A very good start but the author drops the ball slightly at parts 4 and 5. Instead of a story it becomes a report of what happened next and this, for me, is one of the most boring ways to write.

It's still worth it as a one shot, it would be interesting to see the story built upon if the author can have a good editor at their side.

The premise of this story was actually quite interesting but unfortunately, it wasn't well used. The plotline felt so bland and so was the romantic relationship between MC and ML. And since MC was a sloth and spent most of her time sleeping, she barely did anything although she indeed provided many insights to her and ML's family that made their families more prominent.