Giving this three stars, only because I like the premise of the story.

I just finished reading what appears to be the complete story. I say appears, because the “end” was really abrupt. Most often when a story is ending you have things wrap up, main baddie gets killed, people fall in love, etc.. This story just leaves you hanging much like if I were to stop writing this mid way.

Next is the world building. The author went a bit too light on the details, so much so, there was little... more>> explanation beyond what was immediately required. So there was no “why” things were the way they were, nor “how” it got to that point. You’re just dumped into the middle of it, and by the time you’re starting to get an idea of what the world is like, the story is already over.

Then we have the character building. Besides the MC which we get a few bits and pieces of info on, the rest of the characters seem to fall flat. Not enough depth or detail.

I apologize if I’m a bit vague here, but I’m trying to avoid dealing with spoilers.

That said, the battles at first were interesting, at least all but the “final battle”. The last fight felt anticlimactic, well there was no build up, just “poof” MC won! Fin. Then off to the next scene. Shame too, I really think the Author could have done a lot better at least on the last fight scene since it turned out to be the last fight scene.

I’d like to end on a positive note since I haven’t been overly positive about this story. I give the Author credit for being brave enough to post a story, it takes some courage to put one’s self out there like this. I think it is awesome, and I hope that the Author doesn’t give up and keeps trying! Even though there was a bit to be desired, the idea of the story, the setting are great and I hope to see more! <<less

It seems like an interesting premise. However, the author completely skips any explanation of the setting. There's no explanation as to the nature of the school or why they are fighting demons. In one of the more recently translated chapters, it was revealed that But even that is barely explained, and is mentioned off-hand as if the reader should already know that.