This is a tragedy through and through. Very short story about two people who loved each other, but were both too afraid of ruining their friendship to take it a step further. This results in the protagonist having a relationship with someone else, and then a lot of tragedy in a short amount of text.

Decent, but quite short. You don't get a ton of time to know the characters, which dulls the pain of the tragedy, but it is still enough to empathize with them.

Something for mature readers who can recognize what *not* to imitate. It became a tragedy because of the mistakes committed by both main characters. I don't like either of the characters, but I liked the story. It's like a short lesson on what not to do when you have one-sided feelings for someone.

Edit Octomber 31:

This short story, for me was mediocre, honestly with the ML's undecisiveness, he reaped what he sow. Even the FL I do wonder how she still didn't friendzoned him for like, a lifetime.

Overall, its still ok, but su*cide, like the tag says, is nono. Really... 2 stars.