Incarnates can be made into constellations by accumulating "stories, " whatever that really means. It makes sense at first, because myths like the Monkey King are powerful because of how well known they are. However, the more you think about it, the less is makes sense in the context of the story. It's not too hard to get past that though, what really killed it for me was when characters started getting healed with "story packs." Even incarnates, who should be flesh and blood, get patched up with "story packs."

MC needs to get Changsin station, but it's been occupied by Tyrant King, MC needs to either get the Tyrants flag or go to Tyrants main base and put his flag in the flaghole.

Jerk Yoo breaks through the roof and drops down on Tyrant and kills him, then MC runs towards Tyrants corpse and picks up Tyrants items but not the flag which would imply that Jerk got the flag but why not the items?, all the while Jerk Yoo is running towards MC, see the problem?

next MC is not allowed to enter Last Kings challenge because MC doesn't have the Changsin station, but then he gets Changsin station flaghole and puts the flag into it this accomplishing the requirement, except that's not how it works, only main base flaghole counts so he needed to put the flag into Tyrants main base flaghole but Tyrants flag was taken by Jerk which means that even if Tyrants main base was Changsin then it would have changed to Jerks main base, if Jerks main base was Changsin then Jerk would lose his King qualification and be kicked out of the Kings free-for-all battle, see the huge problem?

Jerk Yoo was not kicked out so that means he didn't pick up the Tyrants flag but then why did MC not pick the flag while picking Tyrants other items, wtf is with this convoluted bs plot? Everything would be fine if MC took the flag but noo, then all that bs "oh no! What do we do now?" and then that bs "clever" way to get the Changsin flaghole is all just tr*sh bs padding.

it was stated long ago that Changsin station was taken over by Tyrant so getting Changsin flaghole wouldn't work, the conclusion that might work is that after a king dies and no one picks their flag then their territory becomes free but it was never stated that such a thing was possible because it was explained in a way that contradicts this possibility.

some people managed to enter the station and enter the movie theatre even though the station was blocked so no one could leave or enter the place.

basically MC world and Jerk Yoo novel world are being merged into one, kinda hard to write so simply people from MC world are looking at novel world as fake but novel world people cannot accept that, but MC world people are being turned into novel world people, and MC doesn't understand that possibility, like jeez your name is Dokja which translates to Reader, what a damn coincidence eh, is it hard to believe that MC is just a character in another novel, but MC cannot accept it just like those novel world people cannot accept it.

I was also somewhat annoyed The scribe of heaven who is so cunning and crafty and the best planner made an insane plan with huge risks without any steps towards ameliorating said risks, such as preparing beforehand the weapon against the dragon of the end. I’m pretty sure that was a thing, I dropped this like a month ago.

The end of the novel is GEUFUUDJUTG ARGHHHHH I. I don't like the endings which are basically. "Imagine your own end, cos we're lazy so. Yeah. Think for yourself and all jazz" LIKE, NO, WE KNOW FOR SURE WHAT HAPPENED

dokja for sure gets reformed, but the rest is simply. Not written

and so the countless readers are now dreaming about the continuation of their own happy end

eeeh I think I finally stopped grieving the ending so. Happy thoughts happy thoughts!! *Gets depressed and shuts down*

also the prologue is basically the end.

"A web novel platform filled the screen of my old smartphone. I scrolled down and then up again. How many times have I been doing this?

“Really? This is the end?”

I looked again, and the ‘complete’ was unmistakable.

The story was over."

AND THAT'S US

[THATSUSTHATSUSTHATSUS]

circle is complete

I finished reading like two hours ago I'm still high

AND DOKJA DID IN FACT PAID FOR THE EPILOGUE DIDN'T HE

FUUUUUUU-