The biggest problem is the author. He took a common plot line and made it horrible. The problem is the author seems pretty young and inexperienced with life. He tries to create child characters of 3 and 5 years of age and I think he has never interacted with children of those ages. Additionally, he writes about characters in a medieval on the brink of destruction and his ideas that “change the world” and bring him fame glory is kids toys and spices. There are a couple of unexpected plot... more>> lines that show potential but are horribly executed. It feels like the wish fulfillment world created by a middle school aged author. I gave it my standard 50 chapters, and I just can’t go on. I am normally completely fine with wish fulfillment as I read for fun after stressful days, but this author was so bad at character creation and basic psychology of both children and adults it just ruins it. First 1 star I’ve ever given without atrocious translation. <<less

It's unbelievable how many inconsistencies there are in the story and how big the plot holes are. It feels like the author suffers from pathological memory lapses. And it is not even worth trying to find logic in the actions of the characters in the story.

I really like this. It's fuuny and I love many character in this story. It has many s*upid common sense or so but I let it pass considered that this is another world. I think people in that world are smart from childhood more that our world? Because not only MC there are princesses and his friend, those same age as him, act like they are older than their age.

Well, as I read novel so far this kind of [ratio 1:99 or so of men:women] novels are hard to fit... more>> logic or common sense in it. So if you want to try this novel maybe you need to try turn off you brain lol and if it's not you cup of tea just find a new one 😁 <<less