For instance, when his butler Kania discovers his secret, I thought that they will take a lot of time or never reveal it to the MC but surprisingly, it doesn't take long for him to notice it.

I never like unprompted long-time skips I'm okay with a week time skip but MC was a potato for 3 months because of the system penalty

suicidal psychopath with how many times he's dies or gets close calls.

emperor, mc's father and hmm 🤔 demon that use space magic?Damir Khan? And First Hero

while I like it how saintness and Ruby's story turns out. + Clana and Irana feels weak to the plot most times... But still Serena and Kania was done well with their personalities. (Serena by far my favorite heroine) she's really deserves her title as a smartest.

MC is weak Will or emotionaly weak because he really kind person who will apologize just because he accidently insult a girl who hurt him.

For the story

MC live on this planet, controlled by some massive evil Alien final boss. Even God of this world cant do anything cause this OP alien.

Just for OP alien entertainment the goddess and her sister have to become enemy with choose a Hero and demon lord.

Hero the MC have to hiding his identity and have to become false evil, every person who know he is Hero and have to kill demon lord. His lifespan have to cut, meanwhile demon lord have to become kill MC and become false Good person.

From this our MC Will have unfair fight.

The Plot twist is MC and demon lord are childhold sweet heart and all people have brainwashed.

Actually MC already live so long cause he have to make sure everything alright until he kill his sweetheart demon lord with power turn back time.

he really tired and after kill his sweetheart he get killed by his other sweetheart and that make his heart broken and make wish his soul Disappear from the world and yes Walla gone.

After everything know MC Hero and saved the world ITS was disaster come.

Initially I didn't want to make this comment, but now I can't take it anymore. The author is deliberately picking on Roswyn. At first, I was a little annoyed by her obnoxious behavior, but I thought that once she used her assistance system, she'd be fine. But for a while now I don't understand why the author is trying so hard to make her miserable. Already after the third trial, all the sub-heroines started to develop a certain interest in Frey, but strangely enough, for some reason she's the only one who's kept her hateful nature, and she, like the others, should have had memories of the trial. Then, when she finally becomes aware of and accesses the system, she is literally robbed of her ability to Glare (even if the system finds her more capable, they could have shared it), she is now demoted to the rank of spectator and her reason for living is no more. If the character has become obsolete, we might as well not mention her anymore and forget her, but no, the author wants to show us how miserable she is (I'm sure that since the author couldn't make Frey suffer any longer, he simply fell back on Ros).

I have gotten so into reading that seeing Frey suffer because of the game system and the imprudence of some girls from the main harem, has made me scream with frustration and almost make me cry, such a noble and martyred character doesn't deserve to suffer like this, and I agreed with Frey, Dark Tale Fantasy 2 is such a shitty game.

There's 2 type of girls in this story: the main heroines and the sub heroines. The main heroines have every right to be angry with Frey, and I understand why they act that way (except for Serena, who is the only one who really loves him and is devoted to him from the beginning), but after thier redemption arc, is where they show how cute and kind they can be. The author plays his cards very well here, since it's not known in what point of the story the feeling of guilt becomes to something affective until it reaches the romantic, as long my boi is happy with Kania, Irina, Clana, Ferloche and Serena, I'm also happy too.

I didn't understand the introduction of the sub-heroines, but after the horrible way they treated Frey (especially Roswyn), and that "event", I agreed that Frey should distance himself from them, but the Frey's nobility goes first than his mission to finish that game. They're cute in their own way, and they have their redemption arc so it's okay.

it is revealed that the demon lord also has a system which is opposite to the Mc's. The demon lord has to make false good actions in order to gain false good points. So the MC and the demon lord are on the same boat when it comes to hiding their actions