I Can’t Shake Off the Vow-Breaking Immortal

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I was the love tribulation of the cold-faced Immortal Lord, forced into his dreams every day to lure him into breaking his vows.

But I’m a man!

I tried everything I could—cross-dressing, pure love, even coercion. I tried it all.

Good news, he was successfully banished to the mortal realm.

Bad news, he was now standing right in front of me.

Internally, I was panicking like crazy, pretending not to recognize him.

This time, the one who wouldn’t leave me alone had become him.

“Young Master, you tied me to the bed and married me, and now you pretend not to know me?”

Associated Names
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破戒仙尊甩不掉
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Recommendation Lists
  1. Bedtime Snacks (2)
  2. WorthIt
  3. Crimson Translations
  4. Short danmei stories with HE
  5. The best once I ever read . 2

Latest Release

Date Group Release
08/23/24 Crimson Translations extra part2
08/23/24 Crimson Translations extra part1
08/23/24 Crimson Translations part9
08/23/24 Crimson Translations part8
08/23/24 Crimson Translations part7
08/23/24 Crimson Translations part6
08/23/24 Crimson Translations part5
08/23/24 Crimson Translations part4
08/23/24 Crimson Translations part3
08/23/24 Crimson Translations part2
08/23/24 Crimson Translations part1
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yukicchi
New yukicchi
May 24, 2025
Status: --
The first part of the story was slightly homophobic. The immortal lord was persistent to a point that I find it creepy sometimes.

I actually didn't find it cute. The MC's feelings were questionable, probably cause of its short chapters, I find his feelings towards the MC kinda forceful.

If I were to rate it, it'll be a 2-star but J won't include it in my review since I find that everyone loves it so this may be just not my cup of tea.
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RavensChrome
RavensChrome rated it
August 31, 2024
Status: Completed
This is a very sweet read. My only one complaint has to be how rushed the emotional development the MC and ML had for each other. Of course this is a short story so there were going to be some pit falls or else it'll turn into a bigger story than the author wanted.

I think the reason why the emotional development feels rushed was due to the fact that the passage of time wasn't felt. When reading it, everything feels like it was happening in a course of a few... more>> days to a week. It's not until you get to the extras that you kind of realize that maybe all this was happening in a course of weeks to a couple of months and even then that feels too short.

I feel that if the extras were properly integrated into the main story, the story would feel more fleshed out and the timing would make sense. Especially giving us the POV from the ML side as he does come off as stoic with a heart of stone and how-the-heck-did-MC-win-him-over?? Type of deal. ML's feelings seemed too artificial until I read the extras.

But it's still a sweet read. <<less
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lulukitsune
lulukitsune rated it
January 28, 2025
Status: Completed
Short and sweet. Immortal is a bit overbearing but nothing is forced. No blood or epic duels, just two fools taking turns seducing each other. 10/10
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ntww12
ntww12 rated it
December 31, 2024
Status: Completed
Super comedic sweet story of a mortal seducing an immortal for a love tribulation. It’s so funny because our MC is a naive young man who has no idea what to do and yet he somehow managed to capture the cold abstinent immortal.

The extras were really good too and everything ended well.
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