Initially decent series with some hints of politics but then the author seems biting more than he can chew so the story is spreading too much and it feels convoluted. The author loves to make things seemingly more complicated than it actually is to create illusion that the characters are smart. The author spent pages of text just for convoluted and cryptic chats that can be summarized with one paragraph. The MC which in the beginning expected to be a great leader over the time seems incompetent.

The author messed up... more>> the timeline so it will become very hard to determine how much the time is progressing at any point of the plot. The story pace sometimes feels very slow and there's barely any progress in a chapter but at some other times jumping around that will make you feel confused about the timeline.

Spoiler

Beware for those who can't stand NTRs, prepare for bitter aftertaste reading some points in the story. Either plow trough by ignoring these seemingly NTR developments and read it as politic/war story or if you're weak with it don't bother to start at all. There's still hope for some of them if you managed to plow trough but some may not redeemable, the author directly stated there's no guarantee it will move like the reader's expectations in every cases.

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