The first two chapters were alright until it went downhill. I don't know if it's the translation or the raw that's wrong but the whole conversations feel so stiff it's like I'm reading a Machine TL.

The decisions made by the characters and their thoughts process don't make any sense. The characters spit out personal information to the MC like they've known each other for years. Not even after 10 minutes of knowing each other, this guy suddenly says "oh no, I forgot my date with Cynthia" first of all, okay?... more>> Second, who is Cynthia?

The MC uses abilities that have never been mentioned ever when an entire descriptive list of their abilities were summarized not even a chapter ago. Where, how, what???

The pacing is so fast I genuinely do not understand what's happening. How did I get from entering a carriage to suddenly opening a wine bottle, the hell happened between the two scenes. Did they store wine bottles in carriages??

The translation has its fair share of mistakes too. It might be the fault of the raws but some of the sentences were difficult to understand. <<less