Cute story, but way too short. It feels like there's something missing. You have the build-up, but not the pay-off of the happy relationship. So I took off one star for that.

On top of that, the website has way too many advertisements. I consider more than 3 to be too much, and this one has 18. And since the website forces you to take off your adblocker or else it won't load, it just makes it an annoying experience to read the story.

The story itself is a 4 stars, and... more>> the experience of reading with all those ads makes it a 3 stars instead. <<less

Agree with the comment Pavetta made: this was way too short. It felt more like a premise/teaser for a longer story. I really want it to be part of a longer story, especially as there are a lot of parts left unexplained. The concept is interesting and it's a really quick read for anyone curious (took me a minute or so to finish). The link no longer shows the oneshot anymore though, and the site looks to be on temporary hiatus. Does anyone when JST is coming back?