Rare, the protagonist of this story belongs to a family of martial artists that are hell bent on using the power of mind instead of brute physical strength. Having prioritised elegance over strength, rare became an existence that swung too far into two stats at the start of the game, the MND and INT. Like a certain shield loli, if you might. The difference here, however, is that she deliberately choose worse starting conditions than normal players to get bonus starting XP, about 50-100 XP, IIRC. These bonus XP let's her steamroll her starting zone and end up dominate with sheer XP value. I don't know if this counts as spoiler or not, but a character's strength is measured by how much XP they have invested/earned. Rare had a treasure trove of XP at her disposal. But, here's where things get interesting.

As mentioned earlier, Rare's family were a bunch of martial artists who single-mindedly desired to hone their minds, they didn't want to practice brutish arts like the way of the sword. To put it bluntly, they were a bunch of elitists who looked down at the act of physically tempering your body and honing your craft. Rare, being one of them, was the same. She vehemently refused to get ANY close combat skills, as she never planned to show herself to other players, only going for magic and production based skill trees was fine. She did an extremely good job at exploring her skill trees and strengthening her followers as best as she could. But, due to the elitist nature ingrained in her being and the near invincible status that she had, she never thought of exploring the public information network used by other players. That overconfident behaviour soon led to her splendid implosion in chapter 87.

Rare had died at the hands of the players, due to the lack of information on her side, she was thoroughly dragged through the mud. Humiliated, violated even. This, was a slap across her face, in death, she strengthened her enemies and ended up feeling vexed. She was sure that she'd win, but the fact that she did not had pried her eyes open. Her greed for the gold, the xp that served to strengthen her had ended up being her downfall.

Change the term "Demon" in Great Demon to Devil, and change Great Demon to Archdevil, since unlike a Demon and Demon Lord which comes from the Spirit evolution line (Elf/Dwarf evolution) Angels and Devils come from the Homunculus evolution line.

Also, when the time that [REDACTED] evolves into the human's evolution disaster, instead of calling the evolution "Evil Human" and "Good Human" I propose calling them Sin/Virtue of Humanity, because it sounds more like a race than an adjetive.

For the Vampiric disaster evolution, instead of "True Vampire" I suggest using the "Vampire Progenitor" term.

Lastly, for the Beastman disaster evolution, instead of "Spirit Beastman", use "Sacred Beastman"

The author decided that the MC was going to die in this chapter ahead of time and starts it with her ressing afterwards. This was pre planned as they had written the MC gradually starting to feel invincible.

This would have been fine except for the fact that the author has her turn into a brain dead moron when she is supposed to be an intelligent MC and has her die to a bunch of idiots who shouldn't have even known she was coming to set up a trap specifically for her. There is also the issue of them even being able to damage her as she had gone through several massive power spikes since the previous event.

It would have been less s*upid if one of the other cataclysms had randomly shown up and killed her to teach her not to get ahead of her self and that she wasn't invincible and I would have cared alot less. The author also had her forget that she can teleport to her minions without using castling which was an ability that made no sense to introduce as she had a better one already. The whole thing was just a poorly written excuse to teach the character a lesson.

All in all a really sh*t chapter and I might read the follow up chapter that supposedly goes into more detail later on but this really killed any trust I had in the author.

Rant over.

I'm sure the readers of the authors works were criticizing them for this, because around chapter 87 our character is punished for their perfection. They begin to make numerous mistakes and begin to act scatterbrained. They continuously act without their powerful followers they spent all this time buffing and improving. Finally in about chapter 114, they meet another player who is above them in power, and this one was a bug ab*ser from the alpha? This player learns that they can carry over progress from each test by BURYING THEIR WEALTH IN THE GROUND somewhere and come back the next test to pick up and keep stockpiling. They do this multiple tests in a row and that's how it's explained that they are ahead of the MC. This is a really dumb plot line, but honestly it's even dumber how the MC and this character meet. Their meeting was a trap the alpha player laid out to lure in what they believed was an "event boss" hunting the royal family of the country the "event boss" had just demolished. The "event boss" or the MC felt that this had to be a trap for other reasons, so what do they do but walk right into it. EVEN THOUGH THEY HAVE AN ARMY OF FOLLOWERS, AND EVEN THOUGH THEY HAVE AN ABILITY TO POSSESS THE FOLLOWERS, AND EVEN THOUGH THEY HAVE AN ABILITY TO SUMMON THEIR FOLLOWERS TO THEM THEY STILL WALKED INTO THE TRAP WITH THEIR OWN BODY FOR NO f*ckING REASON.