Ok, you can read it until the hero start killing people like nothing "it feels like a game" yeah sure, thats bad writing, you are just a psychopath, in this cases the autor can try to explain like they are bad or whatever, but is "like a game" pff.

The writing itself isn't that bad... but the developments and story are all sh1t... I decided to read until MC gets to one of his past comrades, and it wasn't worth it. Everything in this novel is just messily written. To sum it up, the plot armor is obscene, the plot holes are numerous, and every character has the worst and most inconsistent settings, namely, the MC.

The revenge on the girl was also very short, easily achieved, and literal zero sense of fulfillment, especially with how it turned out

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the beastwoman who got betrayed by the others to pay off debts to sell as s*ave, later got ens*aved by hero, and made her soul permanently disconnect with her body as she becomes a literal pet acting on instinct barking. Though it might seem good on a sum, with how it was achieved and developed, not at all.

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And honestly, although the amount of plot holes and armor setups are a big #2 reason on why the novel is tr*sh, I feel like a bigger one, was just how equally light hearted the story was despite all the dark themes. It literally has an heavy focus ntr setup, and the author tries to keep it pg. Him killing someone for first time, as someone said, he literally said "it's just a game" so he feels no anything. And despite obvious references and even outright saying the porter fkd them, there was zero actual r18 nor r13. It's weird the novel stays family friendly in these aspects for all the characters, while equally referencing s*x when it's not the characters. Even the torture was very tame.

I can't suggest this at all. I thought it night be one of those stories you might like if you can look past all the crap, but the amount to do so is just too much, with also no fulfillment for the climaxes <<less

This novel is a complete mess. The writing feels like the author himself got cucked by the girls as he describes their torture by the protagonist in gruesome detail. Example:

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the childhood friend priestess gets her ti*s chopped off and then turned into a lich by the MC and the beastgirl gets mindbroken into being a dog

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While also having the the protagonist brutally mu*der and torture people, everyone in the story still treats the protagonist as some kind benevolent person. It feels very weird as the protagonists morality flip-flops around between being a generic light novel MC and the protagonist from Redo of the Healer. <<less