• Due to unfortunate circumstances, the choices the characters make will appear very very s*upid. The FL is the biggest offender in this, but it should be said that her choices do have reasons, they’re just a bit flaky at times.
• Be prepared for everyone constantly getting hurt XD. That’s what annoyed me most of all. It seemed like every single plot point led to the two main leads getting hurt in some way.
• OH, and while we’re on that topic, also be aware that the ML will be c*ckblocked many (MANY) times.
• CW: There are many triggering scenes here. r*pe, violence, etc. there’s nothing too graphic, but it can still be pretty triggering.

like the OG FL's behavior. She runs away and just travels around with a strange guy that TOUCHES her all over and she's ok with it? And then she's CAUGHT making out with the strange guy by her FIANCÉ and even defends the strange guy but somehow thinks it's not a problem with her fiancé? What? No matter what period of time, who on earth would think it's ok to be caught cheating and not feel apologetic at all?!

the way the whole engagement and marriage with OG FL was dissolved was by letting LYZ crash the wedding and publicly reveal it. but ML didn't just end the engagement earlier even though he knew she cheated and there were already numerous rumors going around that she cheated. And he even 'protected' the OG FL by allowing her in to his property to supposedly protect her from LYZ for his own reputation because he's engaged to her. Huh? Then just end the engagement earlier? Why the hell do they have to almost get married? People around already believed that she cheated? So what's the difference to his family's reputation whether it's revealed that she cheated earlier or later?

the way LYZ was just never caught. Oh cmon. He just came and went as he wanted even though it was alr stated that ML is stronger than him. Even if he's some frigging pugilist he shouldn't be able to COME IN AND OUT OF EVERYWHERE WITH ZERO CONSEQUENCES.

the way chen Tao's actions could result in MC and ML being punished because MC hid her identity to enter the camp. Uh? Wasn't ML the general in charge? How can some random city protector override the general in charge? That's a joke.

the way OG FL and actual FL were just kidnapped ALL THE TIME. Cmon. They were just kidnapped left right and centre. Just stop. They sleep and boom they get kidnapped.

the way FL keeps tripping and falling. Like girl are your legs broken? How do you fall and trip so damn often?!

there's the obvious s*umbags like OG FL, SY, DYY, YY that slept around with everyone and used or blamed everyone else.

then there's the rapist LYZ that forced himself on OG FL but somehow made himself seem like a victim.

then the unobvious s*umbags like SJY, FL and LK. SJY somehow beautified the fact that his best friend's concubine that he barely knew confessed her love for him? Seriously? She wasn't even a single lady she's literally a concubine that belongs to his best friend? And then he fell for the concubine and made those emotions super obvious both to FL and ML. And LK was the same hanging around FL and making his feelings for her super obvious even though he knows she has a partner. And finally FL fricking sleeping with a grown ass man because he has the mentality of a child. What? Who the hell would sleep with a random grown ass stranger even if he has the mental capacity of a child?! And also how she hung around with the two guy she KNEW had feelings for her.

especially LYZ. He r*ped OG FL repeatedly and made it a really awful experience for her, but boohoo he really loved her... why doesn't she love little rapist him. So sad... so heart breaking. And he just got off scot free even though he repeatedly broke the law and attacked MC and ML.

MC goes into the battlefield and met another transmigrator who was her enemy back in her other world. They used their wits and bits of knowledge that they have from the real world and blah blah blah it got boring just reading about warfare. It gets old real fast for me.

When she fell in love with the second male lead, those times were the worst. Well... together with the original female lead who was s*upid as shit. No jokes.

In my opinion, it feels like the ML was the one who given a 2nd chance in rewriting his love story that he deserved better when he had toxic relationship and being cat-and-mouse with the flight Ms. Lin on the original book.

MC is the best girl for him who is unproblematic and loyal compared to Ms. Lin who got parade of boyfriends. In this, he is happier and got more stable relationship.

First, I don't mind the whole part where they talk a lot about her beauty, neither do I mind that she's like a fragile glass vase and falls over and gets sick all the time and she later uses that to her advantage. The talking cactus is okay too. The parasites by that villain made me like "ok you're on thin ice for deus ex machina". But the one I really don't like is the whole black flower wish plant where it makes everyone faint around her. They could have used some other method like handwave some secret guards into knocking out everyone around her or some cool deus ex machina. The blood-sucking flower plant just felt s*upid.

The whole thing with the emperor and also the other transmigrated woman really came out of left view. I understand the author had to like settle everything: her husband, her past, her future so she needed foils for that, but it just felt like very cheap. Honestly it felt a bit of a drag to read this at like chapter 110 ~ 200 and I was speed reading. I think honestly if I do reread it, I'll reread the earlier parts cuz the misunderstandings between her and the male lead were really funny and cute romance. But like a lot of deus ex machina later on is very eeeee. It felt like she as a woman was kinda weak and had to rely on magical things when it came to dealing with like the jianghu and the wars etc unlike in the beginning where she could handle the household politics by herself. Well, I mean yeah her character is just a concubine with some intelligence and it's not a book heavy on politics and military so I guess her going around outsmarting people wouldn't be that up the alley. It still felt disappointing.

I'd say the highlight of the book (for me) is really how her husband pamper her and how she manages to make a family in the world she transmigrated in. The funny misunderstandings also help.

FL true identity and background, her arch nemesis from previous world and their long debts due, in depth understanding of ML thought of her origin and also they stressed so many times the possibility of her returning to real world with the doctors numerous time finding her breath gone yet didn't says to ML and when ML also found out of this, she still come back to life once again but sadly until the end no clear reasoning of this behaviour as well as the author seems prone to leave it as it is.. Even though it repeatedly being mentioned like it had a big secret plot but pooff non; her consciousness drifting to original world also lack reasoning, her coworker, her real family makes VERY short appearance but no proper introduction or connection. And, her real body! What happen to it then after long years? When Su Yun dead body found in the hotel, who is the guy found dead with her on the same bed? It got mentioned but no proper explanation.

1. The conflict of her unwilling to change resident to Apricot Pavilion because she needs to be in the same place as she came in order to go back. However, before this she desperately want to move into Song house for safety and avoiding death of original body. For concubine, once you change household how can you have easy access Winter Court anymore? Then, she indeed change resident to Apricot easily and had no problem sneaking out to Winter on the day of Ghost Festival. Well, this conflict true purpose might be to show ML tolerant for his woman and their relationship development where they had first martial quarrel, but it the way it is written is not too well.

2. The relation of her and cactus, Huo'er. Huo'er is indeed her biggest cheat. However, it remains mystery why she had this ability. Is this her original cactus that brought her into the novel, or the cactus power is one of original FL cheat prepared by the plot god but unexpectedly snatched by her. This makes me feel more and more frustrated as Huo'er keep being more powerful but until the end it remains unknown.

3. ML got antidote-for-poison-blood right? Why in earlier chapter when YunZheng poisoned BXX, Long Heng didn't cure her with his blood? Is it because his feeling still shallow so this secret and intimate act of giving blood (exchange fluid lol) is contradicting his suspicious character?

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