BTW, among the LNs I've read so far, this has the most romantic proposal I'd ever seen. I'm doing my best not to scream when ML took MC out of the window and made some ice road or something at the sky to propose. It was well described I could imagine the scene.

What is this qingtian pill? Did the ML always have it or did he carry it from his first life? Did it always have a consciousness of its own? Why did it choose to fly into MC's mouth? Did it always want a body? Was this all answered in the novel and my mtl'd brain just didn't pick it up?

What the f*ck is up with their age difference in reality. Now that they're adults I know they're in their late 20s/early 30s which made things awesome. It explained why they were so responsible when it came to leading the city and why they were so decisive when they realized they liked each other.

But reality Beitian admitted that he fell in love with MuMu when he was 18 and MuMu was 12??!!!

I had assumed they were close in age since they were childhood friends and was wondering why he was initially going to marry Mumu's sister if Beitian was much younger than her. But boy, this is kinda ruined it for me.

He isn't afraid to kill people and has no humanity towards them because he believes them as characters in a book until he met the male lead who looks like his childhood friend. He did not kill and instead took his time and made his situation worse. I stayed for a while because I wanted to see if he had some back bone but he did not and I was getting tired of him acting like a spoiled kid, which is in-line with his character, since everyone spoils him.

He does not even realised its Mu Yifan until the phone incident!! He literally is your worst nightmare and killer and you have worked with him in the army for so long how could you not atleast remember his outline and body shape like you're so easily fooled with a few bandages on his face! And Mu Yifan didn't even bother trying to change his voice much, he got lazy and you turned off your IQ and think its so unlike the OG Mu Yifan to be acting dumb like bruh how are you not vigilant??

The only thing that's holding the ML back from killing the villain is the pleas of his uncle and the MC's father.

The sister of MC and ML CONSPIRED together. The truth was, the sister only had a crush on the ML when they were younger. The ML thought that since the MC doesn't go that way, there would be no way for them to be together. Why do you ask? Well, the MC was so adamant that he liked this girl who was his next-door neighbor and was kind of close to her (but truth be told, she was only close to the MC because she got the hots for the ML). So, the s*upid ML thought "if I can't be his husband, then I'll his brother-in-law so that I can still look after him and still have a reason to be close to him" s*upid, I know. But the sister told him that she has a boyfriend already and insisted that the MC does indeed have feelings for the ML, so they decided to test the MC's feelings for the ML which was not a f*cking good idea because he nearly killed himself. 🤦‍♀️ So, to sum this all up: No, the MC did not seduce his sister's fiancé, and no, the ML and the sister are not in a romantic relationship at all and sees each other only as a family, so there wasn't any cheating involved. Got that?

the shou MC was not fully dependant on the OP ML. He was OP on his own as the Zombie King with the copying and nullification abilities.

1.) There's this friend of Mu Yifan's Zhuang Zi Yue, who was infected by zombie virus when Mu Yifan accidentally scratched him. At the time MC already knew he was infective but instead of warning him/ teaching him what to do and how to control himself and stay sane instead of turning into a brain-dead brain-eater, he brushed it off with a couple of apologies... The poor guy later turned into a zombie, was not able to control himself, lost consciousness and ATE HIS MOTHER & FATHER in addition to another friend's mother, who worked for their family!! Like WTF man! You could've easily helped your friend. I know he was "supposed to" turn into a zombie and become one of orgMuYifan's closest subordinates but you could've easily offset the trauma of killing and eating his own parents for him💔 I really can't blame him for wanting MC to suffer.

2.) MC's lack of sense of danger... Like bro you wrote the freakin novel. Oh! Forget your friend wanting you dead and that btch RongXue running around draining blood and eating kids... There's the looming threat called Zhan Nan Tian. Or rather orgMuYifan in his body. You know what will happen if a zombie King is born. You know the orgMuYifan's soul is in Zhan Nan Tian's body. You know his power is above yours pre apocalypse. You know once a zombie King is born all low levels (including yourself) would be forced to obey him. You know he wants to kill your lover and probably everyone related to him. You can probably guess that he might try control and use you against him... But still the MC would rather spend his time rolling around romancing with his bf than cultivate frantically to achieve the King status before his enemy. Like what??🤦🏻‍♂️ I'm not against you feeding the readers and other characters enough dogfood to cause indigestion but I really can't understand how you don't put survival and safety before s*x and recreation??

And on that note- how can one casually engage in se*ual activities with ones lover before getting a highly infective deadly virus under control?? Earlier experience prove that it's easy to get scratched by mistake but still I never saw any mention of MC being tied up each time they roll in the bed 🌝

3.) The instance of mass zombie burning lead to the 'black rain' that invigorates zombies, cause animals, plants, insects and even fishes to mutate and upgrade their levels... Both the reborn ML and author/transmigrator MC knew of this. But neither tried putting a stop to it when they're both heirs to two of the most powerful families in the post apocalyptic world. At first I thought it's cause the rain was what caused people to 'awaken' as power users... but later on it's evident that it was unnecessary. Any life death situation can bring out the "potential" and cause select people to become power users. And In an apocalyptic world I doubt that danger is hard to come by. The loses sustained from sudden power ups from zombies and emergence of mutated beings far outweigh the gains from a small number of people awakening powers. And I wonder how many more turned into zombies outside their camp because they didn't know about not going out into the rain..

4.) I understand that there needs to be some "stories don't need full marks on logic"while reading novels, but this novel takes it way too far. Like-

A.) How the MC never cared about how big his stomach got while being 'pregnant' with the bead. It was really big and noticeable (and concerning) but our MC really just believed that it is 'flatulence' for nearly a hundred chapters months🤦🏻‍♂️ (despite knowing he swallowed the MLs'magical bead🌝)

B.) Mu Qing Tian's time travel- the kid traveled 3m into the past to stop MC from starting the anti-zombie drugs cause he collapsed due to 'sudden' aggravation of bone cancer into terminal stage (from the first stage that was 'frozen' indefinitely when he became a zombie.). But MC refused and the reason given is if he (MQT) change the past he will not be okay. And depending on whether the situation is serious or not he may turn back to beads and wake up after a hundred years of sleep Or might disappear from the world.... It sounds as if MQT will have to pay the price of changing "fate" as a whole. And in a timeline he did, apparently MC was killed after being struck by "heavenly lightning"...😑In a novel filled with multiple reincarnated individuals, transmigrator, soul swappers and a timeline/'fate'of characters that's not concurrent with that written out in the 'Novel', this sounds like absolute bs.. I feel like the author just didn't have any idea on how to get his (MYF's) soul back to the original world. They tried to make this a very touching moment extolling the MC's paternal love and sacrificial will but it was so frustratingly illogical that I couldn't even squeeze out a single tear...🙄

5. Sometimes the jokes popped up a bit too "randomly". Do people really joke around in between life death situations where there are people aiming for their lives?

6.) I'm disappointed in the ML... or rather the author who turned a supposedly smart, calm and ruthless to the enemy dude into a half-assed fluff scatterer who leaves all his enemies enough and more time and opportunities to gain adequate power and resources.

7.) It was told at beginning that spring water can cure any human illness (except the virus) Then how did Yi Fan's bone cancer recur and spread after soaking in it and drinking it multiple times? Shouldn't it have 'healed'??

Because MC unexpectedly dies in the alternate world. It is a very realistic portrayal of the process of dying from illness as well as the impact of unexpected loss on ones' friends and family. Most novels will brush this off in one or two paragraphs but here it is fairly detailed.

Some of the characters lament that it wasn't supposed to happen like that, that MC and ML were supposed to get married, and that they didn't have time to apologize to MC and resolve their differences, and well... that's life. Even though I'd spoiled myself ahead of time, I still teared up because it was very emotional.

How did their first son become so omniscient and powerful? What happened to their second son?

The No. 1 Zombie's Wife is the ML!! I love it when authors don't obsess over who's on top/bottom and make the bottom the "girl" and call them the ML's "wife" (it happens 99% of the time).

The MC is very pro-active in the relationship and works just as hard as the ML.

There is an overall feeling of trying to achieve peace at the end of the world. It's not about killing all the enemies or "war" against all zombies, but a genuine goal of redemption.

Some of the infrastructure stuff was scattered around and didn't get as much development. For example, they passed out water to the super poor sector of the city during summer, but it didn't get developed any further to become more efficient civilian supports or to start a household census and regulate food/water/warmth (like during winter, none of the fire users were called to prevent people from freezing to death).

Another example is how there was an evacuation route during the zombie siege, but nobody informed civilians about the evacuation plan until there were literally zombies running through the streets (pretty unrealistic). Typically if there are evacuation plans in place, a government would control both simultaneously so there would be ability users/trained military defend the frontline WHILE other personnel evacuate civilians from the back. Not to mention, evacuation routes would definitely be practiced ahead of time to prevent panic and disorder during emergency.

And a couple more places like that where the author dropped the ball.

Rong mama did NOT cheat on her ex-husband. Both daughters were born from her and her ex-husband, but he wanted custody of both daughters. Rong mama did not think he would treat their daughters well esp. With remarriage, BUT she was only awarded custody of one daughter. Therefore, in order to guarantee of good treatment of their 2nd daughter (custody awarded to the ex-husband), Rong mama traded in all her shares of the company.

But their 2nd daughter grew up knowing that her step-mom was not her real mom, so she resented her biological mom never visiting (not knowing that her biological mom was not allowed to visit her). And that's what caused the whole issue between the two sisters.