1. The Main couple is in NO WAY boring, I've read a comment saying they were and I felt so bad while reading cause THEY WEREN'T!!

2. The second couple can be considered a toxic couple (w/c honestly, in the bl world, we usually see, but I think this was a bit worst, but u only have to get through their first meeting fr)

3. The MC changing personality or smthng like that, I mean, we all do that don't we? it's not like we only have one feeling, like we're afraid but we are also brave and the only difference is what we choose to show or project, and I honestly think there wasn't much inconsistencies tho

4. Paedophilia? I really don't see that huhuhu there was NO s*xual things done to a child, there are statements talking about paedophilia but c'mon they are being said by a character to their friend! they're obv just teasing the other! u don't have friend??? haahahahha

5. Also, u have to know that the people they are, were influenced by the things they have experienced which we have no way of knowing or even imagining so ofcourse they are not perfect and they are much more true to their primal desires lol

Plot? - is alright, really have a good premise, but I hoped it was a bit more worldwide? like I know xing yan and duan li are strong but that was before, who are the leading players now? I guess people from the asura are stronger than ordinary players... nvm then HAHAHHAA I was gonna say that it happened for 100 yrs so it was weird that they were the strongest but then remembered that those people are the ones from asura HAHAHAH nvm again!

then I guess I would've liked it more if it was longer to build the character of abyss more, like know him more and how exactly he changed and idk I just felt it was a bit abrupt. I wanted to know more about his feelings I guess, even if they were depressing cause that what makes him more relatable or more understandable or close. I also really liked the first luo jian who was cute heehe but I also like abyss cause OP bch hahahaha I think the ending of main text could've been better. ALSO, I loved how the author put out many smexy scenes on the beginning arcs cause there are none in the mid and end lol, but it didn't make me feel unsatified, which was surprising loll.

I did almost drop this cause I DO like Feng YuLan, but that's only when he's alone or with Luo Jian, cause when he's with Duan Li he seems to turn s*upid and IDEK how he fell for him, Luo Jian literally said FYL was hetero lol, and if he was gonna fall in love with a person who saved him, Luo Jian is literally *there*, I mean, even his "HE" was not really that happy, I think he would've been more happy if he liked luo jian but never got to say it u know lol, the second couple was a real turn off, even with all that back story, it still is lol

but I am so so so glad that the main couple was not. Luo jian was so loveable whenever he just lets the stalker do whatever and even sometimes initiates it himself, u have to know, he literally started all of it loll, what a great story to tell ur kids, on the first day we met, he stabbed me AHAHHAHAAH still better than raping? what thinking AHHAHAHA at least Xing Yan helped him out in the end lol. I know their HE in the extra was satisfying but I wanted them to talk really with stalker xing yan huhu, so sad with their prev predicament. also with unstalker xing yan and abyss, ITS NOT PAEDOPHILIA CMON!! even XY didn't know what he was doing!!! he was too engrossed to LJ's soul that he didn't even really got to pay attention to the age huhuhu don't make this an issue!! I love them so much <3

Luo Feng/ Specter, I like him, I like how he suddenly have like comedy acts lol. he's always bullied cause he got no close combat fr hahahahha that's always the description for him when they're fighting HAHAHA Hong/Clown I can't believed I liked him more that Duan Li HAHAAHHA I really liked him, and even their 'relationship' Hong and luo feng are much betterand even cuter that our second couple lol. btw Hong ain't a paedophile HUHUHU he literally just liked cute things and abyss is so cute that he can't help but express it!! don't make it an issue!!! It was also shown in the extra how he also thinks girls' hands are cute!!!

Ying, , he was just disappointing lol, what he be letting abyss go first lol, he practically didn't do anything and just passed all the consequences to our poor Luo Jian.

btw it was sad that I couldn't read much more of abyss opness, esp when he's with his original team mates aww. I really hate ending who end up erasing the memories of everyone T_T what u guys be happy but we be remembering ur stories and be bittersweet for u guys? Forgetting is overused ToT

if u can skip second couple's chapters LOL

I'm still not clear on what the secret chamber was trying to accomplish, as the answered seemed to change each scene to create another obstacle or be a curveball. The bonus chapters also threw me off. I enjoyed them and they were great post-resolution scenes, but I was confused with the basis for how each character came together in that new context.

The change in relationships at the end wasn’t satisfying to me. I would’ve preferred the friends to still be close and the romances to newly begin at the end rather than the romances taking center stage. I feel like this devalued the story that the author built and particularly the relationships between Luo Jian and Fei Yulan, and Luo Jian and Luo Feng. It was a bummer because basically up until those final chapters and the extras I really liked it.

There is r*pe and non-con between main CP and second CP. Honestly that almost made me take off another star however it was mentioned as a tag and so I'm not taking off a star because it's my own fault for not seeing that. Also a note on those r/nc situations - TOTALLY unneeded. They 'started' the relationships with those scenes and it was so offputting because it totally wasn't needed to start a dramatic/tragedy romance, they could have done without the glorification of r*pe. Those bastards never even apologised or recognised their actions were horrific. After writing this I think I should have rated it lower but too late now