So first when the bio-father learns that her ability is luck and tries to get her back into the family. At one point in the story he sends people to kidnap her who were apparently strong enough to knock out her guards and she was only saved because Kenna happened to be there. Now, this issue alone has the major issue of absolutely nothing came from it. At the very least we should of gotten something like a report that the investigation came up with nothing and that she has more guards posted around her but it was instantly dropped like getting attacked didn't matter (Probably because the author wasn't planning on having it happen again they forgot how people would react to this occurrence) but my big issue with this was at a later point in time her father meets with her in public and due to the eyes watching them (Since they are in public) she went with him to a private location. This is one of the major problems with this series, this author isn't creating a realistic environment. The female lead continues to go out in public alone, walk at night, ect. despite the fact that we have been shown that violence and crime exists in this world. At this point in the story she fully knows her father is a piece of shit, she knows that he sent people after her, yet she decides to go to a private location with him (If I remember correctly it was a cafe) to talk. This man has already shown how low he can go so why aren't you assuming he might spike your drink and take you while pretending to take care of you... I think the issue is since the author knows that he wants "Meet in public -> He blackmails her -> She hates him more" they forget about how unrealistic and s*upid it is to interact with such a person... There are a lot of events in this story where the world building is just subpar because the author is making it work for whatever plot line they work rather than making their plotline work with the world building. An example off the top of my head is how her bio-brothers essentially forcibly broke into their house and wouldn't leave when requested and yet the entirety of punishment for this event was the bio-father having to apologize... There should be a lot bigger ramifications even if its just something like public opinion of those two being extremely negative...

Now this leads to my second big issue with this book which continues with what I was saying before, the world building is inconsistent. Kenna's family was framed for raising an army in secret and as a result everyone except for her were killed... Kenna herself if caught would be severely punished if not executed (The author never really goes into what the punishment is but due to Kenna's immense grudge against bio-father and how she isn't living with them after exile I think its safe to infer that they have been executed) and this is where a major plot hole is created in my opinion. The crime of raising an army against the emperor is a complete execution for the family yet when it gets released that the bio-father framed a long standing and loyal family for this crime the only punishment he receives is an exile with his family... The imbalance between the punishments is completely unreal and the part that really pisses me off is how the author plays it off as if this exile solved all of the problems... There are a lot of dark undertones in this story like kenna's family yet the author seems to hesitate to actually put these into words... The fact that kenna is suppose to be satisfied with this shitty punishment is just unrealistic, her grudge as we have seen is very deep... she would track him down after he left the country and kill him with her own hands or ruin everything and make him starve to death. It just overall feels like the author is trying to paint a happy world while accidently adding undertones like ab*se and execution into the story since they are coinvent for the plot at the time. I'm very big on world building and consistency so while this is honestly very minor thing when reading its something that makes me dislike the story so I am biased but it feels to me like sloppy writing... The author subconsciously has a double standard... raising an army and forging an empirical verdict based on this timeline should result in the same punishment, execution. In order to maintain power rulers will shut down all forms of rebellion, the reason why they wouldn't be exiled is because that isn't a bad enough punishment... People might hesitate to forge an order that would benefit them if their entire family along with themselves would be executed for it but a simple exile would make these people prepare if they did get exiled and then commit the crime. In this case it would be an even harsher punishment due to the lose of a loyal family with a lot of history, its just an unrealistic punishment in terms of world building just because the author doesn't want the bio-family to be executed, they wanted it to be them suffering on a farm in another country... I went on a bit of a tangent but my overall point is the world building feels inconsistent and forced, its unnatural and changes based on the whims of the author... Things like how there is basically no difference between aristocrats and commoners except for one rules over territory (Book doesn't get into specifics) but there is plenty of interaction of elle making jewelry or female lead selling cookies yet then the author adds the line diana said about how she would execute kenna (Who she believed to be a commoner) for speaking back to her... The rules and design of the world are not consistent and while it doesn't change much with the main story itself this is just something I really hate when authors mess up. Thanks for coming to my ted talk.

... some parts feel forced in a way that I can only describe as just feeling bad to read. I don mean this as in the writing being bad, I mean it as the situation being painful to witness if that makes sense. the main one for me is levion because his point of view is shown and you can see he isn really bad, more like inaction to a fault. I think it would be better if his character was committed more to either good or bad (subjectively ofc) so that it would feel better to like or dislike him. as it stands, he didn wan to end the engagement. their relationship further falling apart because of a misunderstanding caused by diana would have been fine. if he didn ask why "leticia sent diana to wish him luck as she wouldn be there and why she was there giving a golden band to another guy" and she didn deny it. the worst part is when he shows up at enoch's house to get leticia. the story acts as though he is in the wrong for looking for and going to get his fiance (who he cares about) who is staying in another guy's house....

Her power is rather terrifying if you think about it. She suggests different things to people for them to try (it's implied she did it with her siblings as well as her then-fiance) and it resulted in them figuring out their ability. She even healed her mother and adopted mother which allowed them to have more children.

There is also the incident where she wishes it would rain in the ML's territory so it does (coincidentally, this is kind of the turning point for her to believe in her ability).

That being said, she would have made a great super villain.

Third kid loses his smarts, fourth kid loses his swordsmanship and the fifth kid loses her ability to do magic.

All while the second kid still runs around believing she's the best thing since sliced bread. Considering her power is only to shower flower petals around (I laughed) but she's always believed she's the lucky charm of the family. Once things go south, she's pretty much just treated like how the MC was treated and reacts by praying to god for them to remove her sibling's powers.

Also, the father's ability was hilarious. He grows weeds.

The King's attempt at forcing the MC to marry his son ended up in stereotypical fashion. Misfortune fell on his palace because she was unhappy about his attempts at setting them up together. She was also completely unaware that she was causing the misfortune as it avoided her. The misfortune? A horde of rats. They went away as soon as the King apologized to her and then promised her a gift when she married the ML.

bc something good happens to the Asters couple, but might be super dangerous if they are any older than their 40s