A Villain’s Will to Survive

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The middle boss of the AAA-class game produced by the company. The villain who dies 999 times out of 1,000 times. Deculein.

That person, was me now.

“You’re going to die on almost every route.”

Deculein, like all villains, inevitably dies.

[First and foremost survival goal: Be what the game requires you to be]

I’ll have to survive even if it means twisting my fate if I am destined to die.

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The Villain Wants to Live
TVWtL
VWL
악당은 살고 싶다
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Dont be a heater
Dont be a heater rated it
September 14, 2021
Status: c79
Dang

this is a big daddy coming into this community this is an absolute boom

big brain MC

... more>> Op but within common sense

still defeat his opponent in one aspect or another and use what he has efficiently

be ready to enjoy a good politics and drama

The MC is a mix between chaotic natural 80% and chaotic Evil 20%

he is a proud gentleman

at the same time he takes what he has and fully understand and maximize its use before trying to lvl up his power and by doing that he could defeat opponent stronger than him by using low lvl skills but still able to learn high lvl skills which means he has a lot of skills to improve so he can definitely reach that op lvl by the end

he is not the most op and he is not an angel nor a devil but a mix of them all

THE ROMANCE IS FANTASTIC WHAT I CAN SAY IS

IT IS A ROSE WITH A LOT OF THORNS NOT THE FMCs BUT THE MC <<less
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The Mighty Snow
The Mighty Snow rated it
September 13, 2021
Status: c81
"Gulp.

The magicians swallowed their saliva at the sudden appearance of this oppressive presence. There was cold sweat on their backs. It was as if tree roots bound their entire lower body.....

“Attention.”

... more>> A single word controlled 150 magicians all at once.

There was one place everyone turned to–

It was towards the Professor in charge of this lecture, who suppressed the situation in a flash.

It was Deculein."

Hello, It's Snow again.

The novel I found this time is called "The Villain wants to Live", where an unambitious graphic designer is transported into the game he and his colleagues were working on. The catch? He's the villain, and prior to his transmigration, his host already has an extensive list of heinous deeds to his name.

... this sounds awfully similar to about a thousand other works, doesn't it? But I implore you, this novel has so much more to offer. For one, the setting is entirely unique: a bizarre mix of medieval and victorian influences, with swords, magic, and towering castles; but also cars, cameras and revolvers. The game-turned-reality also has a curious way of handling npc's, in which key characters are called 'named', and have special AI that governs their actions outside the player's influence. This means that even our MC keeps some of the villain's traits, such as his mysophobia, cold and aloof personality, as well as more than a bit of arrogance. This is a side-effect of the game world and reality blending together, and no other game-like mechanics exist. This isn't one of those novels.

The other 'named' are front-and-center in the story's many conflicts, and most of them have a hostile relationship with Deculein. Also, in contrast to other similar novels, Deculein starts off weaker than most of them. This means that he must do everything in his power to either mend his relationships with them (while still adhering to Deculein's arrogant personality), or to get rid of them in cold blood.

Now, this isn't an action novel. It's also not an adventure novel, though there are some cool set pieces and good world design. Deculein barely fights or travels around, instead spending his days training vigorously and teaching his students at the academy. The main category of this novel is definitely drama, and it spends a lot of time developing and redeveloping the relationships between Deculein and other 'named' characters. The formula for relationships seems to go like this: [character A hates Deculein] --> [character A still hates Deculein, but also admires/pities/respects him] --> [character A has a love-hate relationship with Deculein, but Deculein is unaware/doesn't care]. It's a little formulaic, but the characters are so good that I don't mind at all. And it's not like the novel only focuses on one relationship or conflict at a time — à la TV drama, but manlier.

It's not all drama though, so don't worry. The novel strikes a good balance between it's elements, so you don't get bored of any of them. The building blocks for an arc are as follows: [training like a madman], [acting cool in front of students], [preparing for future events], [solving impeding conflicts], [half-unintentionally clearing death flags]

Oh, and the best part of the novel is of course Deculein himself. If the rest of the story can be described as a turbulent wave of conflicts and drama, then Deculein is the helmsman who doesn't flinch, even when his boat is about to capsize. You won't know how much the main character's point of view affects the tone of the story until you read it. Despite the overwhelming soup of intertwining death noodles, there's no sense of urgency when its read through Deculein's eyes. He is the incarnate of noble dignity, undying grace, and arrogant beauty. He isn't outright evil, but he doesn't hesitate to twist morals when the situation calls for it.

One of his most prominent traits is his noble bearing. His obsessive attention to detail and graceful presence make him the center of attention wherever he goes. Unfortunately, the stares he attracts are either fearful or full of hatred — but that's beside the point. He isn't dazzling like a prince, but rather oppressively noble like a dark lord. Small difference, but used to great effect.

Oh! And while I did say there was little action, there is some; and boy is it good! Deculein is a character with little talent for magic, so instead he goes all-in on perfecting a single discipline: psychokinesis. I've never seen it so heavily utilized before, and I genuinely don't understand why. When Deculein lifts the whole battlefield in the air and slices his opponents in half with his spinny-disks, the scene is so vivid that I get goosebumps! Instead of battles going — [incantation] --> [dodge/shield] --> [opponent's turn], psychokinesis (and most other magic in the novel) utilize the environment, and most importantly distance and location (which are so often forgotten). There are no boring or drawn-out battles in this novel, and I can guarantee that.

I'm not going to get into the plot and other characters because there is so much to talk about, and it'd take a whole day to explain it all, but trust me when I say that the plot is super well though out, and the characters are interesting and feel genuine. The prose is competent and the translation is above-average.

You should give this novel a try if you like what you've heard. I can't narrow my recommendation down to a single demographic, but if you enjoy drama without the sap, and like the victorian-fantasy blend, then this is made for you.

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Whew, that was a long one! I've been coming across some real stinkers recently, so finding a gem in the rough like this one is super satisfying! I didn't mention it in my previous letter, but my mom finally gave me a wooden sword to practice with. I was going to tell you about it once I got a little better, but it's been a month now and I still trip every time I try to swing it. Are swords supposed to be this heavy?

Anyways, I hope you'll keep responding to my letters! Let's meet up to spar sometime.

Sincerely,

your bestest friend Snow. <<less
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CodeAlphaZero
CodeAlphaZero
September 9, 2021
Status: --
I saw the tag "Harem" but knowing Jee Gab Song and his other works, it is one of his trademark to place the protagonist as the focus of attention of beautiful young women so that in the end he chooses only one among them or simply no one. So beware! Average harem enjoyers.

On a more serious note, here are some facts from the wiki on Jee Gab Song:

- he is one of the most popular Web Novels authors in Korea, during the first arc of his previous novel, he was... more>> even ranked first before Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint. However, he is as much appreciated as he is hated within the reader community

- the main reason why Jee Gab Song is so strongly criticized is because of the way he treats his heroines: One of his gimmicks is to create a main character who is both calm and reserved and exudes an aura of confidence around him and then to confront him to the heroines through misunderstandings and conflicts that drag on because of the secretive nature of the MC - hiatus and delays in serialization, despite the fact that he is immensely recognized as an author of Web Novels (he is the first on Munpi to collect such an astronomical number of recommendations on two different works), Jee Gab Song has a bad habit of delaying his publications and falling behind as the story progresses. No seriously, when he argued that he was sick to explain his delays, his readers were so upset that they required his medical certificate to back up his allegation. <<less
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DamnJackson
DamnJackson rated it
September 3, 2021
Status: c67
When it's comes to novel reading, am really picky because I have read a lot of novels so I don't really like seeing the Same genre, scenes and MC acting cliche.

The way the MC carries himself using both the characteristics of both the character he transmigrated into and his own characteristics is one what actually one of what makes this novel interesting.

It basically deviates from the normal transmigration and reincarnation where MC becomes villain. And although it deviates from the norm the novel is still top notch. It definitely is... more>> a must read. <<less
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Qib
Qib rated it
September 2, 2021
Status: c67
I haven't read his previous works but from the reviews of those works, the author seems to always start well in the race then trip and mess up. I am starting to see slight indications of that, however, I can start with the good points from what I have read.

The main character is pretty good so far in the novel. The prologue will explain most of the things you need to know in general. Love is a major part of the body he entered and who he was in Korea.... more>> So it's a major crux of the novel and delivers on some good emotional moments for the main character and others.

The author is pretty good at making characters although the world-building is a bit messy. The main character leaves his general area when a major event takes outside it as such the author list out places he went. But I don't know where this is in opposition to other places. So it is confusing. The enemies aren't explained fully yet which is fine because it's quite early. The world-building is a bit iffy

My major worry is this

The author has too many female characters and not enough male characters to balance it out. Upon recently his assistant has been hinted at and revealed to be special in some sense with recent events. But the numerous amount makes it seem if you aren't male you aren't that special. I am hoping it changes because it seems like he is constantly gaining

Right now I am wondering if this is a harem novel or a romance novel

There is an arranged marriage and then there is a student that seems to have grown an attraction to him. Currently, I am unsure if the author is waiting to age up the characters. The student is either holding parental love/admiration towards him or its just straight up love. I personally like the fiance of protagonis and the tag has slow romance so I am hoping its such.

In essence I am worried

Edit:

I read up offline and if you can take romance drama that makes you scratch your head and wonder where the author is going with this read it. Its good but the author should have just left with one love interest <<less
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Shino Miya
Shino Miya rated it
March 17, 2025
Status: Completed
I was surprised myself to ever completed this novel, I remember reading it in the past but dropped it bcs of the s*upid ch 172 (shuffled paragraph, well I know where to find the right one but I lost interest at that time) till I decided to read it again after it got adapted into manhwa a few weeks ago.

Its a great story, especially the last 30 chapters, so guys keep going and continue! Tho' a pity that MC got many woman who loved him but he's dying in the... more>> end, its not a 3rd rate romance at all you would definitely love it! <<less
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Foxrider
Foxrider
December 25, 2023
Status: Completed
Very good and enjoyable reading. This story has second type of drama which is not some sudden death but long drama which reveal feelings of each character. I love it. Also time based stories were intriguing.
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Midori13298
Midori13298 rated it
October 30, 2023
Status: Completed
This is a really great novel. I 100% recommend reading it. It is my only favourite harem novel. I hate all other harem novel. The ending is not harem though.

I humbly disagree with many reviews of people who haven't read it completely.

This is novel with the theme of one man for one woman eternally. The world building, character development was awesome. Professor had the cold aloof personality but a warm heart that loved only one woman his whole life.

The women in this novel have their own personality. They are not... more>> annoying and pestering like other harem novels. They do not compete for his affection. Rather they all know that he loves only one woman so they respect him. The emperor even said she's not someone who steals other women's man just bcz she likes them. Their personalities were wholesome. Though the women he loves wasn't my favorite at all. Was a bit annoying too cz of all the misunderstandings. But she redeemed herself in the end.

The plot of the novel is pretty heavy and tragic. So if you want some romcom than this is not the novel for you. But those who love this theme will absolutely fall in love with this novel.

If anyone loves this novel they'll love Academy undercover professor too. Though it's not romance oriented at all. The women are a bit annoying but since there's no romance or harem, it's good. Both MCs have similar personalities and academy setting background. <<less
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RedCobra75
RedCobra75 rated it
June 8, 2023
Status: c63
yeah the plot interesting until you encounter the most annoying female side character ever created in novel.

i like the MC because he learning and get stronger slowly & try do not become villain because his setting, but again encounter / reading Epherene story just not fun, every time she appear the story just turn very bad.

s*upid naive girl, I wish she removed permanenly or get red flag by something, if you hate very annoying girl drop this novel. It's just not worth it.

what make me keep reading this novel is... more>> because Sylvia, she is same as you Hating s*upid Naive Girl named Epherene, every time reading Arrogant Epherene Story, you will losing braincells.

just remove NPC called Epherene, kill it off screen if possible. <<less
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Lupinr814
Lupinr814 rated it
March 15, 2023
Status: Completed
Honestly, a novel's extra is better even with the rushed ending. This was extremely good in the beginning then started getting annoying after a while but the ending didn't satisfy the plot.
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How or why was he written into the story.

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. In the end, it's good but left a bad aftertaste. Still a great read though
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ChillyFox
ChillyFox rated it
February 28, 2023
Status: c188
Pretty good story for the most part. Not super original.

Basic guys gets isekaid into a fantasy world and becomes the coolest most super ultra coolest most powerful coolest guy that ever was. Can you tell how cool the MC is? Jokes aside not a bad take on the isekai premise.

Nice that he doesn't go crazy on having a harem but everyone seems to love him so that might change after what I've read.

But to be honest I tend to like isekai like these. The translations dives off a cliff around... more>> chapter 170ish but pick up at after about 188. Good enough for me to keep reading. <<less
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ILast
ILast rated it
February 22, 2023
Status: c362
After reading this novel until the end, I created a account just to say it was awesome, it started pret good, had some downs and I stopped, but after a time I returned and read it until the end, and it was worth, the ending ... more>>
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was a little bittersweet, but was a good ending

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hope you guys enjoy it.

Pt/br

Depois de ler esta novel até o final eu criei esta conta só pra falar o quanto foi incrivel, a historia teve seus altos e baixos e inclusive parei de ler, mas apos um tempo voltei e valeu muito a pena, o final da historia foi
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um pouco amargo, mas foi bom

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, espero que aproveitem. <<less
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rihiki_shiro
rihiki_shiro rated it
January 10, 2023
Status: c264
Great read, binged it in a few days despite the long paragraph for each chapters. I love the MC and the surrounding characters. The plot is amazing and creative, the novel is amusing to read.

I’m quite shocked seeing how many people disliked this novel considering it’s quite popular in other website, I totally recommend it if you like professor MC.
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zaneith
zaneith rated it
December 8, 2022
Status: Completed
Good read. Definitely overall better than the author's 2 previous works. Though there aspects that The Novel's Extra is still superior in. While still enjoyable, the last quarter of the story still leaves much to be desired.

Would have enjoyed it better if only the epilogue's translation wasn't so infuriating. The last 5 chapters literally felt like 10 different translators were translating a single chapter. Names were changed literally every sentence. It felt like the translator was trolling or something. Format changed for some reason with "-" or quotation marks randomly... more>> indicating dialogue. Pronouns were inconsistent and it was very difficult to distinguish any character. Really hope someone else translates the epilogue so at least readers who finish the story wouldn't feel an unnecessary bitter aftertaste.

Majority of my review is just me ranting about the epilogue translation. That's how infuriating it was. Overall recommended to read if you like the genre and if you're looking for something kinda fresh. <<less
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SomethingBetter
SomethingBetter rated it
November 30, 2022
Status: Completed
My first complaint about this would be the translation. Of course, this is no fault of the author so that’s not gonna deduct my score, but I would recommend not reading from circle translations, as it looks like they copy and paste from other sites. There’s not even a next or back button!

Now, on to the characters and the writing. The writing is outstanding, little details and plot points that the author makes memorable; he remembers most of them and does an amazing job wrapping the story up. His use... more>> of (what I like to call) foil characters are amazing. Instead of most novels where they’re solely there to complement and show how much superior the main cast is to other people, these guys are reusable time and sometimes even lead to foreshadowing and clues.

The characters are well written as well. At first, Deculine
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is this character that doesn’t see much growth. His baseline personality is evil. No doubt about it, he is that “young master” trope villain. But when his soul is mixed with Kim Woojin’s, all his best attributes are combined with Woojin’s best. His stern but sometimes kind personality, his psychopathic level of mysophobia, and his soft moments where one soul overtook the other for a moment made this series as fun as it was. If it were any other protagonist, this story would be a 3.5/5 or a 4/5.

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There’s a bunch of other complaints people have on this story.
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One, how every good relationship the main character has all gets ruined. And... yeah, I’m a bit peeved about it too. But, they served as a great way for characters to get character growth. It also showcases how tough his character is, being able to power through all their hatred even knowing he doesn’t deserve it. Two, how s*upid the female cast were. Other than the Epherene, I think the rest were pretty reasonable. Sylvia is this genius wizard who is in love with Deculine but doesn’t know that Deculine mu*dered her mother. It’s a reasonable love/hate struggle within her mind, because she loves Deculine but she also loves her mother. The way it gets resolved is grand, but it felt a bit off for me. The way she forgives just doesn’t feel perfect for me, and I guess it was written that way on purpose. Julie was my favorite to read through, probably because it was the only one without a ambiguous ending. Others complain that she was just like a child, and her older siblings just do all the work for her. But, that’s all explained in the story. She never wanted to be the leader of the Knight Group, she was just forced into it by Deculine. Of course she would be incompetent at the job, and she was still doing a good job. She just wanted to be a guardian knight. The slow paced romance where she starts falling for Deculine turned immense hatred, to her eventual realization, redemption and death made it beautiful to read. However, character-wise, Sophien was my favorite by far, and nobody should call it s*upid (other than it being a bit creepy because it’s technically g*ooming). She doesn’t understand her own emotions because she lives hundreds of years dying over and over again, and lost most feelings other than boredom and hate. Watching her slowly develop emotions and denying them was delightful to watch. Lia was my least favorite heroine because she was never really built up. She’s like this one “important” character that never really became important. Those four are the only I would consider heroines, Allen (Ellie) and Yeriel don’t count because Yeriel is his step-sister and it’s purely sibling love. Allen doesn’t count because after the first 120 chapters, she wasn’t useful for the story anymore. The other characters have reasons for acting as s*upid as they do, but Epherene is truly just a idiot character trope.

My only complaints are the things the author forgot/written out. For example, Drent. After his redemption arc and usefulness to the story ran out, he just disappears. We don’t know what happened to him as the story moved beyond the school to the imperial palace. He just ceases to exist. We never got to know his character, he was just one of the badly used foil character. Then, we should talk about power scaling. It just really doesn’t make sense sometimes. Allen has the power of space, she can teleport and literally split people’s bodies apart. She’s practically unbeatable. Yet she still somehow lose a fight. Deculine rips apart thousands of monsters without break (without the Yukline bloodline buff) but loses to some random altar knight. The knight chasing after his car was probably Syrio or Jogan, but I’m leaning towards Syrio because he was fast enough to catch a “Midas Hand” buffed car. Deculine already analyzed all his moves a arc before Syrio was even revealed to be evil, and he somehow still lost. Deculine one showed enough skill to humiliate Julie, his fiancée and one of the greatest knights in the country. Of course, that was a duel without mana, but his greatest capability is literally being able to analyze everything. We never see Deculine fight for real. It’s either they die instantly, surrender, or Deculine manages to talk them out of it. We never get to see how strong he really is. My biggest complaint is that we never got to see anything about Rohanalk, the concentration camp. The main character built it, spent half a arc sending people there, and then it was never brought up again except once. At least show the readers what Deculine planned for the demon blood. It was supposed to be a scheme where he can protect most of the demon blood from immediate execution, but we never see what’s inside. We get one comedic scene where Ellen is complaining to Carixel in it, and that’s it. My final complaint though, is the beginning and the ending. The author never tells us how they were transported or how the world even existed. I remember one person telling Kim Woojin to look outside, but it’s clear “Rain” was behind it. It’s a question we never get a answer to, and it’s a bit frustrating. Rain was the primordial god, so there’s two possibilities. She was a god that somehow made it to Woojin’s world (by killing themself) and lost a bit of her/his powers but was still creating worlds; or she was a game script writer that has the power to create whole universes.

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Despite my many complaints, it’s still a 5/5 read for me. I never considered it like a harem because Deculine never had a speck of romantic interest in anyone but Julie until Sophien. It wasn’t even real love, he was just considering that he might love her if he really, really tried. Deculine is a who would rather break than bend, and that is proven throughout the story. Other than his souls going through some hiccups while merging, he is forever a constant that won’t change even after hundreds of years. However, it’s not that he doesn’t have a soft and sweet side, just that there’s no-one drawing it out of him. Like how he gets prouder and happier to see Epherene mature and succeed. There has only been one time where his mind has been changed. After sacrificing his noble self for the continent, after being hated the said continent, after clearing up his lies and misdeeds to everyone he loves, after suffering for years, after experiencing death thousands of times, after the love of his life died, finally, The Villain Wants to Live. <<less
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Temp950
Temp950 rated it
November 26, 2022
Status: c25
Im still early in the story but I'm hooked already. Its a very interesting concept, and the MC isn't a total douche like

most korean novels, which is nice. The first two chapters were rather wordy and full of concepts that should have been introduced later once the reader has some investment in the world and characters though. But it is detailed and nice compared to a lot of other novels which are rather lazy with their worldbuilding.

I have to add that the translation is completely broken from 173 onwards.... more>> Its just utter tr*sh, the worst sort of awful MTL you will ever come across. Names vary wildly from sentence to sentence, Julie

becomes Yuri becomes Yulie becomes Julia. Deculien becomes Declane and dicklyn and EPhrene becomes ifrine to iphrine, and the worst part is some of these are names of other characters. Its completely illegible, the sort of thing google translate would spit out, except worse. Its unfortuante but

its just not worth reading after this point. I don't know if it gets better, but seriously you are missing about 20 chapters at least. <<less
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Leinyl
Leinyl rated it
October 13, 2022
Status: Completed
It was a very good read overall. The characters were enjoyable but the action and story wasn't the best since the power level was too vague and involves some complicated concepts (regression, time alterations, separate dimensions, etc.). My thoughts on this would be divided in 4 parts going into the novel.

The first part where the focus is more on the academy was very good with entertaining interaction between the characters (particularly Sylvia and Epherene), though I still enjoyed reading the second part some drama ended up being way too drawn... more>> out and too much that it becomes frustrating to read at times (the parts with Sylvia and Julie in particular), the third part in which most of the character arcs concluded was also very good (my favorite would have to Sophien's) but then the fourth and final part was when it started being ridiculous. It felt like it crammed way too many complicated stuff that made me barely understand what was happening. It also felt way too drawn out for a conclusion that was obvious imo.

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So the end of this is basically the MC tries go all Code Geass ending and become the most evil existence to bring peace or some crap. Unfortunately it was very poorly executed. Then there are the last few chapters that could be considered the Epilogue in which the heroines saved the MC from killing himself by messing with time.

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In addition, it felt like the author is too afraid of making the MC end up with one of the heroines.
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Author pretty much sealed the fate of the three heroines that the MC could see as a romantic interest from being in a relationship with him in the last arc.

Sophien (implied to be loved by the fusion of Deculein and Kim Woojin's personality) died due to interfering with the rules of time/world trying to save MC.

Yoo Ara/Lia (who Kim Woojin loved) is "observed by the world" so she can never interact with MC as the "world" would correct the alteration that MC is currently alive.

Julie (who Deculein loved) who has the feelings of love towards MC has died (at least the one holding these memories), leaving only a younger version of herself with no recollection of all the times spent with MC.

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Though the ending was a bit messy, it did manage to give a proper closure to all the major characters so I'm content with that. It is at least a lot better than the author's previous work that did some major characters dirty, left a lot of loose ends and have characters that were severely underutilized. <<less
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lbt
lbt rated it
February 3, 2022
Status: c251
The story seems much better than in earlier novels by this author. It has an interesting detective setting with many long arcs and good characters.

Alas, those side arcs later become boring and windy, while the characters seem to become more and more sociopathic because of these painful side stories. Rather long side stories, let me tell again. Apparently, all these moments will be lost in time.
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Arie_Fu
Arie_Fu rated it
January 24, 2022
Status: c237
It is an interesting read. I like that the author did not shy away in making weird problem/arc like

... more>>
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locralen arc that deals with time and other time related problem. I wonder how he would resolved it though.

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I like that it is messy, because life is messy and not organized that problem a has to be finished for problem b to start. Though the timeline is not quite clear.

Then what I dont like from this:

1. The very first problem of the novel, is the writing. Author did not elaborate many things that is relevant to the story.

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Kim Woojin's background was not explained at all at the start, we don't know if he was and orphan or have any important relationship beside his ex Yoo Ara. But suddenly at the Yeriel arc it was revealed that he had a sister that passed away so that's why he can consider Yeriel as his sister. There are many instance like this so it seems as the author just write something out of the blue.

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The author omit many important things that make it seem like a mess even if I think the author has all the related information in his head

2. I dont like how the MC which is Kim Woojin is just swept away by Deculein's characteristic. After transmigrating there is not much distinction between Kim Woojin and Deculein and its not because Kim Woojin replace Deculein that Kim Woojin as a character was not mentioned much. It is Kim Woojin that is constrained by Deculein so much that we don't know the original Kim Woojin at all. Kim Woojin did not strugle at all when the body he is inhabiting still act like Deculein. He did not refuse too much when the body love Julie, and many other things. We don't even have a clear point of merging between Kim Woojin and Deculein because we don't know about Kim Woojin at all. I don't think there are many difference if the MC was Deculein from the future that have knowledge of the game instead of Kim Woojin (Except the plot related to modern Earth)

3. This still related to the first point, the writing is lacking. The author use many lines to explain about magic and its theory but did not describe enough about the character and its surrounding. I can't even recognise a character if you put several drawing in front of me because of so little description. The setting needs more description too. I think this would be easier to read if it was a manhwa.

Just a recommendation, I recommend 'tr*sh of the Count's Family' if you're looking for novel with good description that make you feel you are in 'this' world. For this one the manhwa is a bit disappointing in portraying the world, but its still good.

Overall this is a good read with many potential but I will wait for the final chapter to review it again. <<less
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Jgo1020
Jgo1020 rated it
September 26, 2021
Status: c96
I'm drawn to the MC's character and his seemingly logical approach. I also enjoy the MC's struggle to level up. However, I find the perspective of some of the other female characters super annoying (especially Epherene, Sylvia, Yuriel and Julie). At least, the emperor Sophien and Allen are not annoying. There seems to be a potential for a harem to be developed, which is annoying. So far, the harem is not fully developed yet, but once it is, I'll probably reconsider reading more.
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