It essentially jumped from confession, to first date, and then to 3 days of baby making. Really rushed. However, the buildup to the confession was well paced and phenomenal. Legit makes up for everything.

I also enjoyed how the characters were vulnerable with each other. Seriously, these novels need to stop forcing the MC's to be super mysterious, secretive, and edgy.

This aspect perfectly acted as the Damocles' sword hanging through-out the story especially since some developments that happened would have lead to a negative outcome (which one of the side story showed) luckily the "Protagonist" (designated in story main character) was present and gave the MC a very happy ending.

1. about the MC's day 1 in the new world, I feel like if it really needs to be included it should have been at the earlier chapters since this story explained why the MC thought of people as "dolls". I feel like it ruined the pace of the story when it was added as a side story since the problem was resolved several chapters ago so it gave a "why now" feeling;

2. The after story with the "author/writer" no particular reason other than it was boring. It was also in the middle of such a good slice of life; and

3. The "IF" story or the bad end story where the MC never ceased in seeing people as dolls. It was honestly so hard to read and a major pacing issue considering the previous chapters were soooo sweet.

It would really be interesting to see Irene (MC and Protag' daughter) inevitably discover her parents' past especially her mother's who was an actual underground boss. It would also be fun to see the development the world years from the main story

As another comment mentions, the gender of supporting cast member Ha-Yul is flipped causing some confusion at certain parts. I also found that the TL changes the main character's name with the protagonist 'Arte Isis' becoming 'Arte Iris'. They say in the notes that it was decided because of not wanting to deal with the negative connotations related to the irl terrorist organization, but honestly that's a little unreasonable given that

1. The name Isis exists already as a name of Egyptian origin, entirely detached from the acronym ISIS used by the Jihadists.

2. The name Arte Isis is actually an anagram referencing the Greek prophet Tiresias, who was involved in one of the oldest stories with gender-bend themes.

Changing minor elements of another's work for indecipherable reasons is the job of a localizer, and all localizers should explode!

MC decided to do the deed and went on for 3 days straight after the final battle just ended a few days or so ago and yes they did have a child that early on while the academy setting was still going

AUGHHHH ARTE'S CHILDDDDD 😭😭😭, IRIS DARLING THAT WAS A PERFECT SENTENCE TO SAY TO END THE STORY

with how the MC first like 5min went after being kidnapped to a different world went, its kinda understandable why she sees everything as doll, especially adding on the various things the "author" tweaked about the world itself right in front of her as the story progressed

to sum up, how would you feel if you were walking then suddenly you are in another world, in a different body, almost got rped and sold, some sort of power came out of your body and slices people into minced meat... which then got deleted as if they were never there, all while a voice keep on talking in your head... all in the span of a couple of minutes

the character development are amazing too, towards the later half of the story its peak romance and solidified the ML position as HIM, like bro is such an amazing character oml

The MC has to come to terms with the question of "What is real?" in this world where she was thrown into by the author. With thoughts slowly creeping up her mind that the Author may be able to change everything and anything (including her), she is disconnected from reality.