The MC is not a shou at all, if anything he is only slightly shorter then the ML (or is he? 1.9 meters and still growing. I don't think besides a couple of references to the MC looking up at ML we ever know his exact height.), which I bring up because the author loves to make comparisons to the MC being similar to "a child" or "young boy" instead of a man.

As other readers mentioned, the ML is beyond aggravating in not telling the MC about his pregnancy. It doesn't make any sense to keep it from him, even IF you think he would not want you to continue it. That's a assumption, not facts. Especially considering the MC's family situation.

The antagonist shou is an ahole. He should not have gotten as much screen time as he did, especially considering all the awful things he has done to alphas, betas, etc. He does not deserve the alpha who falls for him, and I was extremely p-ssed off the author spent essentially 3 chapters going from having the antagonist shou fail at the tv shoot, then talk to his brother about assassination of the ML, and THEN, STILL! talk to and get a crush on this random female alpha. Reading this part honestly made me confused about what the author was trying to accomplish. Did the author want to show a bis*xual antagonist? If that's the case, fine. But it felt like queer baiting throughout the rest of the novel.

The MC wakes up at the beginning and after having s-x with the ML, gets the memories of the original MC. The plot only mentions this, and the MC vowing to find the original MC's parents, in the beginning. By chapter 20 this is nowhere in sight.

The MC is physic and used that power in the beginning plenty to fight zombies, but when he gets to the world in the book he mainly tends to use it on weird, random, or in certain cases, disturbing things. One example is the ML.

He used his powers during the first time they had s-x to "fill a gap" the ML had, but didn't again until the ML tricked him, and even then the ML suspected the MC of being a spy. Despite this, the ML still somehow decided to purpose marriage to the MC. The MC's response to this was to, reasonably, make the ML's memories blurry. 🤯 After some kind of BS additional argument, they have s-x again and that's it...?

The author then moves on with the story to refocus on the entertainment industry storyline.

The above example is just one instance of like others have said, plotholes. The issue for me is these are not just plotholes, they are disjointed storylines mashed together into a story parading as a romantic romance of two different people. The author did exactly what Zaimokuza from Teen Romantic Comedy SNAFU, had alot of ideas that just, don't work.

If you want your story to be about the entertainment industry, okay.

If you want your story to be about cooking, and revolutionizing the health of people in the future, okay.

If you want your story to be about Mechas and fighting in outer space, defending people on different planets? Okay.

If you want your story to be about a orphan finding lost family, okay.

If you want your story to be about face slapping antagonist, okay.

If you want your story to be about lying and deception between two lovers for YEARS, okay.

If you want your story to be about royal family drama, okay.

You see how different and disjointed all the above is? Imagine reading this, and most happens in the span of only 30 chapters. This novel only has 87, not including the extras. The author writes action scenes decently, this story would have been much better without including ANY entertainment industry crap.

Last two issues with the novel-

1. Over explaining EVERYTHING. From appearances to things to do with third party talks, it got so out of hand I would skip entire PARAGRAPHS of text to read what the actual conversation was, then re-read the 'flowery' writing. The problem with being a author is wanting to explain what a character is thinking or feeling, but the authors writing came across more as extra padding for word count.
2. The MC, and partly ML. The MC is apparently a cool, collected, but somehow not gloomy guy. He is tough, clever, and also caring. This by itself is not a awful thing. It's sweet to see the MC wanted to take on the final wish of the original owner. It was also sweet he gave additional strength to both the woman who was going to commit su*cide, and the woman who would have most likely died when giving birth. The part that starts to irk me is his treatment of the ML. I do not like his almost r-pe of the ML, and leaving after a short conversation to get medicine without telling the ML. This was a early indicator of who the MC is, someone who is bad at communication and does not care. He literally wanted to ERASE, then BLUR the memories of the ML, with who knows what potential side effects. Another issue is the MC making money. He is amazing at playing this newly released Mecha game, and somehow was able to make hundreds, if not thousands of dollars very quickly by beating enemies and selling the loot. The author not only did not write any of this, (which is often a favorite part if mine in any story), but said it in a throw away line.
3. ML- The ML is very unfortunate to me. Besides having a convoluted and terrible backstory, he was forced against his will to have s-x with the ML. After, he somehow fell in instant love, and wanted to support and nurture the MC. Then he finds out he is pregnant. After it's almost like he became the shou of any other novel. He loves and thinks about the MC all the time, but for some reason cannot just say that. Instead he does one of the only ML things and wants to enter a contract, Pretty Woman style, where he and the MC will be together for 9 months. The ML is also sometimes in deep pain after s-x, but doesn't want to appear weak, so he doesn't tell the MC how bad the pain is. Yet, in a paradoxical fashion, is upset with the MC for, with no other way to describe it, doing him wrong. Never mind the fact the author does not mention if the MC had a preference before hand, or any experience.

TLDR; The MC is the ML. The ML WAS a alpha, but later was seriously injured in a assassination attempt and most likely differentiated into a beta, which in this story can also get pregnant like omegas. The story tries to follow to many genres, leading to a nonsensical story, and storyline. The romance is almost disgusting, with only tiny moments of sweetness overpowered by the looming pregnancy of the ML, and people wanting to kill the ML. The ending is rushed.

My final thought on this novel is disappointment. This would have been better as a fast transmigration story, especially with the length of it. The idea behind a ML getting pregnant instead is groundbreaking, but the author never had the two switch, causing the ML to always be the 'pitiful bottom'.

I wish good luck to anyone who can stomach this story.😑

For example, I got frustrated with Pei Zhaozhou for not telling that he is pregnant. What happened came from misunderstanding that led to more misunderstanding.

Another irritating part is the story of the OG protagonist Bai. It would have been great if he had a redeeming moment with Ying Yao. Since the beginning of the story, OG Bai had already done a lot of bad things so I was hoping for retribution. So when they introduced Ying Yao who could be his possible lover, I got apprehensive. I knew this would not end well.

Another sad frustrating part is when the MC told ML not to drive the mecha but he still did. Obviously bad thing happened so he got into coma, gave birth without MC, and had amnesia.

Worst for me is the royal family. Thankfully, all of them died and had final retribution. It was really maddening how the eldest brother Edward be so gary sue and try to always save his 2nd brother Kyle who is so inexplicably evil. There was no redeeming quality for all of them. Their relationship is so messed up.

They either r*ped him or domestically ab*sed him. But he still had to put up with his white lotus persona because of his family. The family - is freaking evil. Its no wonder that the org!shou grew up so twisted

he actually did get a loving alpha for himself (female alpha) she was caring albeit a bit s*upid and geniunely loved him. Just when I thought the couple could have a happy life together, the lady was killed while the org!shou went into lifetime imprisonment. Why ? Because they killed the abusive gong. They left their baby behind though. I think the person in the last chapter is that baby. I hope the author continues the novel featuring the child reuniting with his father or just write a HE fanfic about this couple

I was so mad that this couple wasn't built with good foundation, the decision was so rushed and this couple could be the redemption of the og!protag, he fell in love with her before her death on being tortured (not by the og!protag) and pregnant with her child

on coma

"died"

the author will kill your favorite characters 🤗

MC is so op that he is literally threatening the whole kingdom and for some reason the common people support him? With no foreshadowing that he had so much power, just that he is from an apocalyptic world? Plot leading to it was forced and illogical, the situation is illogical and it has been like 15 chapters since we had read anything ab the ML.

like the agent who MC swore to take revenge on the EARLIEST PARTS of the novel, but he just casually mentions it and 60+ chapters in, still nothing. Or how he is casually steps in into the entertainment industry, then got a break, next up he's in space. Also with the ghost sister too. Kinda like touching the water, but immediately pulling your hand afterwards.