Shizun, My Script is Wrong (Rebirth)

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After her rebirth, Sui An inexplicably obtained a spatial System. From it, she learned that she was a cannon fodder female supporting character, destined to fall in love with the male lead and die because of him.

And the female lead was none other than her Shizun, Tan Yun.

The same Shizun who had always protected and doted on her, yet because of the male lead, came to despise and abandon her. In the end, she locked Sui An in a water prison and forgot about her. By the time she remembered, Sui An had already become a cold corpse.

System: Host, follow the script customized by the System. Collect “Good Fortune Qi” and you’ll have a chance to defy fate and change your destiny.

Sui An gritted her teeth: Fine. I’m going to stage a comeback.

And so –

When Tan Yun’s old ailment flared up and she was captured by villains: “The secret manual or your Shizun. Choose one.”

She sneered. Of course I’ll choose the manual!

System: Save the female lead.

Sui An (pained): …I choose my Shizun.

Later, Tan Yun lay motionless, her body covered in frost, with only a faint breath lingering.

She watched on coldly. She won’t die anyway.

System: Please alleviate the female lead’s suffering.

Sui An could only warm her, full of reluctance.

Finally, Sui An injured the male lead. His powerful family stormed her sect, brimming with killing intent, demanding Tan Yun to cripple her cultivation. Among her sect-mates, there was no shortage of those who agreed in order to save their own skins.

Just as she thought her fate had returned to its starting point, Tan Yun unhesitatingly pointed her sword at them: “How about I cripple all of you first!”

Sui An was stunned by Tan Yun’s actions: “System, what kind of script did you customize for me? Why have the female lead and male lead turned against each other?”

System: Ever heard of a yuri script?

Associated Names
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师尊,我这剧本错了(重生)
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Tharkun_The_Third
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June 25, 2025
Status: c21
I just started with this novel and read a bit further with MTL then the current translated chapters.

At the moment I will pause this novel as it has a bit to many flaws for me, which I list below

I just wanted to give at least some more information, as there is no other review so far.

This novel is ok, good concept, with the time travel and system to alternate the original story, but that also comes with a lot of problems. These problems are mostly with the characters and... more>> I have put them into the spoilers. I only have read around 20 chapters so some things are just assumptions but all with more or less evidence and from my past knowledge of novels like this, as I absolutely don't believe this novel strays far away from the typical schema like the original ML is and always was a s*umbag, who only tricks all the women into helping him; All MCs past friends are a**holes and the only trustworthy person is the FL; MC and FL never talk to each other clearly and many more.

The MC is a mostly likeable girl, who gets a system to help her alternate her fate, so that she doesn't have to die again. But now we come to a point that I absolutely can't stand about her.
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She lets a mu*derous demonic beast run free, because it called her friend. I understand, that the author wants to have a possible strong "demon friend" for our MC but there must be a better way than a killer with the mentality of a ret*rded child. At least capture it, reform it, let it realize what it has done, so that it can repent. We have mental asylums for people like that, you just can't let them roam free, so that it doesn't go to the next village when it is hungry. That also leads to the next thing, she helps the killer, but absolutely never even tries to understand her Shizun or even asks, why she shouldn't meet the ML, why isn't she allowed to leave the sect (even before her imprisonment/death). As an outsider it just is to contradictory for me.

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My most liked part so far is probably the system, closely followed by the older alchemy drunkard who seems to be really kind. The system for a change is really helpful, without beeing annoying or intrusive. It is mechanical, but also has always the MC in is "mind" and provides helpful recipes, informations and helps to refine MCs pills.

To describe the FL in short, she is cold.
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in more than one sense. She literally has an illness, that freezes her if she doesn't get a good sip of her alcohol xD

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But jokes aside, she really should talk a bit more to her beloved I guess "future wife?". Spoiling her with food and money is fine but keeping her locked up without telling her why is not a good way to keep a healthy relationship, she isn't a child anymore who can't handle a bit of hardship.

Another problem I have with this novel that a lot of the side characters are in some way suspicious, despite being good friends with the old timeline Sui An. They also always want to say something, tease it but never say it and it so is an annoying instead of well build mystery.

Some examples for their suspicioisness
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Our MC lost her Talisman, that grants her access to basically everything and after the "original books" ML visits her she senses a glimps of that talisman but he doesn't give it back, he should know it is hers, it has some part of her spiritual soul or something like that on it. It also was mentioned, that the person who nearly wiped out a village with a demonic stone lives in a city in the vicinity of MCs sect, where many cultivation families live. Just sounded like the place, where the ML is from.

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A jealous "older brother" from the sect is tempering with MCs alchemy and let her take the full blame for blowing up the alchemist cauldron. He thinks she wants to steal his future position as the head of the alchemy club, or something like that and tries to step on her toes at every possible option, while still being handsome and smiling

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