While the world doesn't necessarily need to be fleshed out in all novels, overall a little too much detail was put in, which can lead to unfulfilled expectations. For example, early on it seemed that there would be some level of conflict between the Emperor and a power hungry family member, but this ended up being resolved offscreen. Another weird bit was how much detail the AI bird companion got at the beginning of the book only to disappear. It ends up feeling like these are plot threads that got dropped midway rather than the book being planned around them not being relevant. The transmigration was also pointless but honestly this is common enough that it doesn't feel weird. The child, however, was handled pretty decently. Children in yuri can often feel like they eat up more screentime than their characters can actually support, but Yunmiao felt appropriately used to interact with the FLs and for other emotionally or logically consistent scenes.

Emotional beats do exist but are handled very smoothly. Appropriate emotional reactions like Shu Yanyan feeling insecure about being able to resume their relationship after the time that had passed and having raised her child alone for that long do take place, but are resolved with love, understanding, and a very supportive royal family and populace. This isn't a mark against the book, since it was clearly always intended to be written in a largely uplifting way.

However, some gripes do exist. While I don't think it's a huge deal, it's amusingly transparent how much Shu Yanyan and Chu Yu's respective rivals only existed for the sake of getting rejected. The store manager also was very transparently just an excuse for a quick face-slapping scene or two, but at least he served to bring together the FLs emotionally. If the rivals were going to be this transparent of plot devices, it would've been nice to at least have the existence of the rivals feel more integrated into the FLs' emotional journey. Chu Yu does at least get jealous and provoked by Shu Yanyan's friend, but Chu Yu's friend basically could've not existed.

A more material gripe I have is that I don't really think the period of time where the two FLs met up but hadn't yet realized that Chu Yu was Shu Yanyan's missing wife was handled as well as it could've been. Not enough detail was given as to why Chu Yu wouldn't connect the dots, and Shu Yanyan's thought process is honestly a bit hard to follow. This feels like a pretty core part of the premise, so it would've been nice for this section to have spent a bit more time developing clear mindsets for the two.

The plot hole was that the alpha basically had amnesia and her memories never came back. The thing that bothered me the most was that even though we found out that the alpha was the missing wife and the other mom of the daughter, the omega accepted her right away. There was no 'but you're a different person now' type of thing. The omega just was like 'its u!! but im going to have a little hard time loving u... but I love you!'. She was just 100% ok with it. I guess I kinda wanted something more like 'I woke up to find I have a child' with the amnesia. But, that just bothered me. And for the plot hole, I guess I wanted her to have her memories back or somewhat have her memories back. She fell in love with the omega love at first sight and after finding out she's actually the mom and past lover of the omega, she also was just 100% down.