My main issue with the story is that the MC has nothing going for her. Everyone is already infatuated with the OFMC before she shows up. Her looks haven't been praised enough for me to see she's better in that department. She has no background (orphan). All the guys can see right through her attempts. She is getting better at scheming as we go along, I'm so proud 🤧 She is somewhat intelligent but often gets sidetracked because she's thinking dirty thoughts. While she does still get sidetracked her intelligence started shining much more so I'm happy with that. She also has no control over herself, once she gets excited she will start doing crazy things. She still is a little uncontrollable when h*rny but it seems like she's gaining more control, maybe it was because she doesn't have much experience yet...

Her only "advantage" over the OFMC is her body which is extremely attractive since her character's original setting is a seductress type, her character's original ending was because of her body's features. She doesn't even have the stamina to contend with the MLs, she couldn't even last until her first guy finished. Two MLs so far have even thought things like "while I do like x about her she's not a good girl and not a good match." They do not respect her at all so far, they just tolerate her. And her attempts at seduction give off the impression that she's a s*ut but not in a good way because THEY DON'T EVEN LIKE HER. Now while the aforementioned is still true there is the nicer twin and uncle and they respect her. She was making so much progress with the twins' uncle, it was beautiful.

I just don't see how this can be a successful reverse harem if she doesn't have anything that makes her worthy to stand next to one of them, let alone all of them. Even her one advantage didn't seem like one when she first slept with one of them ML. He didn't even seem like he was shocked by how good she was. So for this one the first guy she slept with hardly showed any reaction to her magic little sister BUT the 2nd guy she slept with did. That issue was probably only cuz it was her first time, and the MC noticed that too. So as I read I just feel such secondhand embarrassment. I wish this was more popular so it had reviews I could go through. Or even if it was completed in the raws I could skip ahead and spoil the ending to know if it gets better. If she ends up having some background, amazing, I can keep going. I just need something to make it better like these MLs will see her oh so gorgeous body and not care one bit. There's obviously no logic for them to like the OFMC but she has her Halo, our MC has nothing and it is agonizing to witness. I want to read it but it hurts so bad. If anyone suffers from severe secondhand embarrassment you can probably understand my issue.