Give a try but don't finish(unless you like it)

Give a try but don't finish(unless you like it)
So these have very interesting premises and are occasionally well written, but these humble and hopeful beginnings will sometimes become the sermon of what not to do, for example, use a Mary Sue that must be Asian guy or a over powered woman  or a protagonist who is dull in many regards and is either supposedly weak or overpowered. However I will throw some gunine good ones in the mix and it is up to you to see the quality
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Lanboy
Created: Oct 5th, 2019, Updated: Oct 5th, 2019
Created Oct 5th, 2019
Updated Oct 5th, 2019
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  1. Lanboy
    Lanboy· Author · Oct 5, 2019 04:24 AM

    Let's start with of an incredible piece of work that sadly overstays its dark- later edgy and later pe*verted welcome, dungeon defense. The characters are well done, world building too; however it disappointingly can't create its own identity and decides to use elements of the overused( reincarnation and the like/ another world, characters that are designed to be a bad sheet of paper with good writing on it, in plainer terms they are all terrible people no matter what side, human or demon, while they interact smoothly for the most part. (That may be the author's objective and if it is so forget my second complaint as he makes all the characters splendidly horrible people) All the while the author  cleverly hides this through a blanket of good writing, but once you get to the part about 'golden' showers, it becomes increasingly difficult to read or enjoy its good aspects, without such bizarre and unnecessary choices, this would be a far better, stronger novel.

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