Beastman Forcefully Raising a Wife

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The rich second generation Shu Jintian suddenly transmigrated during his escape after being kidnapped.

He was snatched back to the snake nest of a ruthless python. However, not only did it not eat him, it even fed him. Was he being raised as a pet?

But, you- you- why are you wrapping around me? I’m not a female snake ah, hello!!!

Associated Names
One entry per line
Raising a Snake and Laying Eggs
养蛇生蛋
兽人之强养雌性
Related Series
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Recommendations
A Guide to Raising Your Natural Enemy (7)
Silly Spring Attack (4)
Transmigrated into a Beast Tribe (3)
Banished to Another World (1)
Crossing to the Primitive (1)
Escaped Wife of a Tyrant CEO (1)
Recommendation Lists
  1. Mpreg
  2. BL Secondary Genders Transmigrations/Reincarnation
  3. Reading atm (BL)
  4. Chinese Novels V2
  5. Novelas leidas

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12/13/23 Huahua Library c95
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Crepescule
Crepescule
May 16, 2020
Status: Completed
The summary excited me so much that I read the raws.

This is my first review, so bear with me, and sorry if I spoil too much. I had to consider for a long time before I posted this.

I won't be rating this novel for three reasons:

  1. At this time, there are too few translated chapters.
  2. As someone who primarily reads QT, I don't think I'm a part of the target audience.
  3. I don't know if what I don't like is normal in these kinds of novels.
Also, the novel is actually completed at 87... more>> chapters. The remaining chapters are a side story about another character.

Here are the genres I will suggest for this novel: Slice of Life, Fantasy, Romance, Yaoi

Here are the tags I will suggest for this novel: animal characteristics, farming, mpreg, transmigration, beasts, cohabitation, fantasy world, human-nonhuman relationship, love at first sight, love interest falls in love first, possessive characters, r*pe, strength-based social hierarchy, death of loved ones, childcare, caring protagonist, pregnancy, weak protagonist, depictions of cruelty, heartwarming...?, devoted love interests, transformation ability, dense protagonist, language barrier, stockholm syndrome

About the current main tags:

Spoiler

Mpreg: It's there, and it happens twice.

Possessiveness: Yes. But I want to mention that for the first half of the novel, the only characters that exist are the MC and ML.

Transmigration: Honestly, this plays absolutely no role in the story. The MC was originally a rich young master, but he adapts to the new environment the moment he arrives. His survival skills are impressive considering his identity. In the first few chapters, he eats unfamiliar fruit like it's normal, and he starts a fire to grill meat. A dozen chapters later, he has fully embraced nudity. If you're expecting him to use his previous knowledge in any significant way, you'll be disappointed.

Farming: I'm a little confused as to why this is a major tag. The first instance of farming happens in chapter 62. After one or two chapters, a major event occurs, and farming is forgotten almost entirely. The sole crop grown is rice.

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About the trigger warnings:

Spoiler

Non-consensual breeding: Basically, the MC is r*ped by the ML, and twice at that. But after the first time, the MC just... returns to daily life as if it never happened.

Pet rearing element where the alpha males would treat their mates like a pet: No, not really.

Alphas fighting over their mate: If you expect this to be a major theme, it's not.

Restricted freedom/captivity/confinement: It's definitely there, but the MC accepts it rather quickly.

Abnormal s*x organ: This is literally the best part of the novel.

On-screen birthing scene: Yup, two times.

Collaring/Leashing – a touch of bondage here and there: There is absolutely no bondage. Collar/Leashing is present, but no BD*M if you're here for the smut.

Hurt and comfort: Is this supposed to be a trigger warning? Doesn't every novel have this?

Interspecies sex: Sometimes, the ML has s*x in his snake form.

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Plot (MAJOR SPOILERS) :

Spoiler

The MC is r*ped in chapter 30, and discovers he's pregnant in chapter 44. Birth in chapter 48, eggs hatch in chapter 51. For the first 30 chapters, it's extremely boring. The MC tries to escape two times, but he's caught within half a chapter. Eventually, he just accepts his fate. Yan Ze, the worst character in this novel, kidnaps the MC. He then proceeds to help the MC go to the bathroom. This should be a trigger warning lol. But other than that, eating is basically 99% of chapters 1-30.

After first birth:

Spoiler

I was anticipating the happy life of MC, ML, and their dozen children. After all, I was under the impression that this was a fluffy slice of life novel (minus Yan Ze and the r*pe). It was also a bit funny that the ML was jealous of his own children. I scrolled through 51 chapters of slice of life just to see the MC care for his babies. And that was true for 7 chapters. But in chapter 58, the ML...

threw his children into the river...

and then r*ped the MC to stop him from finding them... QAQ

Who said this was a fluffy novel???

Luckily, they managed to locate three of them 6 chapters later. Who knows what happened to the rest. At this point, I was relieved. Now that the angst is over, let's see the MC look after the remaining little snakes...

literally 3 chapters after the reunion: two of the three snakes are brutally killed and eaten. Their deaths are horrifyingly detailed. W-WHY???

I won't spoil the rest too much. But I'll talk about the second birth. The MC's body seems to understand his poor parenting skills, so there's only one baby this time.

Me: That's fine, he can have more children in the future.

Author: Nope. The MC can't get pregnant anymore. Be satisfied with the two children you've got.

Me:...

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In conclusion, the first half of this novel is mostly fluff and slice of life. But for the second half... not at all. Anyways, I'm just salty that I read 87 chapters and didn't get what I was looking for. <<less
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hy-d-ra
hy-d-ra rated it
June 26, 2020
Status: --
I feel the need to drop the 1-star bomb on these positive reviews. Few summary extracts to show the "essence" of this novel:

EPISODE 1:

MC: *hungry as hell*

... more>> ML: My female doesn't look so good, what should it be...

MC: Yo, I'm hungry dude.

ML: Oh! I get it! *runs out* *COmes back with freshly killed animal* EAT!

MC: Dude, this is raw, we need some fire so I can cook it.

ML: I SAID EAT!! *forces MC to drink fresh blood*

EPISODE 2:

ML: *happily dives under water* *brings his female down with him*

MC: bit*h I need air! Let me go! *no strength, ML doesn't pay a f*cking attention* *suffocates* *about to drown*

ML: Oh, my females stroked me right now *turns around* Oops, something is going on, that ugly face and dull eyes. Maybe air? *proceeds to share some air*

MC: *on the verge of collapse, receives some air* Imma die right now

ML: Oh, my female is so active today, let's kiss-kiss *shoves his snake tongue in*

MC: *should have choked and died, but didn't for some reason* *underwater making out*

This is just a glimpse at this f*ckery, summarized by me, your welcome. Surely, the title should have said it all, but I never expected it will bear such a literal meaning. I have no idea where these positive reviews come from. Sorry for a little pun saying that this sh*t is inhumane. But I don't see how this horrid beginning with violence, forcing, ab*se etc. All the sh*t that makes me cringe, should transform into some sort of love later on? How about - f*ck no? It's not a story of beauty and the beast, it's not even Twilight. Reading this is plainly agreeing to read another Stockholm syndrom victim. The MC is simply miserable. End of story. <<less
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jude122197
jude122197
May 28, 2020
Status: --
Due to me being a fujoshi, I've long lost my bottomline so whatever genre or kinks there is in a story even bestiality NSFW it doesn't faze me. SUPER excited to read this story?
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Logophile
Logophile rated it
July 11, 2020
Status: c110
Okay so apparently this has low ratings and I can't stop myself from commenting because people might get discouraged once they saw that. So here's the warning I'm going to enumerate before you start judging the novel.

First have I finished the novel?

Yes, I did, the mtled version, it was definitely difficult to understand because I couldn't wait for CG's trans. (Their trans was so amazing I tell ya)

... more>> Okay let's start

  1. The tags are not wrong, you better look twice, they're not there for decoration and yes the story is somewhat hard to digest in the several parts yet you'll know when you read.
  2. The plot isn't thrash at all. One thing when you read a novel is that you accept the the world they are, I mean the characters are situated in that setting so if you can't bear that ofc that'll be a different story.
  3. It was bloody details. At some point I couldn't continue reading cause the emotion was too hard.
  4. It's mpreg and nope not the typical one.
  5. The seme is totally crazy.
  6. This does not follow the normal rule.
  7. Lastly it was enjoyable. The development you can judge it as twisted, definitely, but you'll see it has building up elements too, just late because of miscommunication.
That's all folks. You don't have to give such low ratings ah. It's bad if translators gets discouraged.

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CultivatorBunnyLan
CultivatorBunnyLan rated it
May 18, 2020
Status: Completed
The spoilerish notes at the beggining of the translated version made me so interested and excited about this novel that I MTL'ed it all the way.

Our MC might've transmigrated but that didn't make him OP. He's just a normal human person who was immediately taken away by the ML.

The first half of the book was realistically developed. Their relationship really started off as: Beast x Human. The ML just wants to keep his chosen mate near him and is controlling about it.

He had tremendous strength and often hurts the... more>> MC because of this. (and due to the fact that "escape" was always on the mind of the MC)

Yes, they will learn how to interact and comunicate with each other. There were certain fluffy moments in the novel.

The xxx scenes are hot and quite detailed. The way the ML's xxx organs were described was fascinating. I also was intrigued about the concept of the "pregnancy fruit"

There is dub-con, collaring/tying, confinenent, punishment (in terms of slightly starving the MC so that he'll learn his "lesson"), and non-consensual breeding.

It's Mpreg.

The Spiritual Snakes can imp**gnate their mates and have a huge "egg count" so prepare yourselves.

Spoiler

MC gets pregnant for 2 times. 1st pregnancy = 11 baby snakes, 2nd pregnancy = 1 female baby (human form)

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Yes, it's interesting but please also prepare your hearts because after the MC gives birth, it was all cute and nice with the ML eating his vinegar but

Spoiler

Because of their inherited memories, the ML throws his children away in a rushing river so that he can "solo" his wife.

The MC was angry about this since they were his children too. They fought and the MC wanted to find them, the ML the proceeds to have s*x with the MC to stop him since: "He is mine." The ML won't let the MC's attention stray away from him.

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And some deaths are too traumatic. I wasn't ready and was just shocked. I stayed frozen and my heart began to hurt.

Why? Because...

(WARNING: A HEAVY SPOILER)

Spoiler

There was this lion/tiger beastman who wanted to xxx the MC and get rid of his children. The ML was away from that time so the beastman (Yan Zhe, I believe) struck.

The MC and ML found their 3 snake children and they visited the MC. They tried to stop Yan Zhe but two!

Two of this pure baby children were beaten brutally and eaten in a horrifically detailed manner by Yan Zhe to make the MC feel pain and once all of his children are eaten the MC will once again go into heat.

My gosh! My heart! Those are babies.

Even though it was revealed that not all snakes can transform into their humanoid forms. It's like 1 in 10.

Still, reading about how the baby snake's eyes were filled with pain and hope for their mama's rescue while the MC was powerless to do anything but watch as the light in his children's eyes disappear was simply gcufseaugxigxihfitdtamfksnsksnsmsnsnzbsbsn (I am in pain right now people.)

Till in the future once his children, the last surviving snake of the 3 had a family, everytime the MC sees the baby snakes he just wants to hug it. (Look at the trauma incurred by the MC, people.)

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It was a nice read.

I really liked the extras.

Spoiler

I liked the Snake x Mermaid pairing and Female snake x 3 wolves pairing. (I believe that their female child became partners with the 3 wolves.)

Btw, the 3 wolves are the children of another transmigrated person. Don't worry. He's good.

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They were fluffy and cute, especially since this was the result of the MC's actions when he raised his children. <<less
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Birguslatro
Birguslatro rated it
June 28, 2020
Status: Completed
I cannot for the life of me, understand why this has as many positive reviews as it does.

Okay, so I can maybe excuse the majority of the violence and non-con at the beginning out of consideration for the ML being born in a primitive world with no human rights, but by the end of the story, he has gone through no character development. He shows no remorse for having done what he has to the MC and their children.

Also, this is the crux of the issue here; I argue that... more>> the ML is not the one at fault for being an abusive dick. He is merely the latest abusive d*ck in a long line of abusive dicks. He simply doesn't know any better. It is our MC that truly fails to perform as a transmigrator from an advanced society.

Our MC is simply a doormat with no redeeming features. He simply lets the ML run roughshod over him and lol, but it's fine because he loves him so much and that's just the sweetest thing, isn't it?

Spoiler

There's no attempt to reason with the ML that hitting or raping someone at the slightest provocation isn't acceptable behavior. The MC simply rolls ever and let's it happen, even when his own kids get abandoned in a river, he pretty much gives in after a token resistance. He's afraid to bring up looking for his kids because it could make the ML angry.

He doesn't try to explain that he grew up in a culture where throwing infant children away is incredibly wrong, he just rages at the ML until he snaps and r*pes him. There is no logical discussion, no negotiation. No explanation to his incredibly yandere husband that just because he loves his kids, doesn't he loves his spouse any less.

So s*upid.

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On the other hand, there's also an extra starring the MC and ML's son at the end that actually features a healthy relationship. It was fluffy and sweet and managed to wash away the bad taste of the preceding 90+ chapters. <<less
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Yullen4eva
Yullen4eva rated it
November 4, 2020
Status: Completed
....

I'm gonna summarize what happens to the offspring, since they are what I came here to read:

And well, just read this if you dont wanna wait for all the drama.

... more>>
Spoiler

Well. Let me tell you about the 11 snake children.

MC rejected them at first as he was afraid of snakes.

He accidentally threw them into a pile of snow and panic when he couldnt find them.

He found them but were still a bit afraid of snakes. He got close to them.

The seme threw them in a rushing river.

MC slapped him for throwing away his children. And was upset. He wanted to find them but the ML made him bedridden for days to stop him.

ML helped find them when MC clarified that he just wants to know where they lived and wont live with them forever.

3 came back out of 11.

They were constantly afraid of their father and it was written a few times that he'd eat or kill them if it weren't for the MC.

2 were then eaten by an ape monster.

One was left and was turned into a human.

The only reason he was allowed to live with them was because he proved his worth in the ML's eyes that he could take care of his mom when the ML goes hunting.

Then MC gave birth to a female son.

This removes his ability to have any more offspring.

This depressed the MC for a while as he wanted more snake kids to make up for the loss he felt when 2 of them died to protect him, and the rest were thrown away by their father.

After that, they shifted to a tribe.

2 more snake children came back, one was blinded by a bird and the other was caring for its blinded brother.

MC cried.

Their human brother weren't close to them. Nor was their younger female brother. Their dad... didnt want them. MC slowly felt detached to them. The tribe found out and refused them. The snakes did left by themselves after a while, but lived in the forest nearby. MC visits then once a month.

Some of them came back over the years and lived outside the tribe. The others never turned human, nor were they given any indication that they have a name other than "small snake".

...

The snake that turned to a human was given a name called guo guo (fruit)

He got together with a male mermaid, they had 15 kids. 5 mermaids and 10 snakes.

This couple raised their kids properly and lovingly and didnt bloody threw them away.

Guo guo was so much kinder and lovelier to his kids than his dad ever was with him. (Who wanted to kick his son and his new family out the moment they came back with grandkids.) The ML is kinda like a grunpy grandad that didnt mellow with age.

He was hardly mentioned in the extras.

Most of the snakes turned into half snake half human, not pure humans.

The couple was sad but decided it was better than them being a snake forever.

The reason that they could turn into half human snakes was due to their mermaid blood. So they were thankful for that.

...

MC's female son (leaf) got together with 3 wolves.

They were the kids of the other transmigrator.

They got together when they were drunk. The 3 wolves stole their mom's wine.

When they were married MC was visibly upset. Understabdably, since it was weird that his son got 3 husbands.

Personally did not like their relationship.

The degree of how much Leaf likes them was made ambiguos.

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All the s*x was non-con by every single couple.

The semes just don't understand that their bottoms are in pain.

...

The seme's an a**hole.

He hates living with his kids but relented to live in a tribe because of his female son.

He made sure that MC couldn't be fluent in the beast language and the only reason he could speak some was because the transmigrator taught him the language when they did things together. ML refuses to teach him any.

He cares for his female son much much much more than his snake kids.

Like he actually takes care of him and not kick him shortly after his birth like he did with the snakes.

He's a yandere. Possessive, cruel, manipulative etc.

MC... never really tries to make the ML understand his point of view, and just relents to the ML's yandere ways. Unless it was about his kids. like.. not to kick his kids and grandkids out.

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1/5 due to personal preference. I was pissed at most of the content. Not my cup of tea.

Don't expect a typical fluffy happy family with caring parents (MC and ML). The ML comes from a solitary animal background. Which means any adult offspting is competition. And competition is not dealt with fairly in the animal world. <<less
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chrysanthemumtea
chrysanthemumtea rated it
November 12, 2020
Status: c78
Realistic character development, fascinating world building, and unrepentantly immoral scenes. I greatly enjoyed this and think the author did a tremendous job unfurling the story.

A bit depraved in the way that retro BL tends to be, but the tags are there so we all know what's coming. I truly don't understand negative reviews that complain about themes that are exactly what's on the tin. We fujoshis/fudanshis are so good at policing our own, yet you never see the straights howling about a 13-year old girl falling in love with her... more>> rapist in Game of Thrones.

The translator is great as well. <<less
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Aachiin0914
Aachiin0914 rated it
May 25, 2020
Status: Completed
Hahaha~

I thought this one going to be kinda of brutal, with many gore and r*pe scenes. But it's not. Waahh~

It's kinda fluffy with a bit of seriousness.

... more>> MC and ML have a love hate relationship at first. MC tried to escape. many times, and I thought ML would try torture to make MC obedient. But ML so gently and kind.

MC's reaction to ml's advances is really good. Despite the fear and desire to escape, unlike those brainless and s*upid MC in other novels, MC was calm and collected. I like how MC developed trauma went eating raw meat and drink blood. It's very realistic. Some novels have a protagonist with extreme flexible mind that can adopt to anything. Which kinda destroy the challenge of the novel. But this novel's main characters slowly adopt and has a chance to developer their character and personality in every chapter.

I like how the author give every character a happy ending. Especially MC's children, I thought they will never be found and will faided into the background. I also like how ML changes his attitude and restrain his instinct for MC.

I'm kinda curious about the other transmigrator, I wish the author also include his story in the extra chps. Specially MC and the other transmigu were connected from the very beginning because of the blanket the other transmigrator left.

Over all, this novel is cute. It maybe boring for some, because it contains a little bit of slice of life and livelyhood development.

The smutt is very mild but warning for beastiality, r*pe, a little bit of gore, Mpreg and there's also 4p at the end of the novel. Hehehee... <<less
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Sahloknir
Sahloknir rated it
July 22, 2020
Status: c30
Firstly... I want to say that I have zero issues with NSFW stories - I've read and have written many.

I'd also like to wholeheartedly praise the translator/editor (s), who have done an excellent job with this work. This is not a reflection on their professionalism.

But I tapped out at chapter 30 because I simply could not deal with the continuous non-con everything... (Read hy-d-ra's review in this thread to see just some of it). There is not even a lost-in-translation reason for the ML to ignore the MC's... more>> repeated pleas and very little fluff to soften the blow.

The world-building and premise were both interesting and what kept me reading up until that point.

I can usually ignore 'telling' rather than 'showing' in a story, but in this case being told the ML 'loves' the MC isn't good enough for me to get past his behaviour.

Spoiler

The s*x scene in chapter 30 was not remotely ameliorated by any sense of love, affection or sensuality. The MC passes out from exhaustion and there is zero indication he found any pleasure in what was essentially non-consensual s*x. The fact the ML continues to 'have at' (i.e. penetrate) him after he falls asleep is a bit revolting. I hesitate to say it was r*pe, but this s*x scene was utterly without any emotional investment for receiver MC or the reader. I love BL for those piercingly sweet and tender moments between the boys... with or without the s*x. This story has too few of these interludes to make up for what appeared to be a gratuitous s*x scene... without the sexiness. Also fluff? What fluff?

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I gave 1 star because the interesting world-building and solid lead-in were not enough to make up for the dull and yet at the same time aggressively off-putting ML. <<less
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Birdy
Birdy rated it
June 22, 2022
Status: c88
Wow. I avoided this novel like a plague due to the reviews for years. Now, I'm glad to say that I didn't regret reading it.

If you want to read this, see the tags first and don't complain about them. I am impressed that the author did not write the ML in a human characteristic but rather primitive and animal perspective. I like how MC did not fall in love quickly and how true his reactions are.

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Spoiler

I cried on the chapter where his babies died (as a snakelets) but the author gave sweetness by making the sole (known) surviving baby snake turn into a cute human toddler to give us Meng. There's another sweetness as MC gave birth to their last baby which turned into a normal baby rather than egh which surprised me.

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I gave 5/5 for making the author and the translators for to change my bad first impression with this novel.

It's one hell of a ride but it made me satisfied. *Burp* thanks for the food. <<less
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Bell29215
Bell29215 rated it
August 27, 2020
Status: Completed
Described with one word: horrible.

Throughout history it is carried as a unilaterally advantageous power relationship for ML, r*pe is romanticized and at no point is there a change of mind or a breaking point. At first we can justify this as a product of the context of the new world, but at no time does an evolution take place, nor is the slightest mutual respect observed; basically MC is still a s*x s*ave who after much effort the only thing that wins is the right to walk close to home... more>> and cook outside.

The only salvageable are the extras with GuoGuo and the hot scenes. <<less
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Zemmiaphobia
Zemmiaphobia rated it
February 23, 2021
Status: c20
I got so bored, I couldn't finish. I just couldn't stand how the MC keeps switching from afraid and angry, perfectly normal response to being held prisoner, to cutesy, flirty, airhead in the same sentence. It's just not realistic and it's annoying to read. Translation is pretty good though.
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Arindag
Arindag
July 31, 2020
Status: Completed
When I first read this novella, I found it very interesting, so after Reading the translated chapters I MTL’ed all the rest till the end.

I liked the world building and I have to say that at the beginning all the violence, the dub-con and non-con didn’t face me, after all I have being reading manga, manhua, and bl novels for several years and you kind of go with it, after all is another world and the morality is different and you just let it go, it is just a history... more>> and sometimes is kind of hot (I am very, very rotten...)

But, because I liked the world building and the author style I read all of her (I assume is a her) novels and... she has a thing with dub-con and non-con.

Spoiler

The ML of this particular novel is the scummiest one... hard to believe, the most violent and the coldest.

So, when you compare it in retrospective, when you read it again it gets kind of unbearable.

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The list of beast world novels in chronological order are as follows:

1. Lai an orc as a meal ticket 赖个兽人当饭票

2. Forced Female Orc: this one

3. Spring of Cannon Fodder 炮灰攻的春天

- temporal jump-

4. My husband is a plant 我的老公是植物

5. A snake's way to find his wife 一条蛇的寻妻路

6. Daily Survival in the Last Days 末世之求生日常 (末世毒蛇)

They are pretty easy to read in MTL’ed they share a common world, and they are a good read.

But my favorite one is the third one, and Yanze is the ML.

Spoiler

So, when I read this novel again I couldn’t but to dislike the MC and ML who are such s*umbags to each other and so... hard on poor yanze. That yes didn’t behave well in this particular history, and yes it was kind of evil, but it was mostly misunderstandings, different world views after all.

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So, I recommend to read all the other novels on MTL ? <<less
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elvira12
elvira12 rated it
May 16, 2020
Status: Completed
Ok, I thought I wouldn't like it because at first I kinda don't feel the MC and ML. However, after a while, I started to appreciate them.

I finally knew why I didn't like them at first. It's because they're very realistic. Their reactions and interactions are all based on each others' reality.

The s*x is also very explicit and exciting (two tin tins yo!). And came in very early in the story.

... more>> Just for background, Shu Jintian is the MC, then he named the ML as Shu Hanyu.

I haven't completed this yet. Will update this once I finished.

Edit:

Ok finally completed this including the extra story of MC's son Gougou x Red date (merman) as well as the youngest Shu Ye x 3 kids of Lin Yi (protagonist in one of novels of the author). This is interesting but not so easy to mtl. So once this is translated, I'm gonna read this again. A lot of fluffy stuff tends to be misinterpreted by the mtl. So I'm looking forward to the translation. Give this a chance, it's nice in itself. <<less
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starcake
starcake rated it
January 19, 2025
Status: Completed
Low 4 stars: This is NOT a romance, does not have a "comedic undertone" as the NU tags suggest, and is not necessarily a pleasant read (which doesn't necessarily mean it's a bad one). It is a tale of brutal survival and a portrayal of Stockholm syndrome and violence/ab*se—and I think possibly the author meant it that way because even until the very end, there are still occasional lines about how the MC has to back up and change what he's doing/saying as he's still afraid of making the ML... more>> angry, and things aren't actually portrayed as typically "romantic" or idealized in this story (sort of—this is still a genre-pigeonholed BL webnovel, after all, let's not set the bar too high). This is unlike other BL where Stockholm syndrome is portrayed as passionately romantic. This novel is a more semi-realistic portrayal of primitive BL isekai, where the MC shou is trying to survive in a brutally different world and is entirely dependent upon an unpredictable dangerous beast-with-human-form for survival—and no, things do not become fluffy or passionate as they fall in love, because they don't actually fall in love. This is NOT a story where the shou adapts quickly, things are convenient for him, and the gong is a doting partner bent on pampering him.

There's no glossy stereotypical romance coating on this story where the shou is like, "Omg, I miss him, so I must love him! He's actually such a good guy despite being cold, he's actually really sweet and so protective of me!" HAHA, no. Nor is there any part where the gong is like, "His body, heart, and soul all belong to me, we are bound together for all eternity and are destined to be together." Ignore the yandere tag, there are no yanderes present in this story. The gong's emotional investment in the shou is based on animalistic possessiveness, and while possessiveness is a mainstay of BL tops, in this case the emphasis is on animalistic. At best, the CP has an uneven partnership where the ML is clearly the dominant powerful partner who controls the relationship and the MC is the reluctantly submissive weak partner who has to adapt himself to the ML—and while they do generally get along by the end of the story, there's no question that the power dynamic remains in the ML's favor and the MC knows this.

Not that there's any hugely deep psychology going on in the story, but it's kind of an interesting and very different take as the MC almost literally at several points is like, "I'm afraid of the big snake and he's so violent to me, but now having had more (bad) experiences in this world, I realize that I'm better off with him because at least he sort of takes care of me, and I guess I'm used to him now and know better how to avoid making him angry. I'm safer with him since I'm more familiar with him and know that as long as I'm cooperative, I can avoid making him angry, and I can possibly put things off or make him be less violent if I act certain ways."

So while he does form a bond of sorts with the snake, it's because he's entirely dependent on the gong for survival. And while there are elements of affection/love/positive feelings on the MC's part sometimes later on, they're not really "romantic" and he seems self-aware at times that theirs is not and never will be an equal relationship, and ultimately he is at the mercy of a cold, possessive snake. It's open to interpretation what exactly the snake feels toward the MC; in my opinion, there are some eventual positive feelings but they're generally indistinguishable from sheer possessiveness.

There is also graphic violence and graphic descriptions of bodily functions, and some deaths that are very gruesome:

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So the mpreg—after excruciating stomach pains, the shou graphically gives birth to a bunch of eggs by sh*tting them out (there are also other scattered instances throughout the story describing direct bodily functions, blood, and fluids), which eventually hatch into baby snakes. The gong's snake mentality is that although he instinctually desired to have offspring, he doesn't care about them once they're born, and later on aggressively drives them away. The shou, on the other hand, after grappling with the mpreg and horrific childbirth and giving birth to snakes, eventually comes to love his snake babies. The snake babies are basically smart animals, not quite human-child-level intelligent and they love their mom and want to be with him but are afraid of their dad, so even after they're driven off they hang around and occasionally visit the shou.

Not gonna get into the details, but most of the little snake babies are brutally, graphically slaughtered by a villain (and I think one of them is literally eaten alive) right in front of the shou, while valiantly trying to defend him against said villain.

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The gong is a giant snake with a cold, aggressive personality, led solely by his rigid instincts. He sees the shou as a mate within strict parameters and has expectations for his obedient behavior, and alternately threatens, beats, and r*pes him into submission, which the gong views as teaching and training—and not in a sadistic or malicious way, literally he's just like, "My mate isn't obedient and so I must teach him obedience. We are mates and therefore it's normal that we should mate whenever I want, and it's normal that he should submit to me." When the shou is "disobedient", the gong is annoyed or angry, and while he punishes him, he does it either angrily, annoyedly, or matter-of-factly without sadistic pleasure or any real thought. This does eventually stop happening but again, it's largely because the MC learns how to avoid displeasing the snake.

Theirs isn't a master-s*ave type of relationship though, the gong doesn't expect the MC to be servile or take care of him or do domestic chores. Instead, he sees the MC as a weak "female" that must be zealously protected from others, physically cared for because he's so weak, and gotten pregnant as quickly as possible so nobody else can put offspring in him.

When others threaten his mate, the gong is violently protective because it's his mate. When he perceives the shou isn't feeling well or is sick, he will take care of him within his own limited understanding. He does occasionally try to please the shou because he wants his mate to be more cooperative and he does care about some of his wellbeing sort of kind of, but it's not loving or fluffy, and he can easily turn violent within the next second if he thinks the shou is trying to escape or reject him.

Throughout the story, the snake gong does NOT "learn to love" or "fall in love" with the shou, or really change. At best, he becomes less violent and less rigid, but at the same time, this is probably only because the shou does become more "obedient" and reluctantly accepts the snake as his mate, and because the snake eventually learns to speak the shou's language and can communicate directly with him. It comes across as him becoming more indifferent or displeased, rather than actively angry or violent. So... technically "better" but not exactly loving. He eventually does smile sometimes and do things he knows the MC will like but it's not exactly the sweetest relationship considering everything else that goes on.

For the shou, he's a spoiled rich boy who gets isekai-ed and has no wilderness experience or survival skills. From the beginning to the end, he is entirely dependent upon the snake gong—which, after a lot of initial denial and escape attempts, he reluctantly realizes his own dependence. This new world is a savage one filled with dangers that he is in no way equipped to face. He's totally outclassed in every way in terms of the wildlife as well as natives and could not possibly hope to survive on his own.

He's kind of s*upid in the typical spoiled rich boy way, and arrogant too at first, but even though I didn't really like him I ended up feeling bad for him because of how badly things go for him in this story.

The extras involve one of their offspring developing a relationship with a side character. It's a bit weird because of the massive age difference and they're both non-human, but it is kind of interesting how different yet also similar the CP's offspring is compared to the snake father.

Spoiler

One of the surviving baby snakes is later able to transform into a human, and after he hits snake-puberty he ends up going after the red merman side character from the story who had been trying to court the MC—so yeah, the baby grew up and went after the dude who was after his mom. The young snake is much less cold, aggressive, and violent than his father, and though he still has the same possessive-mate instincts it's to a much lesser degree, and he does seem to actively care about and want to be kind to his merman partner.

It's quite a different tone from the rest of the novel, as it eventually felt like there was genuine affection/love between them, and there was less of a huge power imbalance. Not that it's anything to write home about and the mpreg is a bit weird, but considering the rest of the story, well...

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The reason I gave this novel a low 4 stars isn't because it was fun, or hot, or sweet, or had a really interesting plot or characters. It's because this novel went the route of realism rather than romance for its genre, and steadfastly held to presenting all the details no matter how dirty or frustrating, violent or unpleasant. I mean, this story is, I think, pretty unpleasant to read overall, and yet there's still a compelling element to it in seeing how the shou is going to survive and adapt.

Granted, this story ain't Shakespeare, it's not exactly Literature With a Capital L, it's clearly still a BL webnovel and all, but it is certainly very different from all its brethren. <<less
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karwasama
karwasama rated it
July 30, 2020
Status: c34
While reading this I was constantly torn between "this is so wrong wtf" and "he's technically a wild animal and this is what wild animals do so maybe... it isn't that bad?" but ultimately it left a pretty bad taste in my mouth.

Before I write the rest of my review, I want to clarify that all my criticisms are toward the novel itself and not the translator. The translator did an excellent job, especially with the content they had to deal with. The fact that this review even has 2... more>> stars (1.5 but I rounded up) is actually for them. It was also because half of the reason why I rated this so low is because I didn't vibe with Beastman Forcefully Raising a Wife in general, but I'll get to that later.

Anyway, the story as a whole was so difficult for me to swallow. It's exactly what you expect -- ML is an animalistic cave man sort of character that thinks and behaves like, well, a beast. In his head, kidnapping a "mate" is totally normal, which he does to the MC, and he thinks lightly of man handling the MC around (he does feel some regret over the times he hurts the MC but.... it really doesn't last...). He cares for the MC, but in the same way you would care for your dog, not a lover, and it was pretty uncomfortable reading about how he literally
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put the MC on a leash and tied him to the cave.

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When he finally does the deed with the MC, it's straight up non-con (others may say dub-con but to me he really didn't consent to it at all), and Jesus Christ, just from reading the scene I was wincing in theoretical pain. Like, no lube, the ML's (two) extra long dicks, and it's the MC's first time..... ouch.

What also made it hard to keep reading is the graphic realism of bodily functions...? This is not necessarily a bad thing, but I'm pretty squeamish so this was a bit of a turn off. The topic of defecation is brought up pretty frequently (in my opinion, at least). I think the worst of it was
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after they did it for the first time and the ML had plugged the MC up with his cum. That in of itself isn't too bad, but the MC thinks it's diarrhea which inevitably put the comparison into my mind. And then when he tries to get everything out the ML helps him by taking him to the edge of the mountain and making him just... let go... of everything all while he's still holding him. I don't know -- maybe I'm just too vanilla but this was a little much for me.

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Content aside, the novel is pretty confusing as well. I can't get a grasp on the MC's characterization. One second he's shivering in fear of the ML, and the next he's joking around with him like he doesn't care. Actually, I personally felt as if all the characters were bipolar -- one minute they would be upset, and in literally the span of two sentences their mood would "improve" and they would become happy. Or vice versa. You get my drift.

Regardless, I think I'm going to stop here. For the reasons mentioned above, I'm not particularly enjoying this story. I wouldn't go as far as to say it's a bad novel, because it is hilarious at times and the writing style isn't bad, but it does cater to very specific tastes, ones which I do not have. Overall, I rate it a 1.5/2.0 stars. <<less
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FloweryUnicorn
FloweryUnicorn rated it
May 19, 2020
Status: --
Well, the plot is awfully similar to the book called seized by the shape shifting serpent, to the point it's literally stolen. Everything is extremely similar from the start of the story, not sure how to feel about this. As for the translators, excellent work.
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MsBlueMoon2
MsBlueMoon2
December 6, 2021
Status: c67
Just wanna drop in and say the translator did a great job and thank you for the content warnings and optional summaries! At particularly difficult bits in the story, translator gives an option of reading a brief summary and skipping the actual text to get to the next part, it's a nice option to have. Not gonna rate because this is one of those "if you like it, you like it" kinda deals. All tags are accurate, heed the warnings if it's not your taste! Definitely r*pey and stockholm syndrome... more>> and nonsensical beastman logic galore, I read for the p*rn and lols ¯\_ (ツ) _/¯ <<less
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Elux
Elux rated it
March 25, 2021
Status: c74
This novel has a beginning that many dosn't like due to the "ugly" start of their relationship and I agreet this has inhuman moments and blah blah blah but I like this novel exactly because it's very shocking and a diferent experience. I think isn't good to give 1 star to this story only because of the author's proposal, it's like given a 1 star to a gore novel only because it has gore... it dosn't make sense (you've been warned about the theme). I know that isn't exactly the... more>> same but what I'm trying to say is that BFRW isn't a novel for everyone.

(The moment where I put my thoughts in words.)

I REALLY DON'T KNOW HOW SOMEONE COMES TO A NOVEL WITH THE TAGS: R*pe Victim Becomes Lover, Stockholm Syndrome, Yandere and etc.

AND THE PERSON RATE THE NOVEL WITH A 1 STAR BECAUSE THEY DIDN'T LIKED THE START OF THEIR RELATIONSHIP... (MC x ML)

TELL ME! WHAT ARE YOU EXPECTING?

THE TAGS SAYS WHAT YOU ARE GOING TO READ, REGARDLESS OF THE INTENSITY.

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(I gave 5 stars to increase the rating of the novel but for me it's worth.... 4.2 points) <<less
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