This story has no real structure. The pacing is rushed, the flow is messy, and exposition only shows up when it’s convenient. Not to mention that key info is often skipped or dropped in quite late.

The writing is clunky and cliché-heavy. Emotional scenes feel forced, the MC’s inner voice is unbearable, and the humor completely misses the mark.

The plot runs on pure nonsense, info dumps, and coincidences. The ML shows up twice right as the MC tries to kill himself, once is a stretch, twice is laughable. Somehow, after a... more>> single phone call saying his condition is treatable, the MC just gives up on dying. It’s super random and underwhelming. Also, the friend who calls to let him know about this kind of appears out of nowhere, and nothing about the plot really makes sense if you stop and think about it.

The execution of anything that could have made this story better simply doesn’t exist, and I honestly couldn’t make it past 10 chapters.

Oh, and the MC is dramatic and exhausting. I found the ML to be the only semi-decent part of the whole thing, but even he can’t save it. Overall, rushed, shallow, and hard to enjoy. <<less