Synopsis:

ML: I was originally going to abandon my sister, but decided to train her instead.

ML: Now Everything is for Liana and if it’s not I’ll execute it for being corrupt. Here are the jewels I make for being op and smart because I’m so smart. I has the money all for Liana everything is for Liana because I trained her to be perfect so she is perfect.

FL: yes, brother. 🤖 Author giving away titles to ML: Now you’re a Count even though you’re the dukes heir, but ask me after you... more>> give the Queen a jewel and BAM! Now you’re a Marquis and the Barons under you are now Dukes, so you must be a higher rank because you work so hard.

TL team: *facepalm*

If you think THIS was confusing and hard to read, check out the OG. It’s all dialogue with no other information. Legit, JUST DIALOGUE. <<less

Okay. Here’s what I think about the novel: it’s confusing as heck. It sounded so choppy that even my first self made novel looked like a masterpiece (and that was when I was eleven years old). It’s also confusing because there is no way to differentiate on whether the sentence you are reading is either MC speaking to his sister or his thoughts. There is also little to no description on what activities they were doing, the characters physical descriptions and even the environment/background they are in.

To put it bluntly,... more>> it is a zero rated sham. I made a mistake when putting the star rating thing and it won’t let me change it. 😢😢 <<less

Not awful and it is readable (only read if you are between novels or not in the mood for anything more complex), there are issues the chief of which being how short the chapters are and how quickly the story progresses from plot point to plot point.

Seriously this is like a skeleton of a story or more like a hastily written diary, which probably explains why the characters and world feel paper-thin.