World building - Only the first planet arc was properly developed. The whole "potato will save world hunger" thing didn't come into play since they sell other tasty vegetables and meat in grocery stores. The first time the MC cooked a meal (Before potato planting) for ML, he used Veges to stirfry a delicious feast and I had question marks in my head.

There's also a weird timeline flow of 2years passing but the potato still hasn't matured? (I'll bfr tho the timeskip was to make sure the MC (16 yo) was of legal age to marry 28 yo ML.)

There are several topics on s*xual harassment and racism, but none of it were really addressed.

there is also the whole potato farming that's supposed to save everyone from starvation. It can be seen that from the beginning that the major factor is soil composition when it comes to growing, as it took MC a long time to find somewhere he would plant his potatoes. On the other hand, while expensive, there are fruits and veggies available for purchase, and there was no indication that there was a limited amount. So honestly, the focus on potatoes saving everyone from starving seems redundant, especially since red star would not be able to grow them, which means the cost of transportation or making the planet suitable for cultivation would be astronomically expensive.

To me, the MC had no personality and opinion. While, it doesn't have to be a constant struggle or dog-blood, it just seems in every situation, someone makes it convenient for him or solves his issue (usually the ML). I understand MC has limited options, but it's too much that it always works to his advantage and is all finished off in a simple manner. MC always seems to readily agree with the ML and ML is always right. Not to mention, it is very well timed on a desolate planet that the MC has enough drugs to able to disguise his gender and without issues.

The only thing I read about the ML attraction to the MC is his obedience and looks. I found the ML to be inappropriate and unprofessional. ML is a Marshal and an adult and MC is seventeen. He barely knows the MC, yet, has MC living and sleeping with him (for a period). He is demanding and thinks he knows what is good for the MC.

Another gripe I have is that ML knows Darren is tr*sh and would do something s*xual to MC as punishment for leaving his post. How is that appropriate to use as a threat to do his job better and against a child. It was bad write in that same chapter that the ML desired to see MC tearful and fearful. Why would anyone want to see someone frightened from ab*se?

Moreover, I am unsure how the author plans to have him like the MC when he founds out he is an omega. ML has stereotypical alpha reasoning for disliking of omega; weak, dependent, mentally unstable, and only role is for reproductive purpose. I find he is awful for viewing them as an 'unstable existence'; disliking a human being for their biology and existence. Perhaps, he has trauma for him to think way, but still no excuse to be an awful person. I am not sure about the trauma since it has not been revealed from ch. 1-51.

In spite of ML personality, ML does a lot for someone like the MC despite their relationship and status. I believe I saw ML reasoning is because he is useful and has good abilities... night vision in a futuristic setting... and that he can understand Beast language? ML gives MC crystals easily like they are candy, aren't they suppose to be rare? I am shocked how fast MC went from cleaner to military officer close to the Marshal.

I am confused how the MC can go into battle even though he has no combat training or experience? How could he be okay with the pheromones when he wasn't before? How could the MC have a new ability to win the battle? How did he develop these abilities? What kind of reasoning is "I'm not afraid of battle because I saw lots of violent and gruesome scenes on tv before." MC does not explain why he would risk his cover for ML.

It did bother me that MC sympathy for the beasts "shatter" completely without critically thinking or understanding the whole picture. Similar to one bad apple spoils the entire batch. It's true, what the Beasts did was horrible and does not excuse them. However, he doesn't even think about the circumstances and why they did such things. It's war and it' for survival. People will do questionable and desperate things for survival. It is understandable he should just care about his own kind, but his conclusion to that decision are childish. It seemed to fail on the MC that humans can commit awful crimes too. (Then again, I don't know, maybe the author might have written in the later chapters that the Beasts are the 'villains'.)

I felt Zero's appearance was abrupt. It seemed Zero's purpose is for teleporting, storing, and to do MC job of finding a place to plant the potato. Despite the MC was once a geologist in his past life. His past job and skills are barely mentioned; hell, I forgot he was a scientist. MC doesn't even work or think like a scientist or do anything related to his job before. The closest thing mentioned about his geologist background is the type of soil to use for his potato. The potato plays a very minor part in this novel and the streaming part is easily glossed over. He immediately receives a high view count s soon as he streamed once session. The chapters have been about his military job and a mission with the ML.

Zero takes a huge amount of crystal to do one thing. He steals those crystal that would have gotten MC in huge trouble if the ML didn't help. MC does nothing substantial to stop or teach Zero.

Regarding, the gender issues in an omegaverse, I have difficulty explaining how its done in this novel. For an omegaverse you already know going in what to expect, especially based on the summary. Yet, I feel the author merely painted half the picture of an omegaverse society with basic techniques. What I get from our MC is he finds being an omega as inconvenience more than anything. I don't feel the author made it impactful for our MC. Maybe he doesn't need panic since he is being treated well with a new place and money. I understand, he is no freedom fighter and omega rights is not MC goal.

Maybe there will be answers later on and maybe the potato will actually be incorporated. Maybe.