I was initially looking forward to this, and although it's not completely terrible there are too many aspects added up that makes it almost unbearable to read.

the main problem is the childishness of the sentence structures and translation. I'm not sure if it's the actual author that's at fault (and tbh from reading the novel about the snake and hamster it's probably the author) but the way they word things is very elementary.

even if I ignore that, the fact that almost nothing stayed the same irked me. one minute the... more>> eggs were described as red then the next they're a different color before once again described as turning red.

one minute someone's sitting, then they're standing only to be sitting again. it's so inconsistent and it's not something that happens once or twice cause even prices have changed from billions to millions. I can't tell if that's an editing error or what but the whole novel just feels really sloppy.

i feel like the ML has serious problems if he at first felt like the MC was 11/12 and immediately felt attraction to him despite that. That's weird as hell but I guess they skated past that because we as readers are supposed to know he's hundreds of thousands of years old. like, MC started getting taller and "growing up" and dude immediately felt uncomfortable with it... yeah f*cking weirdo. like??? it's fine if he's smaller than you but him being taller is a problem? I think that mentality is the real problem but whatever.

honestly the novel can hold interest, especially when there's nothing else to read and I'm craving a good mpreg fic where kids are actually involved, but if this novel was one I was reading out of seriousness I'd be so disappointed.

i can see why the rating is so low. the only reason I'm not rating below a 2 is because I did enjoy it enough to finish it. <<less

Author's other works have way better extras. Overall good story. Idk if I'll re-read, but it's worth reading once if you like this kind of thing.

u: 2021 Nov 13

4 ⭐️

I think the story’s okay but it’s not anything special of you’ve read lots of novels w/ similar theme as this one. But it’s good for light reading.

Good novel... just good but oh yes good....a time passing novel who has excess amount of free time like me... it is also kinda slice of life? Sometimes it might get boring but the freaking cute MC will be there to liven up the mood.... I actually started to read it to have a change of taste from brainstorming novels so a 5 star from me

When I first noticed that it was written by the same author of other novels that I like (A guide to raising your natural enemy, Stone age raising husband, and so on..) I was really looking forward to reading it... and that was why I got little bit impatient and mtled it lol. And it didn't disappoint me, it was full fluff, fluff, a little bit of action and fluff. It was somehow like GTRYNE with a cute and simple MC and a sweet, caring and supportive ML (both are... more>> OPs of course :3) but this time MORE CHILDREN! UwU. I also love the interactions of the other couples, ah~ so cute. Overall, it was a good story that heals the heart. I might re-read it once the translation is finished for better reading experience. <<less

A very good fluffy novel. The translation is also good. Loved the characters especially the alien couple Crohn and Cass

This was so goooooood

Ren sheng is so innocent and naive that it kills me but I love it

I never loved an innocent character as much as I loved him

He may be naive but he is not an idiot at all

I wont spoil but this is definitely a must read

Very cute! So many cute beibeis!Not much drama, but it's enough for a cute plot. MTL'd it but I look forward to the translation.

Story is quite cute <3 my only complain can be maybe editing if it? But I was able to ignore it hehe

Thank you for translating, I hope translator will continue till the end, it is very cute ;-;

the MC is naive but that's okay cause he is so cute! Always eating ML's tofu, lol!

note to self: left off on where ML's mom take MC shopping.