Do you remember the monster attack on London? I'm not sure if I have read anything that ridicoulos before. Or the scene with the US president? Haha...

he fight golem because someone break wall from beginer labyrinth, dude it was more than 100years since labyrinth was found (consider there is a lot 3rd gen conector) and no one ever try to break it for experiment?? And the excuse is that electronic device is not working in labyrinth, really?

also where ever MC is there will be new discovery and phenomenom

[also every girls is loving MC and want to marry him, im almost though this is shounen harem japanese novel

- Totally unnecessary, and it's not because he's bad, he's OK, but Jimin is the one who takes the crown easily, the background given to her and the time she interacted with his daughter created a bond and a real reason for him choose her over the other women at first. But remember, it's a harem, and it becomes irrelevant, do other women have their reasons for wanting to fall in love with him? There is, but it's OK at most and one in particular is a bit forced, if a part were for Tim the story would remain the same, I'll go a little further, 4 of the 5 women could be men and there would be no difference in the story. They would be the MC's brother in arms and the story would continue with its essence intact and the MC with only 1 wife, 0 problems.

- This is where the biggest waste of WN is, Shinhae is only portrayed as a "cute" and "mature" girl, her personality is just that, the author could have gone much deeper into the issue of ab*se, and given more space still for Jimin to shine as a character, a girl her age after having gone through what she went through would have her psychological problems, and would be anything but mature, she would be very shy, not much conversation, she could have created a great PLOT with Jimin helping her out of this mental state and recognizing her as the true Mother, but this PLOT was divided with trips to the Labyrinth, and a little interaction with the other women gives the story, it turns out that in the end, she is the weakest character in WN that had immense potential.

one of the example; PluEl words mentioned by Arwen twice (three times before the story itself forcing PluEl to giving a f*cking clear flag) in front of MC. After awaken as connector 'their senses are enhanced' but MC doesn't hear it when Arwen call out PluEl by name in front of MC. This contradict with how MC can hear his earthen employees wishpering his name during post London incident.

Another examples; are Hyunwoo overact towards his growth & how his words in response towards MC goal in finding Jungbum's traces always somehow off, then ambusher and sudden appearance of Jungbum's device and gems wore by one of ambusher, how messed up for MC to ask 'are you Hanh Jungbum? ' To ambusher wearing Jungbum armor while it's clear Jungbum is dead. He should just ask "why or where did you get those armor" Or "are you the one who killed Hanh Jungbum" These is a basic logic.. Then there is other things that should've raised more suspicions if connected together such as Fabion desperation act toward cleaning out ambusher, village inside 4th great labyrinth, how the ambusher survivor respond to "Fabion" word, secret info about portal that haven't been leaked but somehow known by Fabions, dammit, those were just too much to ignore.

"She is cute isn't she?"

"Indeed, She is."

Children always has their own cuteness especially for a little girl five years old. Shinhae which five years old in Korean's age system is the cutest among her peer.

"Of course, she is five years old and the cutest one among the children here".

The actual conversation is just enough without that explanatory remark which is unneeded. And there are plenty in the story.