The translation is top notch but the storyline is only okay. Granted it's only 6 chapters but it didn't pull me in. The main characters don't really have substance, and I didn't feel the writer made a good enough argument as to why we (the readers) should care for the characters.

Also, the first two chapters are a little confusing. The pov jumps all over the place and one character that I thought was important turned out to be a throw away character (at least as of ch 6).

Perhaps it gets... more>> better but don't think I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for an update. <<less