While many might be reading for the H stuffs, the plot in this one isn't so bad. The characters, while not many do have the qualities of a MC not those that get introduced and forgotten. However, the novel ended way too soon and too open.... more>>

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MC didn't really settle things with the mother, and various stuffs that were introduced never saw them coming into fruition. Even the last chapter didn't feel like it was the last one that it was quite a letdown but well... And also, towards the end, they introduced new characters but never really had the chance to build on them.

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Would've loved to see more but that is highly unlikely, unfortunately. Just when I thought I had found a new different novel that I could read without getting bored. <<less

A fantastic read, I think the story really picks up in the middle. The unreliable narrator adds a very unique spice to the novel and the romance elements become more noticeable the more the story progresses.

i found this to be a really satisfying read as a novel that provides more than just s*x scenes every single chapter. The characters are each unique and they don't feel very one dimensional although there is that typical anime-esque exaggeration.

It is seriously such a shame that the novel was dropped when it felt like... more>> there were still so many more avenues for the plot to develop and you could tell the author was already establishing building blocks to introduce future characters.

I still rate it 5/5. If you're into this type of story but also care about having a novel with a bit of depth and romance I would seriously recommend this novel. It's just such a damn shame that it was dropped... <<less

Horrendously boring. The writing consists of the MC's difficult to parse internal monologues and the occasional dialogue between him and his "prey". There is no glimpse into the two characters lives, or even side characters who only exist to internally ramble about, because they aren't in the story at all. The entirety of the story so far has been time skipping to the next training session after the last session.

Random chapter, too lazy to check how far I got. I thought it was a completed novel, that was the status displayed on this website. While reading the novel, however, I realized, considering how thorough the novel was, 73 chapters was far too little. Hence, I did some quick googling and uncovered the truth, its been dropped. It's a brilliant ero-novel. But, I don't wish to get more invested knowing its unfinished and will never be finished.

This novel greatly surprised me. Despite being an erot*c novel, it doesn't forsake the character development part. Wa follow the story of Aoi Kijima, the MC, and Makoto the so called meat toilet. The characters interactions are just adorable and at the same time very funny as we can read the inner thoughts of Kijima, a well known Tsundere male character.

I would have given a 5 stars in the beginning but as I progressed further in the story, I could notice some flaws that hinder the reader's immersion.

Firstly, it's lacking... more>> of descriptive scenes. Only the erogenous parts and the sensations are described in depth. I would have really liked if the author focused a little bit more on the surrounding and not only on the main characters.

Secondly, the story is too linear. It's only and only about the main character Kijima. I feel like the school life is just about how Kijima torments Makoto, well at this part as well I would have also liked a little bit more explanation, a little depth if I may say so. For example, at a certain point of the story, Makoto gets some "real" friends. Yep but there are only 4 lines describing it. And that's it. Isn't it too shallow ?? I mean her friends literally have no purpose in the story. Please develop a bit more your side characters : (

And ultimately, I'd like the criticise the ending. All long the novel, the author builds a Tsundere character, and in the end guess what. Yup it ends in a Kya Kya ufufu atmosphere where everything ends well without real development. He saves Makoto, gets a Harem of meat toilets, reconciles with his brother, solves all problems and all that's well that ends well. Ahum, that's clearly abusing of Deus Ex Machina...

To summarise, the novel is really worth a shot, with decently long chapters and a good overall story, but at the same time, I feel like the story is too shallow, too superficial. <<less

It's what you expect from the description. Dark, dark, dark. I couldn't get past the first few chapters, because if you aren't into reading about pe*verted as*hole (nearly NTR, though its more of corruption), tags from all your Japanese p*rn sites then this isn't for you. Because there is a lot of that.

Yeah. There isn't much to describe it by, as the summary is on point. Once again, its dark, dark, dark. Its like reading about the early stages of s*x trafficking. Well, at least its better than 90% of... more>> most harem novels out there, because it isn't cliche generic crap you've read over again. Because trust me, you have not read this before. <<less

A novel deserving of 5 stars!!! Deserves a read but I have to say the early translations read very poor. Using Deepl to read those unedited chapter would be good. Also as there is 5000 word limit for the free version, you might need to select and translate multiple parts for each chapter (some chapters are very long). There's an extension called Character Count that is helpful for that.

Be warned those who aren't an*l fans; this is an anal-focused ero novel and all the heroines remain virg*ns till the end. Even though I didn't read until the end, I searched for "virg*n" keyword in the remaining chapters and the MC was still refusing to take v*rginity in chapter 64. I was misled by the "First-time Interc**rse" tag, it means an*l v*rginity.

The plot is inconsistent and full of plot holes; It's ok at best. The major characters are said to be in 2nd-year high school, but they act and... more>> sound more like middle schoolers. The MC isn't the usual emotional wimpy JP MC, but the tsundere aspect is certainly overdone. I'm not an an*l guy, but even so, the an*l scenes in this novel are quite unpleasant. The MC's d*ck gets smeared in "intestinal juice" and there's often defecation altogether. This ero novel is honestly not for non-fetishists. If you've got an an*l fetish, then it's probably a decent 3-star smut. <<less