After Becoming the Protagonist’s Inner Demon

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Xiao Mo accidentally travelled into a book and became the protagonist’s inner demon.

The system actively introduced: “You need to accompany Chu Jinglan as he grow, and then be killed by him at the right time to prove his Dao. After completing the task, you can get a chance to be reborn and survive in the world of cultivation with a new identity. Isn’t it a good deal!”

Unexpectedly, Xiao Mo closed his eyes and lay down after listening: “Got it, won’t do it, he’ll die if he wants to.”

System:? ? ?

Where did the rebellious host come from? It’s different from what was agreed!

Xiao Mo felt that he was very unlucky. Not only was he forced to travel through time, but he also had to be the inner demon of someone he didn’t like and live with him day and night.

That’s right, Xiao Mo didn’t like Chu Jinglan’s character design.

Because in the original book, Chu Jinglan could have taken the script of Long Aotian, a genius who was abolished and then reborn, stepping on mountains and rivers, and sweeping the world with a sword. However, for the sake of a fickle hearthrob shou, he died without body left.

Thinking it was a career-oriented article, but unexpectedly getting splashed with dog blood, Xiao Mo decisively expressed his disdain. He wanted to be passive, indifferent, and have nothing to do with whatever Chu Jinglan did.

He watched coldly as the youth went from being a proud son of heaven to a cripple, watched coldly as his engagement get annulled and humiliated, watched coldly as he was betrayed and abandoned by his own family, watched coldly —— he couldn’t watch anymore!

“Chu Jinglan, can you tolerate this? Revenge back. If you can’t do it, give me your body, I’ll do it!”

Chu Jinglan, who was also fed up with him, wiped off the blood. Looking at the inner demon that was more anxious than him, his expression was complicated and unpredictable: “…I need the inner demon to help me?”

Xiao Mo: Who wants to help you?

But it was this inner demon who “didn’t care” about the life and death of the protagonist, who accompanied Chu Jinglan to rebuild his cultivation, accompanied him ascended to the peak, and accompanied him through the most difficult moments in his life.

Then when he was at the highest, the inner demon died in his arms.

Xiao Mo lay in Chu Jinglan’s arms and vomited blood, thinking that he would stay far away from him after his rebirth.

After his was reborn, before he could hide, Chu Jinglan, who had become an immortal lord, suddenly appeared in front of him.

“Xiao Mo,” Chu Xianzun’s eyes were calm but there’s hint of madness within, “Where do you want to leave me this time?”

Xiao Mo: !

Wait, I have changed my identity, how did you recognize me? ?

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穿成主角的心魔之后
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kyokaiceo
kyokaiceo rated it
June 4, 2025
Status: Completed
It was a wonderful read. At the start I had a difficult time understanding what was happening but I eventually found that the plot was very interesting, it was originally supposed to be just a quick read but it was so good I just had to finish it. It’s not like those transmigration stories who try to be overly comedic or overly emotional it was the perfect balance of seriousness and a few moments of lighthearted scenes. I’ve seen a few other reviews and I can’t say I agree, ... more>>
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The ending was rushed I admit, but the characters did not necessarily become one dimensional. The way Xiao mo left him hurt him so much of course he’d become a sucker for love and go insane, it wasn’t because the author ONLY needed drama but also because of how his trust easily shattered. He planned to spend his life with Xiao mo and never even break through his cultivation but Xiao Mo in a moment of vulnerability took advantage of his trust and killed himself with his hands. Killing your beloved, who has been with you since you became crippled, when your mother died, when everyone has left him- with your hands? Who wouldn’t go insane? But that doesn’t mean Xiao mo is to blame (he had his own reasons.), but how he takes it upon himself to restore his beloved memories as a way of repayment for waiting so long and dying without even telling him shows how much he cares. Xiao mo wanted to show him that he’s back, wanted to show him that he didn’t waste 300 years being insane for nothing. Xiao mo wanted to HEAL Chu jinglan of the trauma he gave him even if it meant wasting another few years. Both protagonists were very good characters till the end.

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Now that I’m thinking about it

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The romance wasn’t necessarily out of nowhere too, the pace could be considered fast but again with their situation it was bound to be paced fast.

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anyway it was so good I loved them both❤️❤️ <<less
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neuramine
neuramine rated it
June 4, 2025
Status: Completed
The first 4/5 of the story is amazing. They communicate and rely on each other. They subvert expectations and tropes in hilarious ways. The last 1/5 is.. Not as great (although there's still a HE). But because the majority of the novel is SO good I still highly recommend it!
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secondthots
secondthots rated it
June 1, 2025
Status: Completed
Your home is not a graveyard... it’s my heart

Screaming, rolling, cursing at the original Heaven’s Will who made my babies suffer

This 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

... more>> I loved reading this novel. It was one that I couldn’t put down. Not that I was excited to find out what would happen but because I KNEW exactly what was coming & I was READY!!! I narrow down these types of melodrama-cultivation novels to two types:

1. It starts off angsty & dogblooded so I know the latter half is gonna be so gratifying.

2. It starts off so sweet that when sh*t hits the fan the pain is gonna hurt so good.

This is the latter & yes, it hurt like a thousand knives.

MC transmigrates to become the inner demon of a powerful cultivator (ML) in a novel. He knows he’s gonna get killed in the end in order for ML to ascend in cultivation. But he also knows that he won’t officially die & that he’ll gain another identity after. ML DOESN’T KNOW THAT. AHHHHHHHHHH

Anyways, I think it’s such a good plot. Classically dogblooded & dramatic, but I appreciated that the author mercifully tied up loose ends. The ending was MORE than I expected. Maybe I’m traumatized by novels that end haphazardly with a “they ended up happy” conclusion. This closed the most of loops & I’m satisfied. Is the writing perfect? No. Did it feel somewhat deus ex machina-ish? Sure. Were the antagonists underwhelming? Yup. Nevertheless, I haven’t enjoyed a novel this much in some time so I’m glad to have picked it up.

No smut, but just immense longing & sadness. THE BEST. Manifesting that my memories be wiped out so I can reread again for the first time. <<less
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Zemmiaphobia
Zemmiaphobia rated it
June 1, 2025
Status: --
The summary is a little misleading, this is not a miscommunication/comedy of errors type plot. Instead, it focuses more on multiple timelines and memory loss. As others have said, the main 2/3rds is pretty good, if a little standard for a cultivation novel, and the final third is a rushed ending tying up loose threads. Towards the end, the author does try to throw some mutual pining in but honestly, it fell kind of flat. Overall, not a terrible novel but not super unique.
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WallEyeKnee
WallEyeKnee rated it
May 29, 2025
Status: Completed
The writing for 2/3 of the story was top notch and I never got bored of reading. Then the last 1/3 was rushed and everything was jumble together, we were introduced to a massive time skip, skipping several plot points which kind annoyed me. Also the tribulation parting wasn't written emotional enough. The author wrote the ml's mother last emotional scenes and the journey after being crippled pretty well

I really want to see there 2 events live not being rebroadcast ed in memories.

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the massacre of Chu Family and the pure shock of them

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The battle at demon realm, ML against them all

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Some stories are strong in the beginning and weak in the end this was kinda one of them.

Overall I really enjoyed this story and I loved both MC and ML alot, the depth of the character, the complexity. Other characters were also written well, Ml's mum, side characters they met on the way but author stop doing that in the last 1/3.

There's humor, emotional, plot points, character developments, written well side characters. Not boring at all. We see both MC and ML protecting each other it's not one sided. We watch emotionless ML slow warm up, we watch MC nonchalantly not caring about anything to slowly develop feelings for this world and Ml. <<less
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nhipnhip
nhipnhip rated it
May 28, 2025
Status: Completed
I liked this novel especially in the beginning. I love a bit of bickering.

The couples dynamic reminds me a lot of wei wuxian and lan zhan (mdzs).

A charming and open protagonist with his stoic and strong ml. Even though I enjoyed mdzs more this story is also good.

The writing style is good and pacing is also okay. However the story dragged on a bit towards the end.

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I like moments of yearning and a bit of tragedy but this novel didn’t make me feel the emotions of the characters enough. I would have preferred a more expressive ML after their reunion. I thought it was a bit rushed how the MC did all the pda. It just felt too forced.

I would loved it more if their romance would develop in a slower pace where they discover and realize their feelings together once more.

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The plot wasn’t bad but the way it ended was a bit disappointing.
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Heavens will was the biggest villain in this story, the one that put them through two lifetimes but it just died out of nothing. I like op characters but this end fight was just disappointing.

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Nevertheless, I like how it started out and I like the overall development of the couple. <<less
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hopokara123
hopokara123 rated it
May 24, 2025
Status: Completed
One word : Incredible. The way the author write it just right. The story pace progression neither too slow or fast. Especially along the way we can see the feelings between the couple slowly growing (ofc they didn't realized anything). The MC and ML is strong in their own way and always support each other. The love between them... so sweet and pure. It makes my heart bleeding from sweetness.

Of course they're not perfect and still have flaws, But instead justified it with some bullsh*t or because bias, they... more>> admit it and working hard to become better. Slowly but surely. Oh and also there is a communication between them. If there is a problem, they will talk it with their partner. (unlike most of other MC & ML cough cough). The character development is top notch.

Besides that, we still have the plot. The plot is not confusing and straight to the point. I really enjoy reading it. Near the end it caught me off guard (again). The interaction with other characters is also good, there is actually a depth in it. <<less
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Justareader12345y
Justareader12345y rated it
May 18, 2025
Status: Completed
Have you ever questioned what love means to you?

It is the tender moments of fleeing glances and kisses?

The warmth and steady assurance accompanying you in your darkest moments

... more>> Or the strong but gently wrapped chains that binds your entire world?

If it's any the above, then this story might just suit you.

The story begins with our MC just freshly transmigrated and still holding vigilance and skeptism about his situation and the system assigned to him.

He initially strived to do as minimum as possible and not bother with the fate of the world or the characters in it.

That didn't last long as he soon realises that he and ML had a strong magnetic force that repelled eachother.

Despite both being geniuses in their own way and had similar train of thoughts, they managed to irritate one another and get into childish skirmishes.

But as fate would have it during tough times they had to rely on eachother to overcome their challenges.

You see MC is an inner demon and as such he is bound by the restrictions placed upon him.

While he can manifest a physical form, he cannot harm any and all living creatures (except for his host ML), unless he possesses a human body.

Despite MC initial reliance to get involve with ML, he slowly changes his mind overtime as he spends time with ML and realises the difficulties and struggles the ML had to endure. But at the same time helpless to change the fate of what was predestined.

When ML became crippled and lost everything, MC accompanied him all throughout the way.

While no longer hostile to eachother, the two still remained awkward and unsure how they should treat eachother as partners (no romance yet)

As both of them grew up in bad conditions, they find themselves unused to receiving kindness from others. Eventually they do overcome this and began to feel more comfortable with one another while caring for eachother at the same time.

In my opinion, I loved how their love for eachother did not seemed forced but was a gradual building of trust and support.

You witness as they bond slowly grows deeper and how they realise their love for one another, wishing to protect the other and share their burdens.

Now is this a perfect novel?

The answer is no. And I don't think I have to cover that as I'm pretty sure many others have probably already covered it or will.

For this review I'm looking at the relationship which the main focus of the novel while also diving into a bit about the characters.

For example MC:

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An interesting protagonist. He's not the overly mischievous type and is mostly serious when required.

But takes most but not all things quite lightly.

He's not a cruel or heartless guy, evident by how he saved a child from drowning before his death.

But he's not overly kind either as he can be ruthless when he wants to be.

Overall a unique protagonist that you don't see often and can't be placed into a defined category

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Now the ML:

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An iceberg on the outside but sweet and considerate to his love ones.

Besides the MC, the first person he cared about the most was his mother. And after her unfortunate demise at the hands of his clansmen, his once untainted heart began to show signs of withering.

He is normally collective and calm but don't let that demeanor fool you. He actually acts quite his age when he meets MC.

I mean the two literally had a childish squiable of what we can define as two kindergarten kids bittering.

I also enjoy how his journey from a guineas to a cripple affected his character arc.

If I could use one word to describe this man it would be "endure"

Unlike most who break under numerous pressures, ML strives in hardships. He constantly pushes himself to the limit and faces his challenges head on.

His achievements are not just because of luck or solely based on his talent, but through the countless battles whether physically or metaphorically he had to endure.

That's what I admire about him as a ML. Despite everything that seems to be at odds against him, he always manages to pull through and outshine others.

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trynaFindthat1story
trynaFindthat1story rated it
May 14, 2025
Status: Completed
I actually enjoyed this. Make sure to read tags too especially if you're into fast paced romance, I didn't realize it would be that slow of romance.

I really liked it when he was an inner demon.

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Oh and the system isn't there for the whole story too. The system leaves before the couple's mutual loves comes into fruition

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Nadnad21
Nadnad21
May 3, 2025
Status: Completed
Really good slow burn. The relationship grows very nicely and satisfying. The main couple is competent but also reasonable. Live how they communicate with each other and how it prevents so much misunderstanding. The story definitely could benefit from more chapters. Some arc feels a little too short for my liking just because I was actually started to get invested in the supporting cast. And purely speaking I do want to see the main couple adventuring in a longer arc.

Worth to read for everyone especially who likes dense MC but... more>> doesn't want any misunderstanding that drags on for too long. <<less
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Tearlesereph
Tearlesereph
May 3, 2025
Status: Completed
I liked this novel. The whole inner demon premise was creative, though after awhile he became a real person and lost the inner demon plotline until it was necessary for him to spy on someone or reconnect with ML after they get teleported. Like he literally takes a nap and falls asleep outside so that whole sea of consciousness stuff at the beginning and building a home there was kind of pointless if he doesn't need to use spiritual energy to manifest physically. I also feel like the author forgot... more>> to flesh out the protagonist and how he affected the seven suitors, it feels like he only really affected the one villain and had nil interactions with any of the others despite one even divining a love tribulation with them. I really wish we saw how that was resolved.

Buuuut, all that aside, I do like their romance. The way they both slowly come to realize their feelings was well done. I really liked that they both acted like brats to each other at the beginning and you really see them slowly mature with the year changes. <<less
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Asphyxia778
Asphyxia778
May 3, 2025
Status: Completed
I read through it in one go! Definitely a good read. The feelings developing between the main characters was amazing because it felt natural and not forced. Really enjoyed their journey. The last separation for 300 years was somewhat unnecessary imo but overall this is a great story. Would have loved more interactions with the kids and side characters but it was a great read.

I'm really thankful to the translator for doing this so well.

Definitely recommend
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AppleIsForYou
AppleIsForYou rated it
April 24, 2025
Status: Completed
I'm completely beyond awe!

I really really really love this novel.

The MC and ML experience both tragedy and success. This story is so lovely I have to pause to read coz I don't want to find another that could not compare or compete to this novel.

... more>> Mind you, MC and ML experience the lowest and climb their way to greatness. I cried. I literally cried 4x because of this novel! That's how I was invested.

It's well written that I thought I catched the twisg but I did not lol.

One is that I thought they were the OG moon couple! The couple that defy race, a demon and an immortal union. But no! I really thought they were but theid story is far beyond I thought! Well I wont spoil or anything. But yeah! I really recommend this one.

Btw. Word of an advice to a person who read 300 novels because of this site. If you are bored while reading 5-10 chapters of the book, it's not meant for you. Moveon. And don't just put a review just because you read few chapters. Moveon to another. You did not divulge with all of the info, so do not be rude to the translators and editors. They put their time and effort to translate and edit. Your due diligence is to read all the chapters and review the content. But do not do it prematurely. I don't even read reviews anymore because I find it mostly bias.

Why did I say this?

Because I don't want it to happen to this novel.

That's all. <<less
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RO NA
RO NA rated it
April 23, 2025
Status: Completed
5 star for the plot.

characters- the MC and ML have a reasonable emotional build up. Not falling in love immediately. Each has their own character developments

Plot- though there are cliche, scenes, and characters like in every novels I read, the overall story still was written great

settings- the settings were all described intricately. Each place held important scenes and value to the story and to the characters
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Amethyst
Amethyst rated it
April 20, 2025
Status: Completed
Lovely story.

The twist after his death as an inner demon was quite a surprise. Really liked that it had that. Gave it quite the change.

Definitely a rereadable story.
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ylial
ylial rated it
March 20, 2025
Status: Completed
I'm wondering why is there a review about farming 😅 yet this is cultivation novel and it has likes.

Anw, this is a Good read! Unlike most detailed cultivation novels with long chapters, this one keeps things focused - MC's helping the ML until he overcomes his tribulation.

Not perfect, but I enjoyed their journey. I also think it is not rushed as the impt scenes are written in a concise manner (but not rushed).

Didn't expect that this is the MC's ... more>>
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fourth life! Reborn for 2x only. 1st - og world of MC, 2nd - cultivation, 3rd - modern world, 4th - cultivation world

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Ruke7
Ruke7 rated it
January 29, 2025
Status: Completed
Loved this when I read it in Chinese MTL, happy there's a translation now. It's the kinda of story I've been looking for where the MC accompanies the ML from when he falls down from his genius status and then slowly makes his comeback as a Long Aotian. Emotional plot is very comfortable for me in terms of pacing and there's no s*upid misunderstandings that lead to dog blood plots. However, there is a plot point later on that did make me cry, but because it's a plot point it... more>> developed the relationship between the MC and ML.
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If I recall correctly the MC finished his task and had to kill himself using the ML's body because his identity as the ML's heart demon would only hinder the ML and him from having his own body. The ML was forced to fall asleep when MC did that so he only knew that MC was gone after waking up but didn't know he killed him :' (and went crazy looking for him. When he came back hundreds of years passed even though it was less than an hour (?) of MC trying to buy everything he can from the system before he returns in a new body and that's what made the ML paranoid when reuniting with MC. But he gets healed by MC so it's all good

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bbyshark
bbyshark
April 30, 2025
Status: Completed
Finally found something I could add to my favourites list. This one really is a gem. I mostly adore the relationship between the ML and MC. They're not falling in love without no reason. It was a good build up of understanding, trust and the accumulation of shared experiences that led to development of feelings for both. I didn't feel it was rushed.
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The timeskip did make it feel a little bizarre at the beginning and it wasn't really fair for the MC and then ML was also about to be the way I absolutely would hate but thankfully it was all resolved well. Phew

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Overall it was a great read and I love this story a lot. Translation was also amazing.
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QuietCherie
QuietCherie rated it
April 28, 2025
Status: Completed
Such a cute story mostly focusing on the MC and ML’s relationship and how they grow their trust, dependence, power and love.

They are both pretty OP but somewhat balanced I suppose. MC gets transmigrated into ML’s inner demon and he can go undetected by everyone so he’s basically the ultimate spy and he also has the ability to materialize but he can’t harm anybody or else he gets punished and can’t be too far from ML and while ML is like a super protege he gets his meridians shattered but... more>> MC possess his body and together they get stuff done.
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Since MC is an inner demon he needs to be killed by ML at one point, he eventually possesses ML or something like that and kills himself that makes the ML super emo after a 300 year period of separation !!! That to the MC was just a half a day due to the evil heavenly law. The rest of the story is just MC healing ML’s heart and killing the demon lord.

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twobada
twobada rated it
April 27, 2025
Status: --
What a gem. The plot, the pacing, the romantic development... everything was so well done.

I really like how their relationship progressed and how they managed to heal the wounds from their trauma. Nothing was too sudden nor were the heavy parts oversimplified. Such a rare setting. They truly matched each other in every way.
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