I quite liked this one. The smut is on point. It's well-written, happened naturally and not forced. There was a bit of angst but it didn't stay. Not enough room for that in this one-shot. Ha! It's a happy ending and I love that.

I appreciate it when horizontal bars, (or ellipses, or asterisks, or the like) are used to signify transition, a timeline shift or a change in POV. I don't mind the frequency this happened for a one-shot like this.

Though, the relationship details between the two leads are... more>> brief, the author actually grounded them and successfully gave them 'realness', personality. They felt like real people. As a personal preference though, I wanted to be even more invested in their love story, to know more about them. But, the point is, they knew so little of each other before they parted, so we also know so little of them. I think, that's a genius move; it conforms to the narrative and theme.

As a one-shot, it's complete and doesn't feel lacking in details. But, of course, if there was more, I'd read that, too! <<less

Well the smut and the yuri were both well done. It's not like the run of the mill webnovel where you wonder just what association the author may have s*x. The relationship though very brief in its elaboration felt very real. Overall I'd say it felt like voyeurism into the life of the two characters. The only downside is that it really needs more.

It's a solid very quick read, 4 stars.

It's bittersweet, a tale of two adult women, and their physical relationship. The bitter thing was about their lives.