Four of the main five streamers from the OG's introduction have long gone obsolete after a while.

The livestream itself had netizens' comments which made the story even more draggy as most of the time the MC and ML were nowhere to be found or even treated as side characters.

The game felt like a Deus Ex Machina where just by entering it, their illness is cured. There are no drawbacks, mentions or even developments of the said disorder as they played. Thus, it just gets treated as if it meant nothing and the readers don't feel the weight of said illness.

Even outside of the gaming realm, there is not a single build up of how bad the disorder is aside from one or two mentions. (Eg. The director's bad temper and the fox's destruction of MC's house.)

The worst part of it all how the Author treated MC's worry of ML not working. It is a normal concern for someone who IS AN ADMIRAL, but the ML brushed it off with, "his soldiers are more into the game atm and he is being treated as an afterthought."

This just further makes the whole fear of the disorder look even more trivial an Admiral's presence is not equivalent to the game's capabilities (which mind you, only had a few soldiers inside at that point)

A character mentions his concerns about his health (because of the disorder) and came across a study about the dangers of alcohol.

A group of military women (suffering from the same disorder) proceeds to attempt their Wine sales pitch on him but got rejected and lectured about the dangers of excessive drinking.

These women then chose to not sell their wine to all the Military personnel because of this one man's refusal and caused him to get beaten up IRL by everyone.

You had a character who finally had thoughts about the disorder -despite all points saying he was healing- and decided to treat it as a gag moment. Even used it as a lecture for readers that Alcohol has health benefits, when the guy just didn't want to drink it.

The Mc's background was interesting as actually being from the interstellar but getting self imposed amnesia before going through a worm hole to another world, and I liked the slight difference in his personality before and after the reveal but I found myself having to get used to it a little.

I found myself making a headcannon regarding why it took the interstellar people till now to find out that only farming themselves gives crops taste. The answer can be found in the main characters identity as a farming god specifically, and the fact that everyone who successfully grew crops with taste were confirmed to worship him in a sense. I think that the interstellar people didn't have a god of their own and therefore didn't have the mysterious power that is referred to several times in the story. This is why the main character couldn't just learn about farming in another world but had to become a god before he came back. Of coursethats just my theory and not something that is explicitly said in the story.