I'm not exactly sure what happened, but despite the fact that the novel has potential and is quite interesting, it's difficult to handle the recent poor translation quality. The genders of the characters get mixed up and it's frequently difficult to tell from the dialogue which character is speaking. Even worse, sometimes the sentences don't make any sense within the context of the plot's situation.

I do think that the novel is decent, but hopefully the translation quality improves so that it's more bearable to read.

I like plot like this. Cliche ones. But idk if it's the author's style, but the narration is too much. I feel like 85% of chapter 1 is narration. I like it when characters talk to each other, it makes the story flow easy to read. Too much narration makes the story boring.

The characters change names and genders every other chapter. The author is allergic to meaningful narrative, and instead revels in meaningless in-character musings. There is plenty interesting about the world (abilities, monsters, etc.) but the author is determined not to write about any of it. Instead, they focus on meaningless melodrama conjured from super brief character interactions or a single line of dialogue, which then requires several paragraphs of expository narrative.

TLDR: sketch translation and a whole lot of narrative that needs some good old CTRL+A, DEL therapy.

A cliche attempt of mashing up several popular novel into one big pot of awkwardness. As far as I read, it's about MC being reincarnated into a high school romance with 4 (or more) potential male leads, with MC keeps getting the flag that supposed to land on the original female lead, in a ranker/hunter/dungeon world.

I am ok with cliche genre, but the writing style and the aburptness of everything that's been happening just leave me with awkwardness so I'm not gonna continue this novel.

If you're ok with cliche and... more>> long pace, I think this novel would be ok. <<less

The novel’s plot is pretty interesting but also quite cliche in the sense of a typical Isekai harem. Like some previous comments, it has potential but the quality of the translations makes it difficult to make sense of what’s going on. The character’s identity and gender often get mixed up as well as the descriptions.

I am grateful for the effort in getting the raws and mtling the novel to be able to access. I don’t mean to be disrespectful, however the chapters are not proofread nor edited to make sense... more>> and leaves readers confused. It would be better if it is left to another translator to pick up that has time to properly translate it for quality rather than quantity. <<less

I like the start of the plot of the story.. Seems a bit of interesting that's why I added it to my list of reading but then a new translation was added to the lists.. The translation was so bad that I think it's not worth reading.. I hope the old group picks this up

Story wise, expectedly nothing much has happened from where I stopped (literal sense, I didnt drop it lol) tho I wouldve liked just a teeny plot progression atleast. The other male leads warmed up to MC pretty quickly? (Or am I just used to slow burn). He isnt op right off the bat, theres an abrupt flow of things, like he didnt even get the chance to actually avoid the ppl he wanted to avoid HAHAHA its kinda funny so im not complaining

With the translation, im gonn have to agree... more>> with previous commentors BUT honestly compared to other translations, this one is pretty decent. The narration doesnt make your nose bleed and is actually comprehensible. There is def some grammatical errors sometimes but not all the time that its notable. The issue lies in the dialogues mostly, sometimes the exchange in convo gets mixed up and youre not sure who is talking, sometimes it doesnt make sense which ruins the immersion for me TT (I love haewoon, he talks alot and I feel the conversatioms wouldve been actually entertaining). This novel wont need heavy editing, I just hope it was proofread so some parts that were clearly overlooked can be fixed. Especially with the misgendering of Seowoo, I thought it was a one time thing but he keeps getting refered to with She/her

Update: Chapter 58 now

I read alot of slowburn before this so, in general its okay that theres STILL very little plot progression but idk- I dont see where the story is heading. I wouldve liked too see some crossovers with the original males leads and female lead of the original novel, I wouldve liked to see more of the og female lead herself but shes barely there. Its almost like she only appears to show that they still exist somehow and somewhere. Its still somehow entertaining so im gonna keep going. From here on, alot of the characters actually talk but since like I said- the mistranslations fall in the dialogue and naming the characters so this makes it that a huge chunk of this book hard to read now. The characters speaking gets so mixed up with the names that I have to figure out myself who is actually talking through context clues.

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I remember now why I kept dropping this before. It's headache inducing. MC is not appealing as a main character in terms of narrative, the flow of the story is jumbled while still maintaining the boring factor, and the dialogue is not engaging at all.

The premise of their world "seems" interesting but its really not well executed at all. It tried to mix fantasy with school life inso romance and failed. The romance is dry and there's no sense of urgency in the fantasy part of the story.

It seems like... more>> just an ambitious novel and it didn't achieve what it tried to achieve <<less

hmmmm.. The premise of the story sounds good while its is a cliche, for some reason the I am not liking the MC at all, I understand his hesitation towards his new body and I feel that it is definitely justified that he feels that way imagined just walking one day all of the sudden you get hit by a car or truck and you are in a new life with new body, you just can't accept that, I feel that MC is justified to say the least that he... more>> can't believe he died like that and felt that he stole the ORGINAL's body. However even though its like that he should not have cut some of the original body relationship with his peers with his childhood friend but also parents. While adapting to his life is hard, it's not right to cut off a relationship with someone especially you know that they are worried for you, his depression is real and definitely should be acknowledge thats why its more important for the MC to talk to his peers and be clear about it. I have not yet read the whole thing however a passive MC is not that much attractive. I don't why for some reason reading his thought and his POV makes me feel gloomy.. For now I will be finishing reading this someday but now I JUST want to stop <<less