5 Stars! Very well written, a true story of revenge and overcoming. The MC has seen all the people around him disappear or turn their backs, so he is forced to play up his personality, lower his head and move on. Years later, finally gets his revenge and that same day, he reborn.Going back, he decides to correct everything that has happened, save his family and crush those who caused his suffering. But the path is not easy, he will have to use everything learned in his past life, investigate and devise a plan to be able to drag these people while trying to protect his family so that every "accident" of his past does... more>> not happen again.

This book has a very important point, and it is the first time I find it in this type of novels, the trauma of past life does not disappear. When he is reborn, he is haunted by the images of his life, by nightmares and by the incomprehension of how to protect and communicate with this family that he has already lost once.On the romance side, he’s also very well-managed.Both MC and ML have very different personalities but the tranquility and maturity of ML is just what the MC needs, in this life and in the past, becomes its most important point of support and its friendliness. As they get closer, the ML begins to notice the abnormalities in the personality of the MC, giving it support and understanding. When they start to develop feelings and the author describes the exchanges when they play with each other’s hands... that description of the knuckles and how they touch their hands is more detailed and sexy than many kisses I have read. <<less

Between fish tanks and pillows.... more>>

This story was quite a surprise, no red flags, no holes in the plot, funny, pe*verted...

Certainly an essential in the palace dannmei. Personally I would give 4 stars, but would be completely conditioned to the mpreg moment  (I still not a fan) but being objective deserves the 5 stars. <<less

4 Stars Already read

What a shame. Considering the previous books of this author I thought that this would be a win-to-win, however I do not know what I... more>> found more boring, whether nationalist indoctrination or lectures in invented quantum physics. <<less

2 Stars ... more>>

If you want sweetness until your teeth fall out and you don’t care about anything else, then ignore this and go read the novel.

Well, where’s the plot?, where did the IQ of the MC go?, the writer forgot what would be the big plot twist, the mistake in the blind date?

Seriously, it’s just sweet and nothing else, it’s really tedious to see that chapter 10 is as advanced as chapter 20, they get married very quickly but at the level of feeling you really don’t notice that there is any progress. The protagonist seems to be 10 years old instead of 25 and each "conflict" that arises is resolved in one sentence.

Also, please, there is no need to cure blindness to the blind, nor legs to the disabled so that they can be happy. In all the Chinese novels I read where the protagonist or his love interest have some disability, they are miraculously cured and the worst thing is that it seems that this is necessary for the happy ending.

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Si quieres dulzura hasta que te caigan los dientes y no te importa lo demás, entonces ignora esto y ve a leer la novela.

Bien, donde esta la trama?, a donde se fue el coeficiente intelectual del MC?, se olvidó el escritor de lo que sería el gran giro de la trama, el error en la cita a ciegas?

En serio, es solo dulce y nada más, es realmente tedioso ver que el capitulo 10 es tan avanzado como el 20, se casan muy rápido pero a nivel de sentimiento realmente no se nota que hay ningún avance. El protagonista parece que tenga 10 años en lugar de 25 y cada "conflicto" que se presenta se resuelve en una oración.

Además, por favor, no hace falta curar la ceguera al ciego, ni las piernas al invalido para que puedan ser felices. En todas las novelas chinas que leo donde el protagonista o su interés amoroso tienen alguna discapacidad, se curan milagrosamente y lo peor es que parece que esto es necesario para el final feliz. <<less

Of sweetness and English.... more>>

A rather short romance story with very light touches of fantasy.

Both the MC and the ML are the best students and the most handsome of their high school , however, while Lu is rich, popular and cries bitterly to approve English: Bian is poor, antisocial and perfect in all subjects.

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Of beasts and shidis. This novel is really hard to rate.... more>>

The first 60% is a funny and light story, typical of transmigration, but told from the point of view of the "villain", so it creates many questions around the MC. Days and years pass with a seamless relationship between CM and ML.

The further the story goes, the more obvious it is that, although there is a world history (sects, demons...) this is just something that is in the background, like the background of a painting, something that is there so that the real protagonists of the picture are not floating in the nothing but that is only that, something of background that will move in the background letting glimpse, but without gaining prominence. On the contrary, the true weight of the work is sustained by both main characters, it is a story of personal growth.

Towards the end of the book, it focuses increasingly on the relationship of the MC and ML, but not romantically, but on how they relate to each other, as all the obsessions of the MC and the negligence of the ML are reaching them and all that has not been said has deteriorated and spoiled their relationship.

At this point, and in just 2-3 chapters everything becomes very murky, with an uncontrolled and possessive MC that leads the critic of the relationship of both characters causing their irremediable separation.

The balance of history is perhaps your biggest handicap, I understand that sometimes you have to get to the bottom and take space to see the big picture and realize what does not work. However, this does in just no more than 5 chapters of the 82 that the novel has. Creating the feeling for more than 60 chapters that it is a light novel with some mysteries and not what it ends up being, a story of growth and acceptance. <<less

 It is a basic book where the ML is OP in every way and quite possessive; but that’s not the problem. I knew what the book was when I started it, I wanted something fast to read. What I didn’t know is that the translation would make my eyes bleed, I have to guess what’s going on because I don’t understand anything (I have to apologize to the translator in case the original story is this badly written and not a translation problem)... more>>

On the other hand, ML OP and MC (too) adorable and (too) pure. The story is funny but there are arcs where I’m really not sure what’s going on and believe it or not, the ML becomes more and more OP.I said already that ML is OP? <<less

3.5 Stars

3 Stars! Already read

4 STARS!

5★!!

A mobile found, an unknown number and a galaxy union away.... more>>

The plot is original and especially the first arc is interesting. As they can only communicate by phone, the great differences of the society in which they live but inexplicably linked by a future stained by disease, as well as an MC who sees only the good that is in the world and an ML aware of the malice of people.

Now, the problem with this novel is not its characters or its plot, both are great and interesting, not the problem comes in the development and structure. From the beginning you start to notice that there are mismatches in time, in age, something doesn’t add up. As if the author was writing and changing on the fly. The worst thing is that this gets worse at a point where things, important for the plot, happen off-stage and are just a passing mention.Undoubtedly, a book that needs an edition to square, adjust and correct, happens to take out the really story that is underneath.

Thus, derived from the above, the MC does not develop in his personality, and I do not say this because he is a fundamentally good person, but because his way of thinking is the same with 8, 14 or 17 years old (if I have well the ages, because it is one of the less clear things)

Now, reading this won’t make you waste time, especially because it reads very fast (don’t be fooled by the number of chapters) but you’ll have to ignore the fact that there has been no editing or correction to help structure the narrative

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Un móvil encontrado, un número desconocido y una unión de galaxias de distancia.

La trama es original y sobre todo el primer arco es interesante. Como solo pueden comunicarse por teléfono, las grandes diferencias de las sociedad en la que viven pero inexplicablemente enlazados por un futuro teñido por la enfermedad, así como un MC el cual solo ve lo bueno que hay en el mundo y un ML conocedor de la malicia de las personas.

Ahora bien, el problema con esta novela no son sus personajes o su trama, ambos son novedosos e interesantes, no el problema viene en el desarrollo y la estructura. Desde el comienzo empiezas a notar que hay desajustes en el tiempo, la edad, algo no cuadra. Como si el autor estuviese escribiendo y cambiando sobre la marcha. Lo peor es que esto se agrava llegando a un punto donde pasan cosas fuera de escena, importantes para la trama, y son tan solo una mención de pasada.

Sin duda, un libro que necesita de una edición para cuadrar, ajustar y corregir, pasa sacar la historia que realmente hay debajo.

Así, derivado de lo anterior, el MC no tiente desarrollo en en su personalidad, y no lo digo por que sea una persona fundamentalmente buena, si no porque su forma de pensar, acutar... es la misma con 8, 14 o 17 años (si tengo bien las edades, por que es de las cosas menos claras)

Ahora bien, leer esto no te hará perder el tiempo, sobre todo por que se lee muy rápido (que no te engañe el numero de capítulos) pero tendrás que ignorar el hecho de que no ha habido edición ni corrección que ayude a estructurar la narrativa. <<less

A little boring... More than half of the novel and still feels like an introduction to the story

3 STARS A light and funny story, without many twists or anguish.... more>>

No red flags. <<less