I'm gonna stop reading here. I love me some yanderes, but the MC here is not doing it for me. He is an idiot through and through. I don't mean he's supposed to be smart, he's written as a character lacking smarts. He makes s*upid decisions and lies his way through. It makes this chaotic, yes, which puts him in a high tension situation juggling the yanderes; but, I'm not feeling it. Feels like a slog to read through. He has no control or rather fails pathetically to gain a... more>> sense of control. The story puts yandere first then MC, so they're the one in control of the story.

Usually, I like this type of stuff, but maybe I've grown out of it. Anyways, that's my take on this. I'll try again later. I'm sure you'll like it if you're into yanderes. Also, they're the classic ones (or, two so far), secretly bloodthirsty, manipulating MC, feeding him spiked stuff, etc. <<less