Overall, this story is enjoyable, but there are a few loose ends and flaws that could be improved.

The first part focuses on the chase and dynamic between the MC and the ML, while the latter part shifts to dealing with a drug syndicate.

As always, the system introduced in c1 proves unreliable, pitting out MC.

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On a positive note, the male lead (ML), who is the world's protagonist, is not a s*umbag. He treats the MC with respect and never forces his feelings on her. However, his childish behavior stands in stark contrast to the authority and maturity expected from someone in his position.

Also, the MC is really an airhead. They even have a time to bicker in the middle of the some impt scenario

initially thought the main character (MC) would get pregnant during the main plot, but that isn't the case

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Downside: contains too much nonsensical dialogue and excessive bickering, which can detract from the pacing and emotional depth. I like the plot though and the "twist", I wish that the author focused on it instead <<less

I think its pretty not my cup of tea, the MC its to rush to have finger in the pie. To much troubeling himself in original main character line and plot like I wong live if I don't my trouble to myself. The line its pretty confused also, like he have communication with plot manager but its to long and not really necessary overall hes just destroy the original story in very annoying way and tropically clinge plot where the ML interested in his dumb action. I don't know the... more>> rest but I finish just in 3 chapter, I don't want to know the is. If you interest you can try but it just not for me <<less