MC is originally from the 21st century where she was mu*dered by OgFL and her past life seized this opportunity to pull her into the current multiverse to rewrite the fates of the cannon fodders and to give the ogFLs and ogMLs their deserved retribution. There are so many problems with the plot. For one, the multiverse seems to be written by 1 author who has a penchant for evil people being rewarded and good people being punished, and we later find out the author is ogFL. So potentially, we are looking at the ogFL not only creating the multiverse, but also the 21st century world that she came from because of the past life thing and also because it is revealed the 21st century world is also in a novel. But this theory doesn’t make sense because ogFL with the memories of the 21st century should be aware that the world they’re in is a multiverse, but she seems to think that she’s the only female lead. So the alternative theory is that this is a multiverse of different novels by different authors, which makes even less sense because why is the novel 21st century novel in a different universe? We know this because it’s repeatedly mentioned that FL transmigrated into the multiverse. And we also know that the current year is around 1980s, and assuming they transmigrated from 2010s/2020s, the grandparent generation would have some overlap but there’s no mention of this.

Another thing is “Heaven” is a compassionate existence that repeatedly assists FL and the other cannon fodders by subtly revealing secrets like FL is a prophet of sorts. It’s the first time I’ve seen a novel where Heaven is not described as emotionless and it’s obvious why this is never done. If Heaven was compassionate, there would be no evil. Technically, all the ogFLs would be considered “daughters of Heaven” because of their exceptional fortune. But after all is said and done Heaven is upset that the ogFLs have such poor morals and wants to “restore equilibrium” to the small world. This doesn’t make sense.

And I don’t understand how FL’s death in her original world was the key to unlocking ML’s freedom and allowing him to mu*der ogFL. It might have something to do with Heaven but this would make for a terrible plot for how arbitrarily Heaven interferes with the different worlds.

The MC keeps complaining about how unfair the Og novel plot is and how it controles everything to make the "villainous" protagonistes succeed in life. For example : when the Mc's "little brother"'s friend betrayed him and became a successful business man while her brother die.

But when you read the novel you realises that the current plot is also "unfair", not in the same way for sure but still. For example : everyone close to her end with a great fate (they are basically blessed) but it has to be people who suffered in the og novel. We can then say that the successful ones are still picked by the plot (unfair).

Also, the plot prevent the MC from changing the fate of the "tragic" characters "verbally" yet they can all listened to the her inner voice but can't tell her they can, so she indirectly changes their fate. The plot is still controlling everything.

Moreover, I found the Og plot far more realistic. In the RL, the one who succeed are not always the one who deserved it, like the horrible, egoistic and despitful woman who got a second life or the example of the brother's friend, but more the lucky one or those who do dirty tricks.