Ok I'm gonna leave this review here for the people, do not expect some kind of masterpiece of a story, because if that's what you want, you've come to the wrong place, this is a story for you to turn off your brain and enjoy the adult stuff ok, do you get it, then farewell my fellow man of culture and enjoy the illustration when you beat your meat

I can see where the MC is coming from and I'm not really against revenge either.

Up to the point where I read.... although his methods aren't morally acceptable, results-wise for the women of that house, it's kind of positive.

Their personal power did improve, the territory's safety and productivity too, and, well, the s*x is great.

... more>> As for the ex companions revenge, it was pretty fun. The part about the commander questions was interesting.

The twist of what happened to the hero after the f*ckups was unexpected so I liked it quite a bit.

The MTL stopped here, where the revenge is almost complete. I hope it doesn't get dropped, I'm looking forward to the end.

Obviously, this isn't a plot masterpiece, but it's pretty fun, effective for the objective it will be used for. <<less

Good novel 👍

It starts pretty normally with a tr*shy hero thinking with his d*ck full of jealousy... he banished the MC from his party because they don't need a mage

Our MC then wants to take revenge, so he goes after his mother and sisters, why not ?

... more>> He's already pretty op so the focus of the story is more on relationships and how he'll devour the hero's family.

It's an average plot, carried by the author's writing and simplicity.

The smut is alright but sometimes repetitive in the dialogue and interactions.

It's a 4/5 for me 👍 <<less

You know. I really liked it for some time. But it gets repetitive. Like super repetitive. And that's sad, because he does a lot of plays and honestly the R-18 scenes are decent.

but as a typical novel from the east. (Chinese, Japan, Korea) they are obsessed with huge breasts, licking them, and foreplay being 99.8% fondling said breasts. So over and over again you will witness the MC constantly groping a b**b the size of a small child's head. (Also, fyi. P**sys don't squeak.)

like I said. It's frustrating. Because... more>> he comes across a goddess of s*x, 's*aves' elf's beast girls, sisters, a cute maid etc. And he does some good plays with them, but 70% of the s*x scenes will be him fondling breasts.

By like the 6th girl it's gotten lazy. When she resists he is just saying 'cute' he used to say it very seldom now every struggle it's 'cute' and it's repetitive. She denies, he calls her out over and over. She resists and he demands over and over. He tries to discipline. She acts freightened? Then back to it in the same paragraph. She complains he calls out and asks everything, then the next chapter she's mad that he isn't. his actions are contradictory, or sometimes just outright out of nowhere. He will make a plan, proceed to do the plan, then do something completely different.

he starts off with zero s*xual desire then decides to just become a revenge driven s*x fiend, but only for girls related to the hero. Then 100 ch's later he will hook up randomly but it will be a single paragraph. Or it'll be unexpected person and the story will skip a whole session.

he will get tools, then not use them, skills, and not use them. It's frustrating a I really want to like it because it's not the worst at-18 focused novel I've read but it's kinda disappointing. ALSO! It's such a good translation! Seriously like barely any mistakes. Sometimes it's odd like calling a trained maid a 'pu*sy maid' not my first choice, but they call it a pu*sy and the info dumps are very moderate. also. Why the hell doesn't he just imp**gnate them? Like during the training? Sure. But after? Why not

plus how the f*ck can you be married if your husband is dead you've said it 1000 times but that didn't resurrect him, nor did she get remarried. She's a widow dude. <<less

Unexpectedly, this is quite good. Im expecting this not that good because the rating compared to the other's. But I dont think this series deserves that. Idk the original but the quality of translation is pretty good and the best part is a lot illustration of ai generated is adding more spiciness!!