This novel is such a damn shame. If it weren't for all the gimmicks and fourth wall breaking with the names/places it could have been a lot better. But the authors bullshit, especially in the latter half where it seems to just cross a line, kept ruining it for me. ... more>>

The novel is at its best when it's getting you hyped in the middle of battle or during its kingdom-building, and I would love to see a more original take on this novel that takes itself more seriously.  <<less

A good start, with an extremely rushed ending. This is a common theme in web novels but this one is especially bad. It's almost like the author got bored and wanted to quickly wrap it up, or like they didn't have the confidence to do the latter half of the plot justice. ... more>>

Regardless, the journey was still enjoyable and the translation was good (although not perfect). <<less

Would give this novel a 2-3 out of 5, could be 4/5 if the translation was better. In some chapters it is okay and in others it is horrible. I'd read one chapter where the translation was fine and think it was finally getting better, only for it to fall in quality a few chapters later. ... more>>

It was the annoying kind of bad too, not terrible enough to outright drop it but not good enough for me to be able to thoroughly enjoy it. I also have the sneaking suspicion that the editor (if there really was one) wasn't a native English speaker; because many of the issues present could have been easily fixed by any native English speaker working on the novel. 

I'm quite the stickler for good translation quality and the issues with the translation in this novel really hampered my enjoyment, having me on the verge of dropping it multiple times.  <<less