The story, world building, and characters are interesting.

BUT!

It's too verbose!

The verbosity levels are most definitely over 9000!

The novel's actual title is "Verbosity 2: Verbose Strikes Back"!

Every single action, every single line of dialogue, every single plot point, there is a whole paragraph (or two, or three, or fifty) of explanation/MC's thoughts/whatever to come and break the flow of the story. It's almost unbearable...

As far as chapter 23, it has been a slice-of-life story, but as it was getting interesting the series was dropped. There were many mysterious left unresolved, and the plot had not started. Like it was mentioned, the INT links are no longer available.

Interesting story of what it's like to suddenly become the enemy. Hence interesting character development and perception experience.

Great novel, slightly generic in the sense that MC is super powerful and gets reincarnated with all their past knowledge and most of their power. Characters are fairly well written and the grammar of the translation is very good.

My only complaint is that Infinite Novel Translation links for this novel are no longer in existence. Meaning none of the INT links work properly. Sure, it links to the post where the chapters are supposed to be but when you actually go to the chapter, it's not there.

This novel is really good. It is slightly different from those another reincarnated series. MC is good and the translation is pretty good and not much of grammar mistake could be noticed.