Haley was obsessed with Noah. Noah was obsessed with Mason who was mu*dered. Noah detested Haley, whose body Mason reincarnated in

There was a dropped plot point where Haley did black magic to get Noah to have s*x with him. The black magic may be why Mason's spirit took over Haley's body

Noah then became obsessed with Haley when he met Haley outside Mason's house

Mason was straight, but his body was gay. Mason disliked gay s*x (even to the end) and his body's gayness overrode his spirits straightness

For some unknown reason the author never mentions lube, so all the gay s*x was dry and painful (OK, the author did seem to think that men's bodies self lubricate like women's bodies, which is cringey)

Mason's beloved wife and child were mu*dered and his first job after their deaths was bodyguard for Noah. Leaving Noah after working for him for a month made him cry more than when his family died

Noah repeatedly r*ped Mason by tying Mason up, or having s*x while Mason was unconscious, or forcing s*x after Mason was shot and reopening the wound

Every s*x scene physically harmed Mason. Remember he disliked it, but he decided to have a relationship with his stalker rapist because Noah emotionally black mailed him (threatened su*cide)

Love was never mentioned, just obsession and sex

the MC was Ill, tired and still has a Gun wound, in the middle of healing but not only that he also has a shooting the next day and the ML was like "I'm bla bla bla with you bla bla bla" and it just ticks me off like let the dude rest man

the ML had amnesia to cover up the memories he soon was able to remember it

I'm disappointed the MC didn't fully explain nor convey his feelings to the ML... It was talked about so the READER understands that, yes, Noah actually means something to the MC - far more than MC ever realizes or admits... But he never explains that to the ML who, imo, really needed to hear and understand it.

He was simping on a man who was 10 years older than him when he was sixteen, I mean I understand cause I like older guys too, but this was crazy and shit. His more of an evil villain most of the times than MCs Lover.

1. MC keep saying how terrifying the pro mercenaries actually are. Yet, he keep making noob mistakes very often.

2.MC is a soldier, a fighter. He got this protective instinct of a real man. He like woman. He even had kid before. But for some incredible reasons, author make him bottom!!!!. getting fuc* by a man who had a crush on him when MC rescue him from getting kill in the past. So the role kinda confused me here. MC even like getting thrusted.... oh my... This is probably the biggest flaw in my opinion, that the author turn a straight dude to horn* bottom. and it keep me from getting involve in most of the sexscenes.

I prefer this story rather than True Star. It's way better in my opinion. Of course there were parts that are just damn annoying: The earlier chapters of the story has so many typos, wrong grammar etc. As the translator didn't edit the earlier ones even though she/he already has an editor. It was really hard to continue reading due to the many mistakes but I persevered knowing from reading the other reviews that it will get better later on. (It gave me a headache.) BUT! It's absolutely worth it!

it seems that his rebirth has something to do with some wierd voodoo the actor was doing in order to gain the affections of this one man who happens to be the mc's ex boss and a kid he saved a while back

Although the MC is supposed to be this op mercenary I did not really get that vibe from him since he tends to panic a lot especially with things envolving the ML