An interesting look at a seduction scene, very lyrical but not enrapturing. I'd say it's about a 3.5 but rounded to 4 because it reads well. If you like confession/seduction scenes you might want to score it higher. To me, it was a fragment or writing exercise. It's not whole as it stands.

If you are writing your own story, you might want to use this for inspiration and insight into how to do these scenes.

Cute and wholesome :3

This was sort of written poetically, it was beautiful. Just a short and sweet oneshot of a confession, it's utterly adorable. Gad, I may just come back once in a while for some sugar.