Read up to chapter 9, really good so far. The adult stuff is well-written, as is the rest of the story. The MC is originally a shy male in a now female-dominated society that arose from a disaster-of-sorts. MC transposes memories of perhaps an alternate self in our world through a dream and begins to actively take part in the world of women (multiple species and types) around him, all while keeping his more thoughtful and kind original self. Interactions so far are happy for both parties and looks to... more>> remain that way. This is something I very much prefer. Translation is excellent and this promises to be a fun story and enjoyable read. Highly recommended if any of this matched your tastes. <<less

Overall it was an enjoyable read, especially since I tend to devour monster/demi-human girl harem romances like Monster Musume (and MonMusu author's cancelled other work RIP). Its sad it ended as early as it did cause it did feel like the ending was rushed despite the author kind of doing everything they wanted to do.

Personal thoughts on the harem? Quite good, well-balanced and rounded out, though I personally wish the author added a centaur to the mix.

Then there was the constant POV changes that was off putting to read as I had to do mental gymnastics in order make everything line up as it should be. Couple that with pronouns and names being wrong for those who are speaking, or the speaker not being clear in some cases made reading it kinda hard.

Other than that I found it odd (at best) and creepy (at worst) an almost 30 something yr old got together with 2 highschool students and had kids with the, but it is also a different world with different logic and laws.

Last thing to touch on would be the epilogue,

a very good r18 male to female ratio novel, sad part is it ended early, glad the epilouge was a nice conclusion, with the novel including other races, overall a good balance, while short lived its worth the read and will have u wanting more, seeems author may write a follow up but is making new novel a priority

A fairly simple story, where each chapter will pretty quickly jump to the s*x. The plot outside of the synopsis is pretty bare bones, and the characters are all pretty basic (They love the MC, and the MC loves them back).

The closest we come to having more plot is with the 'mystery' of why the MC was reincarnated/isekai'd, and the reasoning for that was so obvious that telling us was just a confirmation of what was already known rather than any plot revaluation. However, such critique is honestly missing the... more>> point of this series - it's smut, not Shakespeare.

So if you're looking for a little bit of a saucy read to get your blood pumping, this will do the trick, but for a bit more pedantic spoilery criticism, read on:

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• The cast list begins to bloat pretty quickly, and some characters feel almost forgotten about for periods of time, especially when they become pregnant. It becomes confusing too because the translations often use the incorrect names or terms, and also the children all have names similar to the parents, making things more confusing.
• Speaking of Pregnancy; given the focus on babies and child rearing, it would have been quite nice to have a chapter or two on the MC spending time only with his children. It does feel like an obvious thing for such a story with such a focus, and yet the children's roles were relegated to nothing but a reason for one woman to hop off the MC (so as to take care of the child) and give the chance for another woman to hop on.
• Speaking of wasted opportunities and characters; there were barely any scenes involving the Snake-lady, and nothing ever happened with the Elf Doctor... despite there being a very clear set-up for a threesome with Demon Doctor, Elf Doctor, and MC.
• Speaking of things that didn't happen; we're constantly told the MC needs to have a woman with him because it'll be dangerous otherwise (because the women are rabid... and h**ny), but nothing of the sort ever happens. Why the set-up without the payoff?
• Speaking of Blue-Balls; we're told MC has magic and magic powers from all the different women he's had s*x with (just roll with it)... but he never does anything with said powers. Outside of guaranteed conception, his magic never does anything. Why not give him the power to magic up a second dong, or make himself even larger, or super strength to overpower his stronger girlfriends, or telekinesis so that he can pick up his lovers with his mind? All these possibilities are left on the table I guess.
• Speaking of things I can't make sense of; We're told in the second last chapter that our MC receives a gift from god (wowie!). We're then never told what said gift was (not-so-wowie!). It could have been something that made him live such a long healthy life, but that could have just as likely been the aforementioned magic
• Speaking of things we're not told; Several characters were around during the time the disease killed all the men, and yet nothing is said of it. It must have been shocking and traumatic, some even lost their previous lover, and yet nothing is said of it. We're even told that that one race in particular caused the epidemic that killed all the men... which race was it? What was the repercussions on them for doing that? WHY WOULD THEY DO THAT!? But these things are never answered, and this seemingly important world building is left to the side.
• Speaking of... well this is getting repetitious...

  Speaking of repetitious things; because of how quick this series is to jump from s*x scene to s*x scene, it does start to wear thin. There's only so many ways to write about the old 'in-and-out' before it become cliche and dull. But hey, at least we got goofy onomatopoeia sounds liek 'glub glub glub' and 'bloop bloop bloop' to add some spice to them.

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