Wow, so many 1* ratings. I can only assume the reason is that the chapters are super short.

Because the translation's good, the story's exactly what you'd expect from the title, and it shows the main character's thought-process pretty well. It's presented well enough that it deserves better than 1*.

I'm not going to recommend to read or not; If you're interested based on the title, I'd say chapters 1-10 are basically the prologue. If you like it that far, wait for a lot of chapters to pile up before reading further.

This is so bad that it's actually entertaining.

At least until you realize that this story seems to be following an episodic format, meaning each arc is a few chapters consiting of one single act and then thet next chapter is another act and so on.

There seem to be no consequences to his actions whatsoever, all handwaved by him using his magic lighter to cause everyone involved to forget what happened afterwards (except for him and his childhood friend of course).

Furthermore the MC seems to lose his spirit after the first... more>> few chapters. It's like he's not actually there but instead playing Sims with himself and the girl as characters.

Spoiler

In the latest chapter he takes control over the body of his childhood friend and proceeds to have s*x with himself. The way it's written it certainly seems like he's remote controlling his childhood friend and just watching instead of actually being inside her body.

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It's good for wasting time but don't even think of finding some actual meaning in this.

Edit:

this is getting more and more ridiculous.

The author doesn't even really try anymore.

He's like : "Oh hey, didn't write about this fetish before, let's do it."

And yet, I find myself coming back to this everytime, just to see what kind of stuff he comes up with next.

I'd like to give 5 stars just because it's so bad it's actually funny. But since the rating is about the actual quality, it stays at it is.

I really have to give props to the translator though, while the story is not even worth thinking about, the grammar is excellent. <<less

Chapters are really short and mostly are just about a single event/idea. These first five chapters have been something of a prologue to the ero bits. It's a little too early to judge if it'll be good, but it seems promising thus far. However, if you are looking for high quality ero novels, I wouldn't recommend this one. Unless by high quality ero, you want straight up smut.

Probably more of a 3*, but I'll give it 4* since there seems to be a lot of 1*s on this.

EDIT: The dialogue... more>> is pretty good IMO. The ero bits start around chapter 12. I would recommend saving up lots of chapters if you plan on reading this because the chapters are really short, and I would say that one s*x scene sorta spreads across several chapters. Each chapter seems to finish a s*x act, but it really isn't enough to satisfy me. So far, it's pretty good. <<less

Yes, it's as cheesy as you think it's going to be.

It's basically a hentai one-shot doujinshi that's turned into a series, but in text form.

It leaves nothing to your imagination, which means it can appear quite crude at times, but then again sometimes that's what you want.

Also the fact that for some reason the girl's names turn into FULL CAPS after they've been slavified just cracks me up.

This is p*rn, thats it nothing more just some fluff nothing more than that

You are not reading this for R-18 scenes; the chapters are too short for that. You are reading this only for the plot, praying to your deity wishing for the MC to get his comeuppance; getting NTR'ed by the devil. Or by anyone else for the matter.

????? If it happened, only a ? If it doesn't.

Hmmm...... it's well translated and easy to read but.... it's just way too short. Too short for you to enjoy the R18 scenes, too short on story to build up to those scenes, there's barely a sense of the characters. Rather than an R18 story, it feels more like glimpses into the author's wet dream.

It's not offensive, it's not bad, but that's because it's so short and brief that it's barely anything. Don't waste your time on this.

It would've been relatively good if not for such short chapters, they are ~100 words per chapter, for those who read fast enough it is inconvenient to load New chapter every few minutes with one ha.. *Cough*. I would suggest for translator to put several chapter on one page to improve immersion. Oh and story is okay, nothing exceptional but also nothing bad.

stumbled accross this somehow and I always get curious with these mind control novels because I wonder if they do anything interesting with it. Just because it's obviously p*rn doesn't mean it can't also be interesting...... it's not.

Like seriously this is not worth reading at all. The story is as paper thin as expected but it gets worse as time goes on. The author went with an episodic format where each "arc" is 2 to 3 chapters long, really short chapters, and are just a glorified summary of some kind... more>> of fetish. What makes it worse is after a while the author SERIOUSLY stops trying to even explain the premise and it just becomes random role plays where the MC will seriuosly act out a role and it's just SO FREAKING LAME!

I'm not kidding it finally reached the point I was groaning from how freaking bad it is. Each chapter is now just an excuse to write a scenario without any context. No set up, no tie into anything else just "Lets write a s*x story involving a cop and have the MC talk about it like it's real".

To the novel's credit I did HEAVILY skim but given what I was in the latest chapters I'm SO SO SO glad I didn't give this a proper read. There is no way the early chapters are worth whatever the hell the author thinks they are doing later. <<less

Its good but I read the a whole chapter in less than a minute. Meaning each chapteris short 6 chapters in 5-8 minutes makes me a little unhappy... minus a star for that.

Otherwise, the story focuses on the feelings and conceptions the MC has. Very well done!

Basically p*rn, and not a particularly good one at that

I enjoy reading Doujinshi but I can't understand Hentai novel, I would recommend to just read an ecchi manga instead if you want some spice while doujinshi or hentai is much better for when you want to release yourself

that said, the translation quality is gewd and if you are into r*pe then it is quite interesting, or just read Monhan no Erohon, best doujinshi ever