Touma is a non-clueless MC that has a bunch of class and isn't a pushover. Miss Aya is just too lovely as the fMC, I'd love to meet and be friends with them both! Haha, life has its own way of working out but I really enjoyed the characters that much. This is a simple, light, and sweet story (so far!) - so if that is what you enjoy, I recommend this... more>> very much. The translation is super good - a small habit of mixing up the pronouns, but extremely minor and I read the entire thing with a big smile on my face throughout. Really happy you picked this AmaLynne! I will def read your other work and thanks! <<less

MC not dense? Check. Cute FL? Check. Too much sugar? Check.

Its basically about our MC's daily life and interactions with the FL. The story also delivers on the sugar. MC is a top tier person by which I mean he is smart, considerate, not dense, borderline obsessive lover (a stage or two below male yandere mode), and doesn't give much f*cks apart from what he thinks is worth giving a f*ck for. FL is a standard heroine with all the positive traits and is a clutz. Might feel cliche but... more>> is kind of fun.

I read till C42 and had to take a break since it seems like a sugar fest from here onward. <<less

Uninspired start, author needs to learn to write better opening sentences; my name is ___ only works when the name's unique or your next sentence is a real banger which it wasn't. It'd have been better to skip the whole first chapter and go straight to the second; the beeping of an alarm clock is better than an awkward introduction, show don't tell.

FL's got a few screws loose, she's been stalked before but see's nothing wrong with stalking in turn, and what message does it send that her efforts work?

The... more>> premise was decent but ML gives in way too easy, it's a pity. <<less

Sigh, aight, the male MC is alright well thought even, but the female MC gives the full on unaware idiotic nuisance type. I dropped around chapter 7, where her POV of the scenario was explained and it just gave that Sakura smell for me all a sudden. So yeah it showed promise until female MC was introduced, you can try to read it if it’s for you.

First and foremost if you're excepting something insane, it won't be romance novels like this. This is just your a bit cliche, high school, slice of life, romance novel. I really like the our MC, he isn't clueless and he isn't like "oh I save this girl from bad guys and now she keeps trying to talk with me. But it's only because I saved her right? She definitely doesn't love me". MC knows that she love him, but he just likes his free time more and something to do... more>> with his past. And FL is just standard, pretty as f*ck school idol, that's actually putting up a facade because she was bullied back then. All in all it's meh, but it only has 37 chapters out rn and there's still 140 left and they're dating already, so I don't know how they can make it not repetitive and boring after. Don't want it to turn out like otonari tenshi-sama, since that sh*t got like really redundant after chapter 120 somethin. Like what the other review said, the grammar is kind of tr*sh sometimes but isn't anything major. Overall it's a pretty good read rn and insulin is probably needed.

3.5 <<less