The Revenge of the Abandoned Daughter of a Prestigious Magic Family

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“Lucia, I don’t know how fortunate I am to have you.”

The strongest magic family in the empire, Rodbell. And the shame of the family hidden beneath that glorious name, the half-blooded Rodbell.

“I am so glad you are my daughter.”

I have endured all kinds of contempt and worked hard only to hear these words. To me, who had craved affection all my life, my father smiled for the first time and said, “With your lowly body, Rodbell will enjoy a golden age for the next hundred years. Be proud.”

A bottomless pit where an evil god is sealed, the Abyssus. In order to maintain their power, they must sacrifice the bloodline of Rodbell there once every hundred years.

‘I can’t die like this.’

I couldn’t let even my death be used and discarded for them. Taking advantage of everyone’s carelessness, at the moment I tried to escape.

‘Good-bye. Pitiful and foolish Lucia.’

I fell into hell with a smile as pure as an angel and malice more vicious than anything else.

[Something interesting has fallen.]

In the endless darkness. A low voice filled with laughter approached like salvation.

“I’ll help you.”

With a sweet proposal that could not be refused.

“How about you drop them into the abyss this time?”

I returned to the past. I was about to leave now that I had achieved everything I wanted.

“I will give Rodbell to you. I will give you anything you want”

Why you. You, who hated me the most.

“So don’t leave, Lucia.”

Why are you clinging to me?

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PhoeDaHoe
PhoeDaHoe
Apr 03, 2025
Status: c101
I'll make my review a simple 4 step process. I'll open with Translation and Writing, then go into the plot and finally the characters.

TRANSLATION

It sucks. It really sucks. Its just MTL but slightly cleaned up.

    • For example, the character "Bansis" would alternate between: "Vansis" "Vadis" "Banhsee" and "Banashi".
Also it just feels clunky to read in English because of the way its structured.

WRITING

The writing style is awful and I don't think its due to the translator. Not only is it lacklustre, it just isn't structured well.

The story, since its a regression, flickers between the 2 timelines consistently, which is good practice. HOWEVER, it does it in the same exact section, so it is confusing which timeline the story is referring to (past or present).

It also does something similar but with character perspectives. It'll swap perspectives suddenly within the same 'section' even though the writer knows to section off when theres a change in location/date.

Theres also a lack of a coherent time-progrssion in the story. Im on chap 100 and I'm confused as to whether a week had psssed or nunerous months due to the way it is written.

PLOT

The story starts off as a typical "I'll get revenge on my abusive family" and I personally enjoy these stories. However...

Spoiler

Its a childcare story. Almost all the family and servants dote on her by chapter 50 onwards (besides the sister [Miracle] because shes the designated bit*h character).

I'm at the point of the story where I think MC will have revenge on ONLY Miracle because these ab*sers suddenly 180'd.

Also the Male Lead is Miracle's prince fiance and the evil god simultaneously (basically the evil god only got semi sealled, and the imperial family are partially the evil god, allowing Aidan the CP to become infatuated with Lucia since she is his other half due to the evil god contract.

Also Lucia is basically the reincarnstion of the first family head, whom had the same name and was inlove with the evil god that looks like Aidan.

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Also Lucia learns spearmanship instead of swordmanship, but after like chapter 30 we never see it again. Instead she gets f*cking knighted by everyone around her since shes SOOO incapable (I'm fine with her being saved, but its EVERY time).

CHARACTERS

They're bland. Like they're generic and uninteresting. Nothing you've never seen before, very tropey.

The only interesting character was Elio (the elder brother) but he got shafted almost immediately.

Marin, the maid, is fun but nothing special.

Conclusion

A child could write better. Don't bother reading this if you're looking for something actually good. This is just a tr*sh-binge kinda story rather than something to become a fan of.
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AnniePoo
AnniePoo
May 16, 2025
Status: c160
Excellent storyline. I don't have any issues with writing quality - in fact in some places it's excellent.

There ere are some parts of the story that are confusing. For example, her relationship with her brothers and ML kinda gets dropped. I'd like to see those relationships developed.

That said, I couldn't put this book down. So despite some storyline transition gaps, I still recommend reading.

... more>> I liked the MC and the relationships between her father ane guard were really compelling.

I want to see more! To the writer: fix the gaps and publish your edits. Then share the rest of Lucia's journey. <<less
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